1st floor re-treat area

[jackieteh]

Hi, here is the artwork i just finished yesterday.
i was trying to give this image some feel of dim ambient effect,
but it seem that i have failed it.

bytheway, please tell me what you think, thank you.:)

3ds max + vray + photoshop

[Relderson]

Looks great :) my only crit is: the spot of the lights are to bright. when you look at the image first thing you eye see is the yellow hot spot of the right light

[dark night2008]

agreed with relderson + the art iron on for the handrail is look flat & you need to work on the steps i mean the sharp edges need to be chamfer ( look at the pic i send ) ..... other wise it looks great i like the floor
http://www.freeimagehosting.net/uploads/th.d92932af49.jpg (http://www.freeimagehosting.net/image.php?d92932af49.jpg)

[jackieteh]

Looks great :) my only crit is: the spot of the lights are to bright. when you look at the image first thing you eye see is the yellow hot spot of the right light

Thank you for your comments.
i will post the 2nd floor rendering today,
please come back and give me more crit. :)

agreed with relderson + the art iron on for the handrail is look flat & you need to work on the steps i mean the sharp edges need to be chamfer ( look at the pic i send ) ..... other wise it looks great i like the floor
http://www.freeimagehosting.net/uploads/th.d92932af49.jpg (http://www.freeimagehosting.net/image.php?d92932af49.jpg)

Thank you for your useful reference,
i have make a copy of those reference pic,
you are great! man :)