sexy commander

[jaykar]

Hi friends
This is a semirealistic character i was working on. She is Tasha and she is the commander in charge for a space trip. She is completely modelled in Max 4.2, textured in photoshop and rigged and animated in max 4.2 with CS.
I would definetly like to hear ur comments on this work of mine.
Thanks in advance.
Jaykar
www.jayring.com

[jaykar]

Hi friends
I had one more image of Tasha, which i wanted to share with u.
Cheers
Jaykar

[iVo]

I really love her face, very nice.
But I see too much difference in details 'n stuff comparing her face to the rest of her body. Maybe work on that a little(?)

further, nice model!

[nightwing]

Jaykar this is very cool.

Stuff I like: I too like her face, particularly the lips....nice job on accentuating details with the shader. Hair is cool, are the white parts of the braid just white hair or some sort of headpiece her hair is woven around? Good proportions, and your rigging job looks good.

Stuff I'm not sure about: The body tattoo....I like the design but the edges are too clean and defined....unless she had it done a few days before it'd not be quite so uniform and "perfect" on her skin, if you know what I mean. Her breasts are also a bit gravity-defiant...if you're going for realism perhaps make em more pear-shaped and weight them more.

The fact that she is naked (if you discount the tattoo).....she's commander of a space mission, is anyone going to take her seriously without any clothes on? My suggestion is give her some dignity and create a cool outfit for her, that accentuates her body but is also functional...I can't imagine she'd be V comfy doing a spacewalk or warding off an alien attack like that :)

Another thing occurred to me, and you might already have plans to do something like this, but I'll mention it anyway. One of the concept artists on Episode1 and 2 said that Lucas had an idea to have padme sport tattoos, which would morph and billow out into various costumes. On her body she'd have a tattoo for formal occasions, less formal etc, and she'd activate the appropriate tattoo at the right time. Or something like that. Might be really cool to experiment with?

Edit: Forgot to mention, the cockpit details are awesome.

V nice work

[Aliens]

what can i say?......awesome! i wish ....one day i could make stuff like that. Post more! a wireframe?

[Incitatus]

No one else finds it silly to have a nude woman with breasts the size and shape of watermellons commanding a space ship? :roll:

[Supervlieg]

Hey I'm sure women with breasts like watermellons are able to command a space ship when properly educated. With the proper schooling, they could probably be doing it naked if they so wished.
If they would actually choose to do such a thing is an entirely different matter.

b.t.w. Nice image Jaykar. But I think you should loose the balloons on the babe and make 'em more natural. I think I would heighten the overall quality and believability of the picture.

[jaykar]

Hi Friends
Hey guyz .. her breast sizes are not in my hands... though i agree they are on one extreme. This is the character for a UK based company. This is a sci-fi kind of stuff and after we finished the pre-prod they approved thecharacters and Tasha comes without sooo volumptious.. ha haa. Well her tattoo is such that when ever she is angry it morphs into a metal armour... I am actually figuring out hoe to work around to get this effect.
Well thanks a lot for ur replies..
Cheers
Jaykar