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Born23th
10-01-2010, 08:55 PM
Hi Everyone!
I am In. Here are my fisrt sketches:
The Earth has been destroyed. Volcanoes are born. The oceans have dried up quickly. The air is now unbreathable but man can continue to live protected by spheres of life ...
http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/7829/step1lw.jpg
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/5951/step2l.jpg
http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/3739/step3l.jpg
Jaxko
10-01-2010, 08:59 PM
nice concept, love the bubble idea reminds me star wars with the underwater city (ep.1 I think) This with the final details will be awesome, good luck and Im looking forward to your updates.
raulfabi
10-01-2010, 09:20 PM
Excellent, and original ideea man.
Life near volcanos looks great.
Cheers :)
shanmatte30
11-01-2010, 05:23 AM
nice concept...2nd one feel is good. i think you make a transparent like,
So thin as to transmit light in the bubble. right? keep it up man....
http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=72165
http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=72316
Born23th
11-01-2010, 10:00 PM
Hi all!
Thanks for your comments! Please find today's update. I removed temporarily the half spheres. Easier to work without them.
I've added the sky, some details and enlarged the composition.
What about the perspective? Is it OK?
That's all for today!
http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/4725/step4l.jpg
Jaxko
11-01-2010, 10:06 PM
yea, the extended sky looks much better, loving all the small details you have put in it. Good luck and cant wait for even more updates :D The city looks sinister
2BIG3k
12-01-2010, 03:57 PM
This will look great with the color contrast of the blue spheres. Keep it up. :)
atulkatdare
13-01-2010, 06:54 AM
i like your concept, and also nice sketches...good luck for the updates!
Born23th
21-01-2010, 10:32 PM
Hi!
Here is today's update
I added some details: volcano - city - lava. I created big buildings with photoshop.(not easy). not finished...
Next steps...
- Find what to put in the foreground right (maybe missile launchers used to destroy meteorites? -> protection tower..)
- finish the city... adding lights and little buildings... (extension)
- adding again details outside the city and atmospheric effects...
still lot's of work!
Any comments?
http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/6726/step8ln.jpg
OpiNelZ
23-01-2010, 09:28 AM
nice one mate it looks good, i like the mood
Born23th
25-01-2010, 10:00 PM
Thanks,
Today's update!
I added the foreground, the plant and the second part of the city.
I will maybee add people in the foreground watching the city...
Any comments?
http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/7804/step9l.jpg
2BIG3k
30-01-2010, 03:18 PM
Like the style of the building on the right, would be cool to see some buildings in the main city following this style.
And I guess the smoke of the background vulcano would be in front of the cloud. ;)
Cheers,
Marc
Born23th
31-01-2010, 12:11 AM
Thank for your comments mark!
I've decided to delete the smoke. I added a last building. It did not look like the one you were talking about. But It is made of almost the same reference... Il will show you the details in the final Wip...
and here is today's update!
http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/8334/step13l.jpg
2BIG3k
31-01-2010, 11:46 AM
It's getting really nice. Try to unify the black levels a little bit especially in the right portion of the city, since now the blacks of the rocks are quite dark, whereas the darkest portions of the city are rather dark grey. ;)
Good luck and cheers,
Marc
Born23th
31-01-2010, 03:49 PM
Thanks,
This picture could be the final one. I've lighted the picture, cropped it added it vigneting. Any comments for the lasts modifications?
Born23th
01-02-2010, 06:26 PM
Final Image and Wip Image!! Thanks for all your comments!!!
http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/7900/born23thmattepaintingan.jpg
http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/7900/born23thmattepaintingan.jpg
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