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Hey, Interesting Topic, I also am into this challenge, good luck everyone!....
(my English is not good, so :xx: patience)
EDITED:
Concept: The Lost Jungle...*(Brief, I have to translate this better)
*(There are many paths and caves that you and other Tomb Raiders around the world can choose to find the main
way that drives to the big laberint where nobody before can avoid without lost their lives,
but just one cave is the rigth, the other caves are more laberints into the jungle's deep,
or better said tricks and cheats that the king's servants have used to protect the secrect tomb.
Hundreds of raiders were trying this before without lucky,
but now one of them is the first in see the secret place, and with this
another story begins because is necessary find the secrect key to empty
the big laberint that right now is under water,
this is the only way to avoid the fallwaters under the Tomb's cave, thus..
for that reason there're no way to avoid the other caves trought the deep jungle,
neither the Big laberint 'till you arise the King's mouth
which is the door for the final destiny,
the lost world that has the most wonderful treasure of ever and forever,
and the secrect for the ethernity.)
Composition WIP:
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_6SMp5uuYlZo/S8sy3KFG7OI/AAAAAAAADoQ/Yxrq9E-wNvM/s1600/tombraider.jpg 1
http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_6SMp5uuYlZo/S8tDfqE_xmI/AAAAAAAADoY/Rh3tnvN4LCs/s1600/tombraider.jpg 2
shai99
18-04-2010, 06:07 PM
no probs in your english it doesn't matter...:dance:
Howdy Partner
18-04-2010, 06:27 PM
I like it, jungle and a cave. It's great that you are covering everything in the brief and I really like the camera angle. I look forward to seeing more development!
M_Cederstrom
21-04-2010, 06:05 PM
it kinda dark and sinester in a way. :D
Hey All, shai99 - Howdy Partner - M_Cederstrom, Thank you for dropping by...that´s great to know.
Still I'm developing the main idea, here is the progress of it (the Tom Raider seeking the King's treasure within a dense jungle), I will pay more attention to the perspective of lower right.. where the petroglyphs of an ancient culture will be in place.
http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_6SMp5uuYlZo/S892elIlhZI/AAAAAAAADo4/jp6bJF2kYdE/s1600/tombraiderC.jpg
wip 4,. corrections in the overall image.
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_6SMp5uuYlZo/S9BaQSR2jII/AAAAAAAADpI/ZXAUR5vpKsc/s1600/tombraiderD.jpg
vnmribaya
22-04-2010, 06:29 PM
cool, the ruins in the back, looks pretty nice man, waiting for more
Vnmribaya...thank you, waiting for your updates also!.
Well, Today I worked in the composition, and the progress is here...I'm sorry for the image size but is to know what I have to change later when I'll be working on this again with fresh eyes to start the detail process.
first part here...
http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_6SMp5uuYlZo/S9JaBzkny5I/AAAAAAAADrw/Y9wztO-jaqM/s1600/dalerepi_10wip23April2010.jpg 10 (wip 4)
http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_6SMp5uuYlZo/S9JY0X5__jI/AAAAAAAADqo/pFjUe-VxaxM/s1600/dalerepi_01wip23April2010.jpg 01 (flipped)
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_6SMp5uuYlZo/S9JY9-RGk0I/AAAAAAAADqw/C6F-cRv7O8A/s1600/dalerepi_02wip23April2010.jpg 02
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_6SMp5uuYlZo/S9JZAdYQ_nI/AAAAAAAADq4/vxLOVfqcCfo/s1600/dalerepi_03wip23April2010.jpg 03
http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_6SMp5uuYlZo/S9JZDNdMvBI/AAAAAAAADrA/Q19DRwIERjY/s1600/dalerepi_04wip23April2010.jpg 04
http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_6SMp5uuYlZo/S9JZFgcUxUI/AAAAAAAADrI/ZuZt8bVUjQw/s1600/dalerepi_05wip23April2010.jpg 05
Second part is here, no more for this weekend...
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_6SMp5uuYlZo/S9JZIb4mz7I/AAAAAAAADrQ/Ex75E9dlHYA/s1600/dalerepi_06wip23April2010.jpg 06
http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_6SMp5uuYlZo/S9JZLngEpMI/AAAAAAAADrY/YG08FT6KUFA/s1600/dalerepi_07wip23April2010.jpg 07
http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_6SMp5uuYlZo/S9JZOGju9HI/AAAAAAAADrg/rNZfFcTC6AU/s1600/dalerepi_08wip23April2010.jpg 08
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_6SMp5uuYlZo/S9JZQzY0YhI/AAAAAAAADro/R2dZkW4Gixw/s1600/dalerepi_09wip23April2010.jpg 09
that's all.
chris_solo
24-04-2010, 08:40 AM
the decor and the effect of depth and really successful, great work,
but, it lacks sharpness in your image...specified more volumes, is my opinion.
wargrafix
24-04-2010, 08:50 AM
I really like the color palate used in this. Very good work there.
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washka
24-04-2010, 08:53 AM
In interestingness I give you 4 stars, in clarity I don't give you any.
Like the constructive originality, good inspiration.
vnmribaya
24-04-2010, 03:54 PM
awesome!! the ruins in the back are incredable, i meen it, th eperspective too, this is getting better an beter, can wait for th e details man, keep it comming
M_Cederstrom
26-04-2010, 07:38 PM
what an update. :D looking great.
Tirael K.S.
28-04-2010, 07:39 PM
Interesting color mix,looks great
Hey All, thank you guys for your advices, thoughts and crits, Chris_solo - Wargrafix.- Washka -Vnmribaya - M_Cederstrom - Tirael K.S.
I'll be working on details this night here is an update, I'm trying to follow your advices and crits, thank you again..I apreciate it!..
for now I did also the update of the Brief, following the main concept that was given for the mods, in the top of the thread is that; I hope you understand the idea, because I didn't use the google's translator this time :) I'm going to do my best in that as I can.
looking forward to your threads...
The Lost Jungle...progress
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_6SMp5uuYlZo/S9jI-wcei3I/AAAAAAAADsw/4qbNFkODgI4/s1600/tombraiderH0.jpg.jpg (wip 4) 1
http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_6SMp5uuYlZo/S9jJAltyR5I/AAAAAAAADs4/2uZKFFh3iRk/s1600/tombraiderH0BW.jpg.jpg B/W 2
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_6SMp5uuYlZo/S9jIcw8ckLI/AAAAAAAADsI/_ODjIW7TFyo/s1600/tombraiderH1.jpg.jpg 3
http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_6SMp5uuYlZo/S9jIhQHdMrI/AAAAAAAADsQ/jmqGdH8t68c/s1600/tombraiderH2.jpg.JPG 4
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_6SMp5uuYlZo/S9jIlVUIXMI/AAAAAAAADsY/ASqKlxODr8Q/s1600/tombraiderH3.jpg.JPG 5
http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_6SMp5uuYlZo/S9jInT-Hs9I/AAAAAAAADsg/aYyKGC76e38/s1600/tombraiderH4.jpg.jpg 6 working on Tomb Raider detail.
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_6SMp5uuYlZo/S9jIpXJ8oEI/AAAAAAAADso/2W80PgifpTY/s1600/tombraiderH5.jpg.jpg 7 working in the petroglyphs and sculps.
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