View Full Version : Ojah - Snow Creature - Beasty-thingy
Hey guys, been a while since i entered a contest, so heres a first sketch, critics are appreciated.
04-02-2010, 12:30 AM
04-02-2010, 12:36 AM
liking the concept :)
04-02-2010, 01:25 AM
WTB more fat rolls! Looking good
04-02-2010, 06:37 AM
so good man!
04-02-2010, 06:42 AM
if those're pecs they should be firmer; ir they're breasts they gotta be saggier.
Damn, having breasts on a character does increase the number of replies :). Thanks for the comments, the breasts are actually meant as moobs, not boobs, to look like a lot of fat is draped over his muscles, but im not sure yet how to get that look.
And ive made another sketch, looks more like an icemonster now i guess, but it lost some of his weirdness, so ill have to get that back in the next one.
04-02-2010, 11:56 AM
Sorry for the paint over, but I think you'll get more depth out of this character with more exaggerations, beef up the whiskers to add to the "...what...." factor and add some MORE fat rolls. Make sure to get some different coloration to show he's eaten well. He's the bad ass monster of the frozen wastes!
Awesome, thanks! Looks better, ill definitely use these changes!
And heres another sketch, according to a friend it looks like a psychobunny, tried to get it a bit more like the first one, seems to have lost his tits in the process tho..
Comments are welcome as always!
04-02-2010, 04:28 PM
Looks good, but in all honesty, I like the second one's body style better. I think that the first and third have a more lanky feel and the second one seems more bulky and overall more intimidating.
04-02-2010, 07:25 PM
I don't dislike the rabbit form, but I preferred the heavier body style, with the small ears; the big ears make him look like a bit too much like Stitch, at least as sketch, I'd rather see you swap the big ears in favor of some antlers. Just my two cents, in any case you're kicking around some pretty cool ideas.
hehe... those "ears" are antlers (moose-style, tilted backward to make him look a bit more agile)... hooray for sketching.. But i guess ill go with a changed number 2, looks the most ice-creature anyway. Thanks for the comments :)
I agree with warlock. The ears just don't fit. Maybe you may want to consider some downward horns?
07-02-2010, 07:06 PM
yes, big curly horns would be awesome
the "ears" were antlers.. Already made some sketches (paper) with horns, probably will go with some spiral horns. Might do some 3d tomorrow, kinda busy with work atm.
And im back again, was quite busy last week. Did a simple 3d model to test shapes and did an overpaint on the last one to show my ideas. Please let me know what you think of this version.
22-02-2010, 12:10 AM
go with number 5, it looks pretty solid. The sketch that you posted seems a little off in the legs, but as long as you nail it on the model who give a flying flip about sketches?!
I for one would put in a personal request that you model both the spiral horns AND the moose antlers and give a nice WIP shot when you get further along.
22-02-2010, 04:25 AM
1,5, and 6 feel right. more 5/6 then 1, though.
24-02-2010, 09:22 PM
I like 1.
nice concept :D
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