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wil_13
18-03-2008, 06:20 AM
this is my first post in 3Dtotal

wil_13
18-03-2008, 06:25 AM
this is my matte painting.. take me abt 5 days.. still working with it.. please C&C.. thanks :)

Krystal
18-03-2008, 07:46 AM
The whole painting is beautiful there is no doubt about that. I only have one real issue and I think it was intentional. The tree on the right looks a little too big to be believable. Also it would be nice if there was a little more discernible detail in the foreground area. I understand that it is in a dark area but maybe if you could place the details in but lower the saturation dramatically that would make it more clear as to what is going on without losing the effect. Overall a really nice scene with good use of perspective.

wil_13
28-03-2008, 04:24 PM
sorry for the late reply.. Thank alots to Krstal. i will improve my matte painting and post my updates asap..

wil_13
30-03-2008, 02:18 PM
intial stage

wil_13
30-03-2008, 02:24 PM
it look brighter from my LCD moniter.. but it look darker from normal flat moniter.. i think i may brighter the image.. please let me know if it is too dark..

krayzgerman
04-04-2008, 11:20 PM
You have lots of destruction going on which is quite nice, but when I look at its seems too calm for some reason. Maybe the vegetation gives off a feeling of tranquility... anyway I wouldn't get rid of the trees or plants it fits your matte nicely. Maybe adding soldiers fighting or something shooting or even corpses or animals hunting or fire(s), some dramatic element to make the image stand out more panicky, but what you have here looks great, a little too blurry though. Were you working with low res images?

RQuack
05-04-2008, 05:24 AM
wil - Nice work! I agree with Krystal though still, I think you need something in the foreground that doesn't have the fuzz or haze over it to give it more depth. :haha:

wil_13
13-04-2008, 10:07 PM
krayzgerman- yes.. i use low res pic.. hardly to find a better pic..

RQuack- thanks for the comments.. I have darker the plant in the foreground.. hopefully it show the depth now..

here is my final