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10-01-2011, 01:19 PM
i need some crit to improve this image please ,im having trouble with the crome effect on the handle bars its very black im using 3ds max and vray
10-01-2011, 01:30 PM
Haha that does kinda look like Amsterdam.
U forgot a crucial thing tho, the "amsterdammertjes"
The little poles on the on the sidewalk with the 3 X marks on it.
About the chrome, maybe show us how the material is currently built?
And also what ur light setup is?
Oh and as an Amsterdam resident I can tell u we never leave our bikes unchained to something, not if u want to keep ur bike that is.
10-01-2011, 01:44 PM
one thing that would need a subtle change is the cobbles . too reflective even if it rained they don't seem to be damped (darker color) but i never been to amsterdam so i might be mistaking
10-01-2011, 01:44 PM
thanks tycane3d i found a pic of the amsterdammertjes lol im adding them now along with a chain will post light setup and materail soon along with update render
10-01-2011, 01:51 PM
rocneasta too reflective yes i did the in the post with a specular layer can be adjusted in the final stage .its just had quick post as a test
10-01-2011, 03:30 PM
Just came home and saw the image on my proper screen instead of mobile device, one extra thing, due to light polution only the brightest of stars are visible in amsterdam...:(
10-01-2011, 03:46 PM
yeah the stars look kinda bad it was in post again ive done the xxx things now looking better i will post render soon
10-01-2011, 05:07 PM
wires /chrome mat set up and scene lighting
10-01-2011, 05:22 PM
10-01-2011, 06:13 PM
updated render low quailty
10-01-2011, 06:34 PM
I think the bump on the bike is waaaay too much.
it's a nice touch, but it can be better :)
10-01-2011, 06:45 PM
cheers robbert543 i will fix that on the next render
10-01-2011, 09:04 PM
update render forgot to sort the bump
10-01-2011, 09:49 PM
still struggling with the chrome please help
10-01-2011, 10:13 PM
some other renders
11-01-2011, 02:42 AM
update render chromes looking better now any more crits ?
11-01-2011, 11:17 AM
final image i think vrits please
11-01-2011, 11:32 AM
cool work mate!
in my opinion, depth of field should be modified, because even the bottom left corner is in focus, but most of the city (mainly the upper right, and right side of the image) is total blur.
I'm no expert in rendering for sure, so if you find my critic not true, than dont bother, u did a great job ;)
11-01-2011, 12:01 PM
yeah you might be right m8 ill cvhange it bit to burry now i look at it
12-01-2011, 12:59 PM
i like this street :D
05-02-2011, 10:29 AM
I think if you drop the ref. glossiness level down a little bit and add some reflection maps on it, you attain a more accurate result.
And also there is a lack of deepness in the image. You might handle it with some lens blur. But job so far I liked it.
05-02-2011, 04:51 PM
haha :D Amsterdam nights en wat zie je een poster van het nieuwe luxor in rotterdam :P
Maar word wel erg mooi! :)
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