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BiG ToE-3DT
07-10-2008, 04:14 PM
DUE DATE: October 12th, 11:59 pm GMT - SUNDAY
Time Extension DATE with a 5 point reduction: October 15th 11:59pm GMT

Final Images:

Required In The Final Post (1 post per entry):

- 1 x Winning pose shot. This image can only have "One" pose of your character. No multiple shots or different angles. Just one! (Recommend image size – 1000pixels by 1000pixels)

- 1 x Beauty shot of your character. Feel free to put multiple angles of your character or just one big version or your character on this page. Even better, try to composite a nice art piece similar to the ones in the Winners' Gallery. Be careful how you do this though, simple is often better. It’s up to you. (Recommend image size – 1000pixels by 1000pixels)


- 1 x wireframe shot of your character. Feel free to put multiple wireframe shots or just one big wire frame shot on this page. It is up to you. Must have polycount included. (Recommend image size – 1000pixels by 1000pixels)


- 1 x texture sheet that includes all your used sheets squeezed into "one" sheet. (Recommend image size – 1000pixels by 1000pixels)


- Concept Sheet (Only if you have a concept) (Recommend image size – 1000pixels by 1000pixels)



Everyone who enters must vote, or your entry will be disqualified


DUE DATE: October 12th, 11:59 pm GMT - SUNDAY
Time Extension DATE with a 5 point reduction: October 15th 11:59pm GMT
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setschaos
09-10-2008, 04:30 PM
Good luck Everyone! I'm looking forward to seeing all the great entries!

BiG ToE-3DT
12-10-2008, 01:41 AM
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g129/DJBiGToE/winning-8.jpg
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g129/DJBiGToE/beauty-9.jpg
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g129/DJBiGToE/wirescopy.jpg
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g129/DJBiGToE/textures-12.jpg

vicban3d
12-10-2008, 10:11 AM
Good luck to all of you who are struggling to finnish on time.

razwan
12-10-2008, 02:28 PM
done.....:wall:

Novian
12-10-2008, 06:38 PM
Final Entry : The "Robo Chick"

http://www.mentallic.com/LPC25/FinalChick1.jpg
http://www.mentallic.com/LPC25/FinalChick2.jpg
http://www.mentallic.com/LPC25/FinalChick3.jpg
http://www.mentallic.com/LPC25/FinalChick4.jpg

Cheers~

InProgress
12-10-2008, 09:30 PM
Final Entry: iBORG

Vincent
12-10-2008, 10:09 PM
Here's my final entry, good luck to those who are finishing!
http://skatecoreeeee.free.fr/images/Characters/winning.jpg
http://skatecoreeeee.free.fr/images/Characters/Beauty.jpg
http://skatecoreeeee.free.fr/images/Characters/Construction.jpg
http://skatecoreeeee.free.fr/images/Characters/Textures.jpg

Martin_x
12-10-2008, 11:49 PM
I guess I'm almost an hour late(
Hope it's ok though

Dunric
13-10-2008, 12:00 AM
I can't late after all those things . Tens of maya's crashes , night texture painting and hours of rigging issues . :dunno:

BiG ToE-3DT
13-10-2008, 12:00 AM
...The Slow Poke Time Extension starts Here...
Anything posted from here on gets a 5 point reduction
due date is: October 15th 11:59pm GMT

Joseph Pomeisl
13-10-2008, 03:01 AM
Concet/Wires/Texture/Beauty/Multipose

FrZnChAoS
13-10-2008, 03:23 AM
Good job everybody. Heres my entry.

arillious alyas
13-10-2008, 06:10 AM
Geeze I'm Pissed!:wall: didn't get a chance to post till now..... workin all damn day:grr:

any who... i dub thee VANDER VADER. I see some nice entry's guys

poopipe
14-10-2008, 10:45 PM
Woop!

that was a bit tight... hence the unrefined nature.

I'd almost go as far as to say it's not strictly finished :)

Darchand
15-10-2008, 07:54 AM
Great entries every one finally got mine I hope you like.

camaleonhell
15-10-2008, 03:17 PM
well i finish its no good but i try :) good luck to all i use 1 side coz alot of stuff in 1 map :)

final pose
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/1674/pose1robotbk4.jpg

Wire
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/1479/robot2wiredi0.jpg[/URL]

polys
http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/1930/screenmaxsj7.jpg

texture map
http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/2512/texturarobot2xo4.jpg

Texture
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/8415/texturarobotcz5.jpg

Agent-X
15-10-2008, 09:55 PM
http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r125/extremecreations2001/Robot.jpg
http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r125/extremecreations2001/Dino.jpg
http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r125/extremecreations2001/Wireframe1.jpg
http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r125/extremecreations2001/Wireframe2.jpg
http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r125/extremecreations2001/TexturesComposite.jpg

Rogue One
15-10-2008, 10:55 PM
Murray Sinclair
Low Poly Competition 25
Submission

Missed the poly count on , so added a maya screen grab :wall:

gnome
15-10-2008, 11:54 PM
not much to say here.... baked AO gave bad results (you can see the black spots all over the place) and I didn't have time and patience to fix them all....

Good luck folks, I'm going to sleep. :D

Calcuttason
16-10-2008, 12:02 AM
Great Job Everyone!

BiG ToE-3DT
16-10-2008, 12:06 AM
-----Times Up, Start Your Voting-----


First Place-

Member Name:

presentation (0-10)
Model (0-10)
Textures (0-10)

Total points-

Second Place-

Member Name:

presentation (0-10)
Model (0-10)
Textures (0-10)

Total points-

Third Place-

Member Name:

presentation (0-10)
Model (0-10)
Textures (0-10)

Total points-
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Calcuttason
16-10-2008, 12:41 AM
First Place-

Member Name:arillious alyas

presentation (4)
Model (9)
Textures (5)

Total points-18

Second Place-

Member Name:Vincent

presentation (4)
Model (8)
Textures (8)

Total points-20

Third Place-

Member Name:BiG ToE-3DT

presentation (8)
Model (8)
Textures (7)

Total points-23

arillious alyas
16-10-2008, 01:13 AM
First Place-

Member Name:BiG ToE-3DT

presentation (10)
Model (9)
Textures (7)

Total points-26

Second Place-

Member Name:Calcuttason

presentation (10)
Model (9)
Textures (6)

Total points-25

Third Place-

Member Name:Poopie
presentation (8)
Model (7)
Textures (9)

Total points-24

Rogue One
16-10-2008, 01:17 AM
First Place-

Member Name: poopipe

presentation (9-10)
Model (9-10)
Textures (8-10)

Total points-26

Second Place-

Member Name:Calcuttason

presentation (8-10)
Model 8-10)
Textures (8-10)

Total points-24

Third Place-arillious alyas

Member Name:

presentation (6-10)
Model (9-10)
Textures (7-10)

Total points- 22

Novian
16-10-2008, 01:36 AM
First Place-

Member Name: Calcuttason

presentation (8-10)
Model (9-10)
Textures (9-10)

Total points-26

Well done~!

Second Place-

Member Name: poopie

presentation (9-10)
Model (7-10)
Textures (8-10)

Total points- 24

Third Place-

Member Name: InProgress

presentation (8-10)
Model (8-10)
Textures (7-10)

Total points- 23

Martin_x
16-10-2008, 02:23 AM
First Place-

Member Name:Calcuttason

presentation (9-10)
Model (9-10)
Textures (8-10)

Total points- 26

Second Place-

Member Name:arillious alyas

presentation (9-10)
Model (7-10)
Textures (7-10)

Total points- 23

Third Place-

Member Name: BiG ToE-3DT

presentation (7-10)
Model (7-10)
Textures (8-10)

Total points- 22

Darchand
16-10-2008, 02:30 AM
First Place-

Member Name: BiG ToE-3DT

presentation (8)
Model (9)
Textures (7)

Total points- 24

Second Place-

Member Name: arillious alyas

presentation (6)
Model (8)
Textures (8)

Total points- 22

Third Place-

Member Name: poopipe

presentation (7)
Model (8)
Textures (6)

Total points- 21

L3XICON
16-10-2008, 08:42 AM
some truly awesome entries for this one guys! kinda glad I didnt have time to finish my entry and then get humiliated by you all :P

so my votes..

1st: Poopipe

presentation: 9
model: 8
textures: 8
- your work is always disturbing and compelling in equal measures man. really love this creation. everything works for me. from the initial design, the colour choices and texturing, to the final pose. great work man.


2nd: arillious alyas

presentation: 8
model: 9
textures: 7
- really awesome entry. love the design and concept. The model both low and high poly, really bring this together. I think the only thing bringing it down some, is the textures. Its a good choice for subdued colours and design, but overall, it could have used some more defanition and variation.


3rd: Vincent

presentation: 8
model: 8
textures: 6
- another superb model. love the design and feel of the character. great presentation, though texturing could have used some love :P

razwan
16-10-2008, 09:33 AM
First Place-

Member Name:Calcuttason

presentation (9-10)
Model (9-10)
Textures (8-10)

Total points-26

Second Place-

Member Name:BiG ToE-3DT

presentation (9-10)
Model (8-10)
Textures (7-10)

Total points-24

Third Place-

Member Name:Vincent

presentation (7-10)
Model (8-10)
Textures (6-10)

Total points-21

Tank[NL]
16-10-2008, 09:55 AM
First Place-

Member Name: Calcuttason

presentation 9
Model 10
Textures 9

Total points 28


Second Place-

Member Name: arillious alyas

presentation 5
Model 9
Textures 7

Total points 21


Third Place-

Member Name: Dunric

presentation 3
Model 8
Textures 7

Total points 18

InProgress
16-10-2008, 12:35 PM
First place

Member Name: Calcuttason

presentation 9
Model 9
Textures 9

Total points 27

Second Place

Member Name: poopipe

presentation 8
Model 8
Textures 8

Total points- 24

Third Place

Member Name: BiG ToE-3DT

presentation 7
Model 8
Textures 8

Total points- 23

TonyClifton
16-10-2008, 12:45 PM
First Place

Member Name: Big ToE-3DT

Interesting, unique model with a special, disturbing atmosphere!

presentation 9
Model 9
Textures 9

Total points: 27


Second Place

Member Name: gnome

The model is great, the textures could have been more vivid. Very good work!

presentation 8
Model 9
Textures 7

Total points: 24


Third Place

Member Name: poopipe

Good work! Great concept!

presentation 8
Model 8
Textures 7

Total points: 23

camaleonhell
16-10-2008, 01:20 PM
First Place-

Member Name:BiG ToE-3DT

presentation (9-10)
Model (8-10)
Textures (8-10)

Total points-25

Second Place-

Member Name:Calcuttason

presentation (9-10)
Model (8-10)
Textures (7-10)

Total points-24

Third Place-

Member Name:Rogue One

presentation (7-10)
Model (8-10)
Textures (6-10)

Total points-21

Joseph Pomeisl
16-10-2008, 01:58 PM
First Place - Calcuttason

Presentation: 9
Model: 9
Textures: 9

Total points - 27

Second Place - BiG ToE 3d

Presentation: 8
Model: 9
Textures: 9

Total points - 25

Third Place - arillious alyas

Presentation: 7
Model: 9
Textures: 8

Total points - 24

Dunric
16-10-2008, 02:52 PM
First Place - Calcuttason
Presentation -8
Model - 9
Textures - 9
Total - 26

Second Place - BiG ToE-3DT
Presentation -8
Model - 9
Textures - 5
Total - 22

Third Place - Vincent
Presentation -7
Model - 8
Textures - 5
Total - 20

vicban3d
16-10-2008, 03:47 PM
First Place-

Member Name:Agent-X

Presentation (9)
Model (10)
Textures (7)

Total points-26

Second Place-

Member Name:Poopipe

Presentation (7)
Model (9)
Textures (9)

Total points-25

Third Place-

Member Name:arillious alyas

Presentation (7)
Model (9)
Textures (8)

Total points-24

Orrin Hogan
16-10-2008, 05:19 PM
First place

Member Name: poopipe

presentation 9
Model 8
Textures 8

Total points 25

Second Place

Member Name: arillious alyas

presentation 8
Model 8
Textures 8

Total points- 24

Third Place

Member Name: Dunric

presentation 4
Model 7
Textures 7

Total points- 18

katana
16-10-2008, 09:32 PM
First Place-

Member Name Poopipe

presentation (0-10) 8
Model (0-10) 9
Textures (0-10) 8

Total points-25

Fine presentation...very clean and appealing. I know you were rushing it at the end and so i felt your metal textures suffered a bit, but the concept was nicely illustrated and the likeness held up...Congratz.

Second Place-

Member Name:Calcuttason

presentation (0-10) 8
Model (0-10) 8
Textures (0-10) 8

Total points-24

There were many fine entries. I placed yours in second mainly because it all seemed rather busy on the eye. I can see you put alot of work into the entire project...well done. I really liked your color choice, although generally I find the Black/green thing to be 'Matrix' - cliche', but you pull it off. Clean model.
Third Place-

Member Name:Rogue One

presentation (0-10) 7
Model (0-10) 7
Textures (0-10) 6

Total points- 20

I felt strongly that your hardwork to get past alot of the toil of building and designing your character deserved third. It technically is not as good as some of the others that were put in, but in my mind you started at the beginning, had some issues to work through and saw it through to the end. Completion of a project is above all most important in these things. In the future if you can..work your color schemes and textures and relax on your design. I generally find that drawing alot of abstract stuff loosens up the pencil and usually turns up something good...See you next time a round!


Great job to everyone that got their's in!.
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poopipe
16-10-2008, 09:36 PM
First Place-

Member Name: big toe

presentation 9
Model 8
Textures 7

that's just brilliant :D I can't think who it reminds me of but it definitely brings some sort of memory back

I dropped you a point on the textures there because your spec looks a little burnt out and I think you could have done more with the tentacle thingies

Total points- 24



Second Place-

Member Name:vincent

presentation 8
Model 7
Textures 7

Total points- 22


I like this a lot - the immediate appearance is really solid and the idea is right up my (back) street ;)

I've marked you down a little on the mesh because while your topology is clean and easy to follow it's also a little unbalanced and inefficient. I don't think you'd see any negative effect if you tore 500 tris out of the torso but you would gain a lot by putting another 200 into his armour
I'd like to have seen a little more colour in the texture - its actually pretty difficult to distinguish between the untextured and textured versions under that blue light.

Third Place-


Member Name: arillious alyas

presentation 6
Model 8
Textures 7

Total points- 21

Really cool character, the highpoly is great, the lowpoly very good indeed although with those tris to spare I think you could have smoothed out some of the facets in the sillhouette - particularly around the head
I would have liked to have seen more colour and detail in the textures - I understand he's meant to be all dark & that but there are parts where it seems a little muddy

What's damaged your score most is the presentation -I'm guessing you were a little rushed there :)

FrZnChAoS
16-10-2008, 11:02 PM
First place

Member Name: Big Toe

presentation 9
Model 8
Textures 8

Total points 25

Second Place

Member Name: Vincent

presentation 8
Model 8
Textures 8

Total points- 24

Third Place

Member Name: poopipe

presentation 8
Model 7
Textures 6

Total points- 21

great entries everybody

Agent-X
17-10-2008, 05:07 AM
First Place-

Member Name:Vicban3d

Presentation (9)
Model (10)
Textures (7)

Total points-26

Second Place-

Member Name:Setschaos

Presentation (7)
Model (9)
Textures (9)

Total points-25

Third Place-

Member Name:Novian

Presentation (7)
Model (9)
Textures (8)

Total points-24

BiG ToE-3DT
17-10-2008, 02:10 PM
First Place-

Member Name: Calcuttason

presentation (9)
Model (8)
Textures (7)

Total points- 24

Second Place-

Member Name: poopipe

presentation (7)
Model (9)
Textures (8)

Total points- 24

Third Place-

Member Name: Vincent

presentation (8)
Model (9)
Textures (7)

Total points- 24

Chung Wong
18-10-2008, 12:42 AM
First Place-

Member Name: Calcuttason

presentation (8)
Model (8)
Textures (7)

Total points- 23

Second Place-

Member Name: Bigtoe

presentation (8)
Model (7)
Textures (8)

Total points- 23

Third Place-

Member Name: poopipe

presentation (8)
Model (8)
Textures (7)

Total points- 23

Very good work everyone

dhin
20-10-2008, 06:54 PM
First Place-
Member Name:BiG ToE -3DT

presentation (7/10) Blah Pose. Needed more Umph! It looks like it is in the models base pose. Though you show everything else very nicely your beauty shot is lacking.
Model (9/10) Very nice use of Polygonal shape and flow.
Textures (9/10) I thought the colors were rather dull. but the sheets look good, and you have a good use of the UV space and it is very nicely painted.

Total points- (25/30)

Second Place-
Member Name: Calcuttason

presentation (8/10) Nice pose in the beauty shot, it would have been nice to see a better contrasting background to help bring out some model details in both texture, normal and mesh.
Model (8/10) Detail images of areas where the standard orthographic shots get muddled somewhat because of density would have been helpful here. Over all the design looks good. Very true to your concept art, I have to give you props on that one.
Textures (8/10) some what dark, and hard to see details, BUT very nice use of spaces in your UV's.

Total points- (24/30)

Third Place- (personal preference deciding the order for the tie, sorry Poopipe)
Member Name:Poopipe

presentation (9/10) Out of all the entries I thought that this one had one of the best presentations. The beauty shot is simple but very good as capturing the mood of the character. The images provided give every thing you need to see as well.
Model (8/10) Nicely modeled, the mesh has a very nice flow to it. Though I'm a bit reluctant to give you points for your 'theme' I can't deny you executed the concept to model well.
Textures (7/10) A bit simplistic. I would have liked to see more detail like was put into the concept.

Total points- (24/30)

Honorable Mentions-
Every one that completed... but one that desire something extra

Member Name:arillious alyas
I think of everything it was your texture work that keep you out of my top three. The lack of discernible organic mass also played a part in this decision. The metallic orbs in his stomach (on on the back of the legs) also seem out of place when you look at the character as a whole.

Member Name:InProgress
I really liked your character idea. But your presentation and textures took you out of the running. You had too many facets along the mechanical portions that I thought needed to appear smoother, it looked like instead of working at making the lowpoly look like it was more detailed though the texture, you were trying to make the lowpoly look like it was part of the design, and this seriously weakened the character in my opinion.

Member Name: Razwan
Nice character, but a bit too cliche. It lacked some style that could have gabbed it some extra attention.

Member Name:Rogue One
I loved the model, but you texture was just lacking, and your pose was blah.

gnome
20-10-2008, 09:31 PM
First Place:
Calcuttason

presentation - 9
Model - 9
Textures - 9

Total points: 27

Second Place:
setchaos

presentation - 8
Model - 9
Textures - 8

Total points: 25


Third Place
poopipe

presentation - 8
Model - 7
Textures - 8

Total points: 23

Warlock 279
21-10-2008, 10:10 PM
First Place-

Member Name: BiG ToE-3DT

presentation (8-10)
Model (9-10)
Textures (9-10)

Total points- 26

Solid. I really like the design. Nice clean/classy presentation, the winning pose could be a bit more dynamic tho perhaps. Good polygon distribution, excellent flow, and great over all shape and a wicked silhouette to the character. Nice UV layout, well packed and sensible.

Textures are pretty good as well, particularly what you've done with the torso, and the areas where the mechanical bits meet flesh. The textures on the legs/tentacles could maybe be a little more interesting, maybe carrying the red over into them some in the form of trim, or a light on each segment or something. I love the mask/helmet, simple and striking visually with the offset black stripe. Really nice all around. Excellent work.


Second Place-

Member Name: Calcuttason

presentation (9-10)
Model (8-10)
Textures (8-10)

Total points- 25

Your concept was wicked from the start and you carried it over to 3D pretty well, maybe lost some of the crispness of the concept, and the life of the cape, but still very well executed I think. Presentations very nice, all the images tie together and the winning pose is pretty dynamic. Your shape/silhouette is solid and I can't find any fault with your poly distribution/flow.

You UV layout is pretty well packed, my only complaint there, and this is largely just a matter of personal preference and pretty nit picky at that, but I'd have made sure the sword blade was running perfectly perpendicular, makes painting long straight lines easier, and the three little island between it and the scarf/cape would fit to the right if it were straightened. Textures are pretty good, be nice if you could have made the green a little more intense like you had in the concept, but still solid work. Really nice work, from concept to completion, well done.


Third Place-

Member Name: poopipe

presentation (8-10)
Model (9-10)
Textures (7-10)

Total points- 24

Concepts as cheeky as ever, and the presentation is clean and concise. The models shape is really solid and well balanced, and I can't find any issues with the flow/distribution. UV layout could be a little tighter I think, there's a fair chunk of empty space down the right side. Textures are solid. Great color scheme, works well with the idea of the character.

Only qualms I have with it are with the eye and the lack of scratches. I'm not sure why, but the color just doesn't work for me on the eye, almost too muted maybe and a little devoid of life where the rest of the character seems rather full of life. The paint chipping's pretty nice, tho it doesn't appear to be present in the normal map, which I think would it if it were. I also think the paint could really use some scratches. Right now it seems like the paint's flaked away over time, rather than been worn away from use/interaction with objects, I'd expect to see some scratches in there as well as chipping.

Very well designed and solidly executed. Nice work.

katana
03-11-2008, 09:46 PM
so who won?

BiG ToE-3DT
04-11-2008, 02:41 AM
I'll try and find time to add up the scores right after I buy Resistance 2

katana
04-11-2008, 09:46 AM
I'll try and find time to add up the scores right after I buy Resistance 2

After you buy Resistance 2???lol! and then it will be "Oh I'll just take a quick look at the game...just load it up...and then I'll just run my guy down to the end of the block and kill a couple of Chimera's...and then I'll add it up, but before i do that, there's this awesome new weapon to try..."

To much temptation for me, I still have to pop in the first one and finish it up...:dance:

BiG ToE-3DT
05-11-2008, 03:57 PM
Ok, and the Winners are:

1st: Poopie
2nd: BiG ToE
3rd: Calcuttason

poopipe
05-11-2008, 04:26 PM
Woop!

Darchand
05-11-2008, 05:05 PM
Congrats poopipe!

InProgress
05-11-2008, 05:08 PM
Congratulations for the winners, and everybody who participated. I'll try harder next time and win ;)

Tank[NL]
05-11-2008, 08:03 PM
grats poop.

but you must know its the boobs that did it... ;)

Joseph Pomeisl
05-11-2008, 08:14 PM
Congratulations!

poopipe
05-11-2008, 10:25 PM
;673474']grats poop.

but you must know its the boobs that did it... ;)


well yeah, give em what they want - that's what I always say :D

Perversonality
06-11-2008, 09:53 AM
Congrats all :)

Calcuttason
06-11-2008, 11:31 AM
Sweet! Congrats Poopipe and Big toe!

poopipe
06-11-2008, 11:37 AM
congrats to you too