Silver Car in the city

[keraj37]

Hi, sorry for deleting previous post, but I wanted to make space for this one render, little better IMHO :)

C&C welcome!

http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/5687/silverpuntointhecity4.jpg

[tjerkotten]

could you post some wip shots...

[keraj37]

Sure, I can make some shots, but in what part of it u are intrested? Modeling part took somthing about 1 week and I dont have WIP shots of it, but I can make some grabs of lighting, materials, wire etc, cheers

[keraj37]

here are some shots:

http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/353/screenic.jpg

http://img688.imageshack.us/img688/1143/matv.jpg

http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/9149/enviro.jpg

[chunkymunky]

I think you're being quite clever here, because you are using an image for the street buildings rather than actually modelling it it won't matter because you are going for a moving image, but it might not look good if you tried a still.....it all depends on how realistic your street building renders out I suppose, but i'm liking the progress so far :)

[keraj37]

thanks munky, like u said, it wasnt nessesary to model building as far as it will be blured in the end:) cheers

[ciarand]

Looks good so far, and as Munky said, clever use of the image plane to get the blur right rather than using an image in post.

Looks like you've got some problems with the modeling though, around the arches its quite lumpy, kind of like its been shaped with a hammer and the curve of the arch is also not very smooth.

Around the door seams you could probably harden up the edges, they seem a little soft.

Post a wireframe and clay render, it will be easier to see what can be fixed! Nice work though.

[arthurduque]

Great! shaders!!
excelent

[keraj37]

ciarand: thanks for feedback. I think u are right becouse on other forums I got the same suggestions - mesh is bad actually. Thanks again!

arthurduque: thanks man, I am glad u like it:)

[MStandar]

The modeling is good, but a bit bumpy on many areas, but you get better and better all the time, wich is very good, practice and practice, never give up.

Rendering wise i actually like it, don't think that much of the modeling because the composition is very good.

Well nice work, keraj, nice work.

[Relderson]

Nice one! looks real :)

[Moises Gomes]

Incredible! ...:shout:

[keraj37]

MStandar: thank u u are right about the modeling it is not the best mesh:)

Relderson: thank u:)

Moises Gomes: Thank u to, but it is credible I think hehe:)

cheers