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jackieteh
17-11-2009, 11:50 PM
Hi to all, here is another view for the same private house in my previous post,
hoping you will like it, critiques and comment are most welcome.
Thank you :)

3ds max + Vray + Photoshop
guhhh
17-11-2009, 11:56 PM
nice render!!!
keraj37
18-11-2009, 03:03 AM
render is to small and it seems u have some GI issue
dark night2008
18-11-2009, 10:59 PM
look nice for me but still you dont fix the sharp edges for the stairs
Bubbaloo
19-11-2009, 12:45 AM
Something is strange about the ceiling mounted lights.
jackieteh
03-12-2009, 05:46 PM
guhhh: Thanks for your comment.

keraj37: i will make a bigger size render once i free, hoping you could come back here to post your comment,thanks in advance.:)

dark night2008: yeah, i was rushing for this render, sorry to dissappointed you.

Bubbaloo: i will fix that when i make the bigger size render.thank you for posting.
jackieteh
04-12-2009, 12:48 PM
As a promised, i have just finished this 1200px x 900px rendering at about 1:18:51 rendering time.

In this rendering, i have fixed the stair step edge, downlight and the GI issue,
the photoshop part, i am using curve to give some contrast only, hoping you will like this rendering and again sorry about my poor english.:)

critiques and comments are most welcome.

3ds max + vray + photoshop
keraj37
04-12-2009, 04:22 PM
much better:) i love stairs, now it is posible to commnet it. Reflections on starirs are really pro! U shouldnt give roof lamps dark collor becouse it has to big contrast with light material inside. Anyway very nice visualiztaion!
dark night2008
04-12-2009, 05:54 PM
It look nice & better than the first render , keep up the good work mate
jackieteh
05-12-2009, 04:34 AM
keraj37:
Thank you for your nice comment and guideline.
about the roof lamps(downlight), beside of black color what color should i put to it??
hoping you could give me some idea about it, thanks a lot.:)

dark night2008:
wow! you are a really a good supporter in here.
happy to hear that you said this render is better than the 1st one,
but i still don't know how to make it look photo-real,
do you have any idea? :)
dark night2008
05-12-2009, 04:41 AM
still im trying to do realistic shots mate :) but i think its matar of how many time you hit f9 for render & testing the materails & lighting .. nothing specail & we should keep trying
thanks ;)
jackieteh
06-12-2009, 04:26 PM
dark night2008:
Thanks again for your guide.:)