Igor will show you the way.

[Mr.T]

Well hi! :wave:
I'm actually working on this simple scene and I was looking for comments and crits to make this scene looks better.

I was inspired by Marty Feldman for the bulgy eyes, the best Igor ever played :dance:

[Mr.T]

Some details:
http://www.mrt-prodz.com/tmp/igor/igor_wip-01.jpg
http://www.mrt-prodz.com/tmp/igor/igor_wip-02.jpg
http://www.mrt-prodz.com/tmp/igor/igor_wip-03.jpg

[Mr.T]

Some updates on the cloth and a hair pass (but I'm not sure about it)

[Mr.T]

Thanks to NikosX for the nice advice :smug:

Any comments and crits are very welcome, thank you!

[DeadlyFreeze]

His hand needs some work, its pretty small in comparison to his head.

I liked your first composition better also. With the light and the hall in the center the eye tends to hit the light then go straight down the hallway, ignoring the character altogether.

Its looking good though keep on it.

[Mr.T]

His hand needs some work, its pretty small in comparison to his head.

I liked your first composition better also. With the light and the hall in the center the eye tends to hit the light then go straight down the hallway, ignoring the character altogether.

Its looking good though keep on it.

Thanks a lot for your help :dance: I made the hand bigger, repositionned the fingers a little bit, and tweak down the lighting so the viewer eyes stays on the lamp and Igor.

I'll tweak the top of the sleeve and add more wrinkles to make it looks more natural. (now it's kind of stiff floating above the arm it's weird)

[Mr.T]

I made a hair pass (it's almost not noticeable lol) changed slightly the lighting and robe, comments and crits are welcome! :smug::evil:

[Makaveli]

The way hes holding the lamp is very strange. Looks like I could knock it out by blowing on it. I suggest making it more into a firmer grip like a fist

[Mr.T]

I followed you advice Makaveli, and made a fist with his fingers to make the grip looks firmer.

Thanks ;P