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I've left it quite late to start this and I may not have time to finish but i will try. Going for a late evening just after sunset look.http://i634.photobucket.com/albums/uu66/lawc/lostjungle.jpg
20-04-2010, 10:12 PM
Really nice start. :)
21-04-2010, 04:42 AM
hey bro, gr8 to see you competing...will look for this thread!
good start btw,
21-04-2010, 04:53 AM
I don't know why, but somehow i don't see the picture..... He gives the white box with a red cross...
I like your idea and sunset decision.
only one small advise: try to go out of symmetrical look
I think, you need to bend our right mountain into left to make composition like bowl.
I have decided to remove the mountain on the left, as Akim pointed out it was making the composition to symmetrical. Having said that i did really like the shape of that mountain so it may turn up in a future matte at some point. I may add a small temple on the left or little rock formation but I haven't decided yet.
Think I am going to call this one finished.
Hi Claw, i think you should desaturate a bit the sky. It's too red/orange
27-04-2010, 10:04 AM
It look very cool. I am curious what you are going to do to get the theme right. Its not yet an mysterious aztek jungle. When i see this i want to take a chair and relax when i see this backdrop :) Looks too peacefull at the moment.
The brief doesn't say that the jungle has to be aztec or mayan, isn't it? but i think that maybe the rock mountain breaks the idea of the jungle... try to add vegtation to that mountain
29-04-2010, 02:31 AM
nice! looks pleasant to the eyes.
29-04-2010, 09:04 AM
I really like the trees you put on top of the right rock formation.
Some things that bother me: The reflection on the rivers is off it think. The brightest area should be below the sun. The waterfall should be more in shadow I guess. The mid area forrest still looks a little too flat, try to break up the lighting that you applied to that layer a bit.
Thanks for the advice every one! I have desaturated the sky a little and darkened the waterfall. Also changed the reflection on the river (Good call 2BIG3K, school boy error on my part). Thanks everyone.
You have a great mood here, Claw!
30-04-2010, 05:06 PM
Pretty sweet image you've got there, very nice warm feeling and love the mood it's created :)
30-04-2010, 05:42 PM
I do love sunsets picture :D lol - nice work !!
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