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Hi everybody!
This time im gonna show Venice without any water to show post apocaliptic future.
This is my first sketch. But now I don't happy with that. Im going to show this more massive. So, I going to make another sketch with the same mood but from the aerial view or something like that, to show dead city without any water in canals. And I'll defenetly destroy part of buildings in my work at this time ;)
http://www.fimin.su/challenge/new_begining/sketch_01.jpg
raulfabi
08-01-2010, 10:40 PM
Not bad ideea Akim.
Think also about the good part, the '' smoke clearing'' :)
Cheers.
eyecon
09-01-2010, 04:07 AM
Looks promising man... I would definitely watch out for this. The idea looks solid and I would love to see venice without water. That in itself would be a challenge
Not bad ideea Akim.
Think also about the good part, the '' smoke clearing'' :)
Cheers.
oh,yes! Sure. I forgot bout this phrase in header. Tnx, man ! http://theoasis.ru/forums/public/style_emoticons/default/beer.gif
Looks promising man... I would definitely watch out for this. The idea looks solid and I would love to see venice without water. That in itself would be a challenge
Agree ... but I'll try :roll: Tnx mate!
atulkatdare
09-01-2010, 11:15 AM
nice start bro, good luck
nice start bro, good luck
Tnx, man!
DannyCG
09-01-2010, 06:38 PM
Very interesting, I will keep an eye on this one.
I like water...
How to start a new life without it?..
I like water...
How to start a new life without it?..
легко :haha:
ok, I think I defined with my base ref shot ... lets go
http://fimin.su/challenge/new_begining/dead_venice.jpg
а за кадром великан с соломинкой )))
And you are - that giant )))
atulkatdare
13-01-2010, 06:49 AM
good going man, i like it...
Venice without water ?!?!? Omg! How can that be ?!?!?
p.s. its not the final image, just big update
http://www.fimin.su/challenge/new_begining/plate_base.jpg
2BIG3k
30-01-2010, 07:19 PM
Great, I really buy into it. :)
Maybe you find something to add, which gives your scene a little more drama or something absorbing. Don't want to indicate that there have to be birds in every matte :haha: but maybe some element of that kind. Could also be an interesting cloud formation or some sparse vegetation in the fore/midground.
Good luck and cheers,
Marc
Thak you so much for your advice, Marc! Of cource I'll add some stuff, now it just a base picture. I have a big plans and ..... little time :)
Final image:
http://www.fimin.su/challenge/new_begining/venice_3dtotal.jpg
http://www.fimin.su/challenge/new_begining/venice_3dtotal_baloon.jpg
WIP:
http://www.fimin.su/challenge/new_begining/wip.jpg
Good luck to all of us !!!
fooliisa
12-07-2010, 11:27 AM
The art you have kept is wonderful. I like the finishing. The clarity is of shapes is perfect. I want to suggest you to improve the color contrasting. I suggest you to use the contrast of black and blue.
fooliisa, thanks for your advice. Going to back to it soon for work with colors.
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