Samurai warrior [Nudity]

[rraj]

Hi,am starting a new thread in which am going to post all my wip models.Posting another model for my portfolio.I have taken inspiration from samurai warrior.I have decided the pose and cloth also but before that i need to correct my model's anatomy,so am posting a WIP here.
Still working but i need c & c to improve.Since am not from an art background so i need to practice a lot to learn anatomy.And i will keep updating this time.
C&C are welcome.

[frebel]

looks good , i waiting to see with samurai acessories

[mutembo ndeke]

Beautiful work so far cant wait for the new updates! What modeller do you use?

[Bracer]

I absolutely LOVES the anatomy!
Fantastic....just PURE Fantastic.

I absolutely loves the Shoulder and Arm Section.
Pure fantastic.

Five Stars !

[rraj]

Sorry i forgot to mention the software i have used.
Base mesh done in Maya and detailing in Zbrush.

[rraj]

No critique?? Shall i continue with the pose and cloths?

[dhruvsm]

lookingh good so far....a few areas that u can work on.....the eyes are too close to each other..in general term, there should be one eye gap between the two eyes...sometime even more, but not less...the trapezius muscle is not merging properly in to back of the neck...the upper leg/thigh muscles are looking a bit lumpy though u have given the definitions...calf muscles are looking too thin and ending at a very high level....that volume needs to go down a bit...feet are also looking very small and lacking bone definitions underneath the skin...u can soften up a bit of some areas of the muscle which r looking sharp like the transition between the deltoid and the triceps....i would suggest u to refer to some anatomy resources and adjust those areas....

keep it up...al the best...

[KitLightning]

No critique?? Shall i continue with the pose and cloths?

only one ... please donate your skills to me :D I can draw it, but I have not begun working with those kind of modelling in 3d, yet!
and another ... the pelvis area is a bit to visible and I would not make it that wide either. But your work, anatomically, is great, working with classic lines of the human physiology.

[rraj]

just got 30 min,so i did one rough expression test and a little change in body.
Will change the expression later.

frebel : Thanks,will update soon.
mutembo ndeke :Thanks,i have used maya and zbrush.
Bracer : Thanks for the kind words.It will really help me.
dhruvsm - thanks for the reply,i will take care what you have said.
KitLightning :Thanks for the reply.ha ha,actually i can absorb ur drawing skill,am like Peter Petrelli of Heroes

[McFly]

Is he gonna be a caucasian samurai warrior?
The pelvis is protruding too much IMO. He's a tough guy so I would expect more muscles than bones.
Other than that, you have a great model already! :)