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22-04-2010, 06:43 PM
Here's my entry..hmm actually still not much to show..:roll: but will do an update in the near future. Anyway, if there's any c&c are surely welcome :) thanks!
23-04-2010, 09:00 AM
Too dark and needs alot more to really finish it up, at the moment I can hardly make much out of what has been put into the scene and no W.I.P?
24-04-2010, 07:42 PM
chunkymunky, thanks for your kind feedback :). I decided to change the idea for this entry.
Here's a very early WIP.
26-04-2010, 06:37 AM
the progress so far:
26-04-2010, 08:24 AM
26-04-2010, 09:05 AM
26-04-2010, 10:06 AM
26-04-2010, 10:37 AM
26-04-2010, 11:56 AM
start play with the color
26-04-2010, 12:35 PM
add some fog and mountains behind.
26-04-2010, 01:23 PM
add few plants for foreground..
26-04-2010, 01:44 PM
fix a perspective
26-04-2010, 04:05 PM
I honestly liked the image without the fog, the laying water and the waterfall being centered is a nice visual thing, there's some problems with light directions to my eyes and possibly some shadows that need to be tweaked/add/removed etc. But I think it would look better if the fog if you choose to keep it was grey/white, having it almost golden makes it look unrealistic.....just my opinion though :)
26-04-2010, 06:44 PM
chunkymunky, Thanks for your comment :), hmm..I think you're right. Now I used blue tone to balance the golden tone that I had before. is this better?
26-04-2010, 06:59 PM
fix the color a bit..
27-04-2010, 03:20 AM
another update. hmm..however I'm not satisfied with the result..maybe gonna start again with the new one.
27-04-2010, 08:02 AM
ok..I start a new one now :)
27-04-2010, 08:04 AM
Hi Androgs, in the first matte try to avoid the simmetry. In the second, try to move the mountain in the middle. It's better for the composition if this mountain is in one side of the image.
27-04-2010, 02:27 PM
The latest image posted looks like it'd be pretty good, there's certainly potential there, but dude you really gotta get a move on, there's really not alot of time left at all now!
27-04-2010, 10:13 PM
BBB & chunkymunky, thank you so much for such a kind critiques and comments:)
Here's the update so far, decided to keep the mountain at the center but smaller in size.
28-04-2010, 11:10 AM
That's working pretty nicely for you.
28-04-2010, 03:47 PM
Thank you , chunkymunky:)..I hope can make it well until the deadline. Here's another update..
28-04-2010, 06:58 PM
Wow, once the trees are corrected in the foreground I think this will look amazing! (well, it does right now, too, but you get my meaning right?)
29-04-2010, 05:43 AM
be careful with the light....
29-04-2010, 04:49 PM
thefmilyofblood, Thanks for your kind comment :), I do hope this one can count..
rofiqalfata, Thank you for remind me, I change the light source after read your comment :)..it made me realize..
Hope this one is proper
29-04-2010, 05:27 PM
This is looking brilliant, the only thing that is catching my eye and pulling it into the centre is that wave cutting through the image. It might be best to cover/fix that up. I think colour correcting the water may look good as well.
29-04-2010, 06:39 PM
Jaxko, thank you so much for addressing that :)
here's the update again:
30-04-2010, 03:03 AM
foreground and background image have different horizon position, i think you should fix the foreground....
30-04-2010, 08:52 AM
Thanks rofiqalfata !!:)
here's an update at the moment
30-04-2010, 09:48 AM
yeah!!! that's cool!!! watch the saturation of the vegetations... keep going..., fast!!! time's ticking..., you have to finish it on time... go go go!
30-04-2010, 05:34 PM
Amazing work - just loving the little "mysterious boat" in the middle of the lake.. might be indiana jones exploring your place :D lol keep going on !
30-04-2010, 06:50 PM
Thanks again, rofiqalfata :)..I fix it now
Standesign, Thanks for your kind comment :)
Decided to finalize the image, here it is the final entry from me:
This is the hi res:
Good luck to everyone!!
01-05-2010, 03:48 AM
this has turned very well, good luck!
01-05-2010, 05:17 AM
post it here (http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=75650)
01-05-2010, 12:27 PM
Wow great final image, well done, good luck in the comp :)
02-05-2010, 07:09 AM
Great piece with a nice settling mood. Some oddities going on at the end of the waterfall though, but that is minor.
Thumbs up from me! :D
02-05-2010, 02:08 PM
rofigalfata,chunkymunky,atulkatdare, and hulahuga:
Thank you so much all for all the kind comments and supports. I really can't make it without the supports from you all..
Good luck as well for you all that submit for this challenge and all the best :)
02-05-2010, 02:20 PM
really good work, you have improved a lot this month, im really enjoying the final image. :)
14-05-2010, 12:51 PM
Its very nice.The nature beauty look very nice.The colour colour combination that are used is also very nice.some picture look like you combine three picture in one picture.Its really good job.
14-05-2010, 09:57 PM
you new entry is very lovely...I like that..I just think that you lighten a little of the fogs...
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