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bassam_cars
19-09-2010, 06:35 PM
Hi and welcome

i want to show my new design in 3d's max and vray sp4 - this design is special for my father cause before some days my father is sit beside me and say open this program cause i want you to design the car now in my mind > and for 3 houres we complete bodies car , in last - this car is content some things such new glass window in door car and new place for stop light --etc .

Finaly i complete this car by 6 days (3 days for design and 3 days for rendering )

every photo is finshed at 5 hours cause this design is double smooth in edit poly + mesh smooth and render in hd (1920*1080) pixle.

Now my father say (please display this design on 3d sites and tell me what about members comment) .

Thank you

bassamcars
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TO SEE MORE PHOTOS ABOUT THIS CAR PLEASE GO TO THIS LINK :
http://www.bassam-cars.webs.com

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http://forum.cgarena.com/download/file.php?mode=view&id=19375

http://forum.cgarena.com/download/file.php?mode=view&id=19376

http://forum.cgarena.com/download/file.php?mode=view&id=19377

http://forum.cgarena.com/download/file.php?mode=view&id=19378

http://forum.cgarena.com/download/file.php?mode=view&id=19379

http://forum.cgarena.com/download/file.php?mode=view&id=19380

M_Cederstrom
19-09-2010, 10:11 PM
cool design. :D

inveni0
19-09-2010, 11:14 PM
It's an interesting design, but it's not practical for street driving. There are too many blind spots. It would make racing hazardous, too. I do like the wheels, though.

bassam_cars
20-09-2010, 08:33 AM
Mr (M_Cederstrom)

thank you Mr for nice comment .

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Mr (inveni0)

hhhhhhhhhhh yes it is - this design is making for dangerous racing .

thank you very much and i wish to like this .

I_AM_DAVE_COX
20-09-2010, 03:39 PM
I gotta say that I do like concept cars but the design on this one does nothing for me.

Well done for trying something different.

eutous
20-09-2010, 05:25 PM
Awesome!

bassam_cars
21-09-2010, 05:45 AM
I_AM_DAVE_COX :

thank you for your hardly comment .
i was wait your comment to hear to encourage you not to make me feel like a failure before you .

If you are a professional designer you should encourage others.

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ok see my Fj cruser design - go to this link :

http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=78711

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thanks for your sharp comment .

bassam_cars
21-09-2010, 05:47 AM
eutous :

thank you for you nice comment .

I_AM_DAVE_COX
21-09-2010, 09:07 AM
I_AM_DAVE_COX :

thank you for your hardly comment .
i was wait your comment to hear to encourage you not to make me feel like a failure before you .

If you are a professional designer you should encourage others.

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ok see my Fj cruser design - go to this link :

http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=78711

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thanks for your sharp comment .

Bassam, I did not mean to offend. But you did post this in a public forum therefore you are going to get criticism. As a designer you shouldn't blindly encourage others or praise them. You should help them improve. I was just voicing my opinion about the design, it wasn't a personal attack.

I do encourage other and I do help others.

Scrat_SG
21-09-2010, 01:45 PM
Bassam, I did not mean to offend. But you did post this in a public forum therefore you are going to get criticism. As a designer you shouldn't blindly encourage others or praise them. You should help them improve. I was just voicing my opinion about the design, it wasn't a personal attack.

I do encourage other and I do help others.

I completely agree with Dave here, if you post your work it should be to get advise / crits not pure blind praise. Should everyone that ever sees your work always say that it looks great but, not tell you that you have some issue & where that issue is or how you can fix it, you would take an insane long time to improve your skills.

Conserning the design:
Nice concept. Only issue I have with the design is that that back wing & the post running down the middle of the back window would completely block your abillity to see out your rear view mirror.

bassam_cars
21-09-2010, 02:27 PM
ok Mr thank you

bassam_cars
21-09-2010, 02:40 PM
ok Mr Scrat_SG and thank you for comment

all you say about design is right. but I was angry about this Term , I_AM_DAVE is said (but the design on this one does nothing for me )

because this Term is very Offensive if it did not say it was the best .

finaly - thank you for interest .

Psycho Mantis
21-09-2010, 02:46 PM
ok, i guess itīs up to me to be the ass here :)

the modelling isnīt good. there are too many visible flaws. (pinching, unfinished eges, lowpoly areas, its all one piece - car bodies consist of several parts - and i bet you know that)
materials und textures need a lot of work, the compositing is lousy and out of scale.

so is the car design. the proportions do not fit, and it looks like a toy car. considering the wheelsize and spoilers and stuff - the frontpart where the motorblock is, is way to small. the whole thing is not plausible. sorry to tell you that. saw your other models on your site- same goes for them.

but keep it up, you got some skills, now improve them.

I_AM_DAVE_COX
21-09-2010, 02:47 PM
Ok fine. I am sorry.

I won't offer my opinion on your work again.

Good luck with your career as a car designer.

@Psycho Mantis - I agree with you too.

eutous
21-09-2010, 09:29 PM
Dave, just a question, is it a sports car? You can test it for streamline and airflow (Don't really know how that is done)

http://ysm.research.yale.edu/images/78.1/articles-swimming-streamline.jpg



http://www.yourdictionary.com/images/main/A4aerody.jpg



I would love to see the same concept modded into an aerodynamic vehicle. That's just what I think I'd do. The car is awesome, as I said before nonetheless.

I_AM_DAVE_COX
21-09-2010, 09:51 PM
I would say it is a sports car looking at the shape of the car and layout. But you can't aerodynamically test non-parametric data which is a shame.

bassam_cars
22-09-2010, 07:39 AM
fianlly

I would like to say - this model is just a concept model.

now i would like to accept me as a new member for this nice web site

I_AM_DAV_COX , PSYCHO , EUTOUS , SCART_SG >>>>all is brothers for me .

thank you very much for all and allow me to display my designs , and this hardly comments is useful for me , as I_AM_DAVE_COX is say .

thanks for all