SpaceGraveyard - incremation

[wil_13]

SpaceGraveyard - incremation

[wil_13]

planet incremation.. i think my matte painting is off topic.. any way please C&C

[DaddyDoom]

Great colors and composition! Love it.

DD

[wil_13]

- DaddyDoom- Thank you! :)

[Nocturn8]

wow:drool:

[wil_13]

now.. i'm trying to fix the stars at the BG.. hopefully it will give more depth to the picture..

[DJdude]

that is awesome.

[wil_13]

-DJdude- Thank you! :)

[wil_13]

here are some of my updates.. I feel very struck now, need some comments.. please C&C

[eyecon]

Hye dude are you done with this image? you might want to post the final one here : http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=58906

If would be a shame if you did not make it...

[chubu]

hey man
i think maybe i know whats bothring you in your image:
i think there are too many little stars in the foreground and too few in the BG.
i think you should reduce somthing like 70% of the stars in the foreground because
the light is very bright in the front, so we shouldnt see so many stars in the forground.
its only my opinion, hope it helps :)
and BTW, its an amazing job. nice!
did you use 3d elements?

[wil_13]

-eyecon- HI :) I have done finally..
-Chubu- Thanks alot.. I think it look better.. Only the debris are 3d elements, most are photo elements.. i have scaled down the size of the stars..

Here is my final..
Please feel free to comment..

[Rafalf]

Hello :)
very nice concept, I really like it but maybe if you reduced some objects in the foreground particularly on the left part, it would give us better look on whole image, because now when I`m looking on it my eyes concentrate on each object . I hope you understand what i mean :) hehe

You should do something with it :)

[wil_13]

-Rafalf- Thanks ALot :) I will reduce it.. I will take away the aircraft on the left hand side and scale the objects smaller to make it less obvious.. :)