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xXmihoXx
12-05-2009, 03:09 PM
Hi...I'm new to the forum o-0...thought I should post a picture I made for a project I did at uni...

It is a homage to an artist called Trevor Brown...o-0

Used 3DSMax..and Photoshop

Err..I duno what else to say..hope it doesn't offend?? >.<

[n.b. I know its not as good as the other posts..but I think its the best one I've done so far so comments & crits are welcome~]

p.s. I know the pose is a little awkward...n its a blurry jpeg..yuck!

*hides*
0-o

M_Cederstrom
14-05-2009, 01:56 AM
very shiny...

poopipe
14-05-2009, 07:07 PM
thats a bit odd. rubber bondage ducks = win though

I think if you go back and rework the composition it could well turn into quite a successful piece but as it stands it's not really hanging together.

everythings a bit spread out and there's too much empty space around the objects. It'd probably work better as portrait rather than landscape as well.


edit (some time later)

I had a poke around and found the man's site. I'd like to thank you for bringing him to my attention, the guy's great :D

I can also see what you're aiming for a bit better now. I think if you centre her in a portrait shaped frame and pull the ducks etc in around her feet you're going to be a fair bit closer to the sort of thing he appears to make.

Joseph Pomeisl
15-05-2009, 12:32 AM
Ha! What a pleasant surprise:)How'd you sneak on here? I still like this one:D

xXmihoXx
15-05-2009, 09:16 AM
Thanks for the C&C PooPipe, they were really helpful!
The pic was actually posted on TB's website as well, I think its on page 2 or 3 now of his blog - in case you wanted to know~

Joe - I felt like posting it, cos I was actually proud of something for once lol :P And where you been man??

Joseph Pomeisl
15-05-2009, 03:23 PM
the war stole my life....:xx: