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[DeadlyFreeze]

The schedule OF DOOM....

edit - current progess

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[katana]

Try not to take a week for concepting...it's a hard lesson to learn, but you'll be better for it.

[DeadlyFreeze]

Why do you say that katana? Having your complete end result to work off of make for less guess work in the end.

I'm just throwing ideas at the wall atm and seeing what sticks, really haven't even decided on a topic yet....

[Ichiban]

That "dog" looks creepy, neat !!

[Beindulin]

So far the creature at the bottom is the most interesting to me.

[melvinsqualor]

really digging the girl on the left with the arms coming out of her back. Think a lot could be done with that idea.

[Warlock 279]

I'm liking the "dog," because that's a bit creepy, but I don't think its strong enough to stand on its own...and the dude in the cage, cause that's just cool. How about putting the cage with the dude in it, on the back of the dog-thing?

[katana]

Why do you say that katana? Having your complete end result to work off of make for less guess work in the end.
Sorry, yea, because i blew a week on painting out a nice toon for DW3 and ended up rethinking my design. The second idea was an evening sketch. Sometimes it's better to just get the basic idea in, just like blocking out your 3d form and then noodle the details...what ever works for you, I just found that it bogged me down, and I never got those 40+ hours back, to the extent, i had no chance of finishing...burnt...Anyway, good luck.

[nendo]

Sorry, yea, because i blew a week on painting out a nice toon for DW3 and ended up rethinking my design. The second idea was an evening sketch. Sometimes it's better to just get the basic idea in, just like blocking out your 3d form and then noodle the details...what ever works for you, I just found that it bogged me down, and I never got those 40+ hours back, to the extent, i had no chance of finishing...burnt...Anyway, good luck.


Thing is though i don't think he ment spending one week purly on one design. what ur talking about aint realy concept. its more having one idea and sticking to it till u don't like it anymore. What I think deadly freeze in the concepting week is to spend it on doing as many different forms and rough designs as possible. hopefully finding a design he likes and then adding the detail in later.

[DeadlyFreeze]

I have a pretty linear work flow down so I'm not so worried but thanks for the advice. I'll be sure to come and yell at you if you start bogging down this year. lol

Ya I'm pretty much dicking around see'ing what comes up then keep the things I like and dump the things I don't. Coming up with a strong idea is basically it, everything else is just technical work once you have that.

Another round...

[Freekybevis]

i like the cross one, what if there was a character nailed to the cross and the body had no face ? epic creepy, the there were strings controlling the main body like a pupet Oo, good work so far bro

[Puckducker]

Nice job scheduling freeze. I think that's really going to help keep you organized in the long run.

Really cool concepts too. I really like the 3rd one of what you've posted so far, I think you could expand a lot on that.

[setschaos]

I like the third one too, it can really be developed into something phenomenal if you out a lot of effort in to some details.

[Warbringerd]

So far I like the guy in the cage, I really think you could take that one and push it into someting totally freaky.

[DeadlyFreeze]

Thanks for the advice guys. Here's my mix mash up of all my ideas so far. Kind of like where this one is going....

[anima3d]

creepy as hell i like it

[Agent-X]

that is the creepiest looking chicken chick or whatever in ****** hell it is. LOL. Never seen so man tits on a single character. And damn, thats a hungry croch hehe. Cool man, Make it.

[Buzzy]

Great ideas so far. Oh man, that is one hell of a vagina! Haha.
I would love to see you make the guy with the pointy hat. He is creep-a-licious.

[DeadlyFreeze]

update

I'm glad you got that double entendre buzzy lol

[roel]

love the multiple breasts! but can he, no she stand with those legs???

[DeadlyFreeze]

ya the legs will get reworked during the 3d part, I just cant draw that well so it looks like poo.

I'm going to re-do the head cause it sucks also. Still with eyes all over but less human in shape, some sort of hard surface on top and soft under carriage.

[Agent-X]

right on, just make the legs point outward a bit instead of inward. Bull legged legs, knocked knees or whatever just weird. But yeah cool deal man. Keep going. The bottom right drawing might look cool with this character since the head kinda looks like a birds head.

[DeadlyFreeze]

fooling around with the heads a bit still and starting to get a semi organized base mesh together.

basic game plan, z-sphere > develop basic shapes > topo > max clean up > high poly sculpt > re-topo

Much more intuitive then endlessly pulling edges in max that's for sure.

[Peter_Kasim]

Multiple boobs FTW!

I like the sculpt so far, very nice forms and balance. The concept is great, so I'm sure it will look good in 3D

Oh, and that sillhouette head concept looks fantastic!

[Agent-X]

nice work its coming along

[khemist000]

Great looking sculpt so far. I think as far as the heads, I really like the one with the 3 eyes.

Good Luck!

[Pickman]

Multi-boobs UNITE!!!

[DeadlyFreeze]

A quick sculpt from the concept to figure out what the hell I'm doing with this head before I stick something on my lowpoly base mesh.

...man I love z-spheres :dance:

[BiG ToE-3DT]

the number of breast a female has is the number of young she can successfully feed. So the more the breasts, the more the demon babies for Threedy. Toss a few on her hands.

[DeadlyFreeze]

Alright I'm starting over, I know what I gotta do to win this thing...

[BiG ToE-3DT]

winner. just get a good skin texture and you got my vote.

[Pickman]

"The Mother Boob"

:haha: That would make an excellent avatar.

[DeadlyFreeze]

A design so fine it should be bedazzled on the finest of jean jackets and its all thanks to your guys bewb lust.

[Pickman]

Seriously, if you don't model it I will. :D

[spider2544]

theres few things on this earth that can scare me quite as much as toothy vaginas.

great concept and excellent start to your sculpt so far.

[DeadlyFreeze]

Feels like I didn't do anything this week but screw around with this mesh. Hopefully spending the time extra time setting this up proper will let me sculpt the poo poo out of it.

I'll add the extra tid bits as I go, time for my sculpting phase.

[SR_6274]

Just your low poly mesh scares the crap out of me. Nice work so far.

[DeadlyFreeze]

I'm just going to post my lvls as I get them done, lvl 2 so far.

Also does anyone know how they changed their thread title? I've edited the original post title but it doesn't change it so I'm missing something here.

[Peter_Kasim]

Loving it man! I didn't think multiple breasts could be so sinister...

Oh, and please hit me up if you figure out how to change the thread title

Good luck Deadly, I'm looking forward to seeing this come to life in all its freakish glory

[chris_solo]

excellent stuff man! really like the design.

[poopipe]

you already knew I liked this :D

[Joseph Pomeisl]

Big Toe's what you're missing. PM him and he'll change it.

[DeadlyFreeze]

lazily sculptn away at this thing lately...

who wants a kiss boys?

[Cracadoo]

This must be like hell is, probably. One of more disgusting designs I've seen here. In a good sense :)

[DaddyDoom]

OooohOooooh There she comes...
Watch out boys she'll chew you up!
OooohOooooh There she comes...
She's a Man Eater!

Creepy!

[DeadlyFreeze]

I lost my internet for 3 days and yelled at my ISP only to figure out my router died, freaking linksys 3rd router to die on me.

[Buzzy]

So disgustingly disturbing. Not only a man-eating vagina, but now smiling breasts too. I imagine them saying "Waaaaaaazzzzzuuuuuuuupp?"

Really really great forms and shapes so far. The feet look a little too small to support the mass, but its not that bad.

[Pickman]

:haha: I just pictured her boobs eating cheetos.

I agree about the feet, maybe if you made the toes (claws?) longer.

[Agent-X]

Oh great, now hes got talking boobies and a mighty hungry croch, lol. Well, Ill say this, it is deffinitely different. Hehe. Keep going man. I like it.

[ryvick]

yuckingly disgustingly nice art. i cant say i like it in any other way. feets would be my concern too.

[DeadlyFreeze]

blkjalkjdlakjdlkaj running out of polys can I barrow a cup? anyone?\

edit: also turntable on veoh

http://www.veoh.com/browse/videos/watch/v18202633ZgWzGXdy

Did veoh get crappy or something I remember them being much more HQ video then this.

[Buzzy]

Wow dude this is getting better and freakier every time. I love the arms on the back....and the weird venus flytrap pods. Cannot wait for you to dig into the fine detail!

I'm not sure how this thing is at all effective in combat, but at the same time I don't care. Its freaking creepy.

[DeadlyFreeze]

I'm adding one more element here I think it squares up everything nicely. I'm only worried about getting this all crammed into 10k tris.

I also need to work in the threedy logo any suggestions?

[BiG ToE-3DT]

instead of the logo, just use the forum colors on the jewlery.

or you could have it giving birth to the logo.

[DeadlyFreeze]

or you could have it giving birth to the logo.

Haha brilliant, where would we be without you toe.

[DeadlyFreeze]

You know whats f-ing awesome, zbrush compacting my memory every 2 mins. God forbid I use undo.

Last pass high fidelity stuff....

[DaddyDoom]

This one is by far one of the weirdest characters this year.
Would love to see her copulating with Sathe.
Great work dude!

[miycko]

That's one freaky chick. I'm glad the smiling breasts are gone but i'm staying away from the vagina.

[SR_6274]

Getting better with each post. I kinda miss the smiling breasts, but ohh well, that's just one of my re-occuring dreams.

[JuST]

Uahh... this turned out very well... uhmm... I mean ugly. XD

[DeadlyFreeze]

last sculpt part and my low poly progress with a normal test....

[Puckducker]

Hey, normals are looking really nice. Especially on the head/torso, those area's came out beautifully.

Might just be a test, but hopefully on the final model you have the polys to retain the shape on the leg and arm "armor". They've got an interesting silhouette and add a lot to the model. Flattened out, the normals don't do the same justice that the they do for the rest of the body.

[DeadlyFreeze]

Ya I'll split the edges to pop things out more. I just wanted to make sure I wasn't going to over shoot the tri count first but at 3,300~ so far with this much in I should be fine.

[DeadlyFreeze]

Damn this took forever I'm way behind my schedule. 9,999 that's how I roll... PUSH IT TO THE LIMIT, THHHHHHEEEEE LIMMMMMIT.

[Warlock 279]

Man that's so bizarre. Low poly looks pretty solid. The abdomen seems like it might have a few more polys than it really needs, particularly the vertical rows that won't really show in silhouette, but I'm not seeing anywhere that begs for more, so you're probably alright. Judging from your first normals test, this is gonna pretty wicked when you get it all baked.

I'm lightyears behind my schedule as well, ah well, gotta make the deadline all the same right? :)

[DeadlyFreeze]

Hey no worrys warlock you already won the DW mini no need to get greedy and win the main comp also, take as much time as you need ;P

I had to throw some norms on this thing for a quick check to make sure I had everything lined up right and I gotta say for the 5 min unwrap I did in headus this thing held up effing wonderfull.

[DeadlyFreeze]

uvs squared away and quick uv test in a real time app to make sure it looks good. I'm off to figure out what the hell I'm doing for a texture.

[Agent-X]

Looking very nice. Keep up the good work. I cant wait to see it textured.

[chris_solo]

good job man!, just a question what Marmoset engine? I don't know it as a rendering engine ... because there is a soft / glow in the image, it pleases me well :)

[DeadlyFreeze]

Thanks guys

@chris: Its just a little realtime viewer from 8monkey labs, you can grab it from http://www.8monkeylabs.com/archives/category/tools

Much nicer then max's realtime imo.

[Puckducker]

Wow, great looking low poly man. The normal turned out beautifully, and completely justifies every detail of your sculpt. Honestly, at first glace it still looks like the sculpt until you spot the odd minor corner. Going to look great with a texture.

[Buzzy]

Great! This really translated well into low-poly. The marmoset render looks great.

[DeadlyFreeze]

arigato mr robotos

Texture update, its super rough but you get the idea of what I'm doing.

[DeadlyFreeze]

texupdate #2 straight up from max no spec yet

[Fixor]

Very attractive! ;)

[DeadlyFreeze]

thank fixor, I can set you up on a date just give me a pm... she totally puts out on the frist date fyi

getting the extra tid bits going....

Yo dog, I heard you needed a stand so we got you a stand and put a stand on it. Now you can stand on your stand on your stand.

[ryvick]

Your model scares me. What do you dream of and what do you think of in real life. It is a great model with proper edgeflow, detailing, colors, but it still scares me. I dont feel like commenting on it cause of its uh... unique characteristics.
I like your stand, great way to implement a mecha invaded territory feel to it. or atleast thats what i get from it. Suggestion : the ground is too flat (the dirt under and around the plank) make some small dug out on of the side to break the solid packed earth.

[hulahuga]

Cool man!
I like all the eyes :), some of the first concepts in this thread were really cool :)

[newhere]

I'd hit that............................with a bat ;)

Good work

[poopipe]

personally I'd have trimmed a bit if I knew people were going to be staring at my bush


otherwise you get a big fat pile of win from me :D

[DeadlyFreeze]

Thanks guys.

You can almost smell the fear as people scramble to get everything done.... mmmmm smells like old ass and a leather seat on 112 degree day.

I have little tweaks here and there to do but this is all pretty much wrapped up and thats good cause theres only 3 days left.... ahhhhh.

http://home.comcast.net/~dfart/layout.jpg

[Buzzy]

Man, you continue to impress with this (disgusting) character! Knock out work.
And your pedestal came out really nice.
Is that a yoke around her (his?) neck? Nice touch.

[JuST]

I agree! Pretty disgusting but very well done! Go on... finish it!

[DeadlyFreeze]

Alright here we go finals, give them a look over tell me if I've messed something up or suggestions cause I'm all ears.

Let me know if the pics dont show I have them on my server atm...
http://home.comcast.net/~dfart/dw/beauty_final.jpg
http://home.comcast.net/~dfart/dw/pres_final.jpg
http://home.comcast.net/~dfart/dw/process_final.jpg
http://home.comcast.net/~dfart/dw/tex_final.jpg
http://home.comcast.net/~dfart/dw/concept_final.jpg
http://home.comcast.net/~dfart/dw/text_final.jpg

[Warlock 279]

That is so very disgustingly well done. I think it turned out quite good.

Only crit I've got, since you've got it all rigged up, it'd be nice to see a little life in the fingers of the upper hands, so they looked at little less like they were still in the bind position.

Excellent work, congrats on finishing.

[Buzzy]

Great job! And congrats on getting finished.
This turned out awesome, as expected. I really like your mini step-by-step construction page.
Good luck in the judging!

[SR_6274]

Grats on finishing. This is one absolutely digusting character, which is perfect for this war. Good luck with the voting.

[chris_solo]

congrats to finishing, great presentation.

[JuST]

Congrats on finishing it! This is another great entry for our team.
I also like the "making of" sheet very much.
Well done!

[newhere]

Hey if she/he was here before there was ever a dominance war (giving birth to demons) that means that, that would be my "demon character's" mother (EEwwwwww!!!) as well as other demons fighting in the war now.

Good work on model and story.

[Fixor]

Clean and neat work! Awesome description as well! Congrats mate.
Note: I'll bring my Iron condom.