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[3dave]

here it is ,

may be planning to creat it in 3d may be...

dave

[Daniel]

to me it lacks detail and the proportions are a bit off from side to side. What I would say is, find some references and try to get a basic idea from them, to be anatomically correct. It's what I usually do, since I suck at 2d and can't really come up with much by myself. Fortunately once I have the pic in front of me I can reproduce it pretty perfectly. So I'm ok in that way, dunno bout you. but don't give up. :)

[MR. BROWN]

more detail....try to draw your next character making contact with the ground...also make the character strike a pose.....yah...hope this was helpful...

brown

[rexzimus]

I really like the head and the fin type arms. The simple look is good i think. Without having much detail it makes the creature look really advanced and very organic. Nice concept would like to see him in an action pose or something a little more exciting.

hang loose

[Johny]

i agree, try to make its skin "reflect\shine" , it would give a clean organic effect :D

P.S - is he a underwater creature ( i suppose )?