atulkatdare-2012

[atulkatdare]

hello everyone,
my name is atul katdare, im new on dis site, checked a lot of gr8 stuff here frm u guyz...
trying to grasp a lot dat has never been tought in da school, im sure i'LL get to learn a lot frm da experts like u...thnx,

matte painting is 1 of ma favourate wokz, b4 dis i hv tried few mattes for 3dm3 challenges,this is da 1st time im participating in matte painting challenge on 3d total...plz make comments, corrections n suggestions, dat will definately help me to improve further...

thnx frndz, hv a gr8 time!

edit: posting my w.i.p. thread bit late, bcoz i saw it lately, n had no confidence of finishing dis project b4 da deadline...

[atulkatdare]

concept:
i hv nt yet watched da movie 2012, but i'll surely watch it soon. wat i hv decided da reason 4 destruction 4 dis theme is heavy rainfall for a long period n high tide dat will cause huge ocean waves to hug the cities n end da world...[sorry 4 my poor english]

here is da plate i hv worked on....
link here: http://i43.tinypic.com/27yr6fl.jpg

http://i778.photobucket.com/albums/yy61/atulkatdare/3d%20scene%20modeling%20competition/atulkatdare2012_plate.jpg

[atulkatdare]

w.i.p.01:
http://i778.photobucket.com/albums/yy61/atulkatdare/3d%20scene%20modeling%20competition/atulkatdare2012_wip01.jpg

w.i.p.02:
http://i778.photobucket.com/albums/yy61/atulkatdare/3d%20scene%20modeling%20competition/atulkatdare2012_wip02.jpg

w.i.p.03:
http://i778.photobucket.com/albums/yy61/atulkatdare/3d%20scene%20modeling%20competition/atulkatdare2012_wip03.jpg


w.i.p.01: removed da sky as i dont need it as a background, also did add an ocean in da scene...
w.i.p.02: added monster waves n tried 2 merge ocean wid da waves...
w.i.p.03: few ditails, rainfall n color correction...

waiting 4 ur comments n critix...thnx
regards~atul k.

[raulfabi]

Hi atul,

Nice to have you here.
First of all I think you should change a little bit the wave.No wave is simetricaly built.Left and right you have the same marks on t.
And in my opinion some water between the buildings could also look nice.

Have a nice day.

[atulkatdare]

Hi atul,

Nice to have you here.
First of all I think you should change a little bit the wave.No wave is simetricaly built.Left and right you have the same marks on t.
And in my opinion some water between the buildings could also look nice.

Have a nice day.

thank you friend,
i'll make dis changes soon...nice suggestions...

[atulkatdare]

here is da slight change according to sum of da suggestions i got here,
plz let me know, wat u guyz think bout it...

http://i778.photobucket.com/albums/yy61/atulkatdare/3d%20scene%20modeling%20competition/atulkatdare2012_wip04.jpg

regards~
atul k.

[raulfabi]

Already better atul, try to improve also the center part of the wave.
See ya.:wave:

[atulkatdare]

Already better atul, try to improve also the center part of the wave.
See ya.:wave:

thnx man, i'LL post ma update soon...

[atulkatdare]

here is da final update, almost done wid it...
comments,critix n suggestions will help!

http://i778.photobucket.com/albums/yy61/atulkatdare/3d%20scene%20modeling%20competition/atulkatdare2012_wip05.jpg

regards~atul k.

[atulkatdare]

dats it frnz, thnx 4 checking dis thread n ur suggestions...
im posting above image in 'final entries' thread, but still dis thread will alwayz be open 4 critix n comments, dat will surely help!

loved working here, regards~atul k.

edit: happy new year to all!

[Dr.Rno]

Like the angle, like the copter and how it fits to the comp...... cool

[atulkatdare]

Like the angle, like the copter and how it fits to the comp...... cool

thanks a lot sir!

[BBB]

well done atulkatdare, the rain is a good point

[eyecon]

nicely done atulkatdare, I'm sorry I wasn't able to comment on your thread... been really busy juggling between my own painting and the holidays... but still you have done well here. Good luck!

[atulkatdare]

well done atulkatdare, the rain is a good point

thank u so much sir...

[atulkatdare]

nicely done atulkatdare, I'm sorry I wasn't able to comment on your thread... been really busy juggling between my own painting and the holidays... but still you have done well here. Good luck!

gr8 to hv ur comment sir, as i hv learned a lot frm ur previous works...
thnx a lot, dat will boost me for further improvements...

[Akim]

Nice! But, i think your work will be look better if u desaturate your buildings and make it more green. Its only little advice, man ;)

[atulkatdare]

Nice! But, i think your work will be look better if u desaturate your buildings and make it more green. Its only little advice, man ;)

thnx a lot bro, i'LL surely work on it considering ur advice..

[StevoDigital]

A nicely integrated comp! At first glance the waves still look a bit too symmetrical though. It's only when you look more closely that you see they are different.

[atulkatdare]

A nicely integrated comp! At first glance the waves still look a bit too symmetrical though. It's only when you look more closely that you see they are different.

thnx a lot 4 pointing it out...i actually wanted 2 do a little more modification on the waves, i'LL surely make it if i get sum time...

[andrewhall1234]

Hey,

I have to say that this image looks really good. The advice given has made it even better than it was.

I look forward to seeing more work from you, very inspiring.