View Full Version : Cara Carmine-GenderBender-G.O.W
hey guys long time no see. i hope its cool that i jump in on this one. so i think i'll have some time to get this one done i hope. let me know what you think.i should have something in 3D soon. oh sorry big-toe how much time do we have on this one? again sorry... :)
30-07-2009, 04:19 PM
wow i really like ur orthos, look really clean and full of character. those dots ( bolts of wateva they are ) seem to be 2 many of them, it looks liek ur trying to fill up space. i no its just a sketch and things usualy change in 3d just thoguht id point that out :) also her neck and arms look a little thin. hurry with the 3d :)
30-07-2009, 04:26 PM
The only problem I can find with this so far, lies in the design.
One of the main focus of this contest is for you to present us a character that can be recognized, yet still present their own personality. The problem I see, is that Carmine is a very obscure character from Gears of War, and I'm wondering how you're going to make it so that people can look at this character and say "oh, that's a female carmine"
It may not make any difference, but something you may want to consider
Great concept art
31-07-2009, 08:46 AM
My only critique is that G.O.W. stands for God Of War... so umm... Where's Kratos? :crazy:
31-07-2009, 09:36 AM
thee boobarmor and the missing mouthpiece of the helmet will make it clear, i think ;)
sorry guys its been some time. i been working on my model for the
comiccon contest.. but i just got the lowpoly done for that one so
now im working on the lowpoly for this one. should have it all
done by monday... let me know what you think.
thanks for stoping by...
14-08-2009, 11:59 PM
Nice work man it's coming along great so far. Sorry to say this but you might end up deleting most of the head to make room for the helmet, then again you might already know that anyways great start man it looks promising and good luck.
17-08-2009, 02:37 AM
Man! Carmine! That guy was so cool - WAAAAAY more helpful in Gears than Dom ever was...until he died. What a painful memory to bring up:)
Regardless, I like the design. I think the limbs are a little skinny - okay, a LOT skinny, for a COG - but this is pretty good. Especially the orthos; those are really detailed and very clean. Nice work so far man!
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