View Full Version : Abumomo - The Lost Jungle
17-04-2010, 12:59 PM
17-04-2010, 01:30 PM
17-04-2010, 05:50 PM
17-04-2010, 11:43 PM
I think you should make the picture more widescreen. It could open up the sky a bit more and you could do a little bit more with depth. It looks a little bit 2D at the moment. Keep it up!
18-04-2010, 05:32 PM
thanks for the comments guys
18-04-2010, 07:12 PM
18-04-2010, 07:37 PM
Good progression. It needs some perspective changes and lighting as well, but your not done so...Keep it going...
19-04-2010, 06:24 AM
I agree good start but needs alot more lighting effect yet which i'm sure you're aware of.
19-04-2010, 12:36 PM
Good start. Nice and clean mattes in the foreground. The three mountains on the right still look a little to similiar as for height and shape. Good luck. :)
19-04-2010, 07:04 PM
i was not really happy with the temple, so i changed it.
what do you think is the cave better?
20-04-2010, 08:20 AM
Cave is definitely better imo. :)
20-04-2010, 08:37 AM
adds a little bit more definatly
20-04-2010, 08:45 AM
20-04-2010, 03:18 PM
21-04-2010, 04:40 AM
good job my frnd, very well done!
23-04-2010, 06:13 AM
i think its done, what do you think?
23-04-2010, 08:57 AM
really very nice, although I think the trees of the left look too dark, but they do frame the scene very nicely :)
30-04-2010, 10:43 PM
super nice work : all details of the plants are VERY clear :) I really like the 2 dark caves :) the shadows are fine for me BUT the bit of a statue on the bottom right of is a bit to " shiny " for me :) well its depend where your public must see first : the caves, waterfalls, the moon or the bit of statues. ^^
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