Scene: Alien Outpost Unrest

[dandavis]

Thanks for looking.

dano


https://home.insightbb.com/~dandavis18/wsb/media/315305/site1004.jpg

[(o)ne]

Well, I think it's very good. From modelling to render. :) Hope to see you new projects soon.

[dandavis]

Thanks.

[Downup]

yeh this is a great scene

[dandavis]

Thanks again!

[tinitus]

A+

[Trevorn]

This looks great Dan. The textures on the buildings and rocks are really nice. I might add a slight displacement map to the ground plane. It seems a little too flat.

[richcase]

that is a very good image well done:D

[zoo-prod]

Very nice, i like the design.
Maybe you could do better for the lighting. The shadows could me more smooth.

Anyway, good work.

[Synner]

I like it, it's very StarWars in a comicey way! Great work! :ufo:

[dDesign]

Looks great, i like it. Great work.
Look forword to see more of your work.

[Rinne]

Cool :)

[dandavis]

Whoa, thanks guys, I thought this thread was long dead and I come back a week later and look what I was missing. Thanks again, new scene on the way. -- dano

[fabrizzzio]

hey dandavis!
Looks good.
I think you can achieve a better look workin' more in lighting. That's because I think that the GI of the scene is extremely powerful. It looks like a artificial light, and doesn't like the light from a star, in a planet.

Maybe a fog effect for generate athmospheric perspective could give more deep to the scene.

Just my point of view.
Think about it.

Anyway, It looks good!

[sneaky_d]

It's a nice image - a couple of things:

The lighting is a little overwhelming; this would be a better scene if you consider hte lighting a little more :D

The distressing on the buildings seems a little large - the scratches and marks are the same size on the massive buildings as they are on the tallest robot.

The ground betrays it's origins as a flat plane a little too much; I'd go with Trevorn's advice and add a displacement map to that :D

sneaky_d