Dominace War V - 3D - God of Chaos - TMNI VISION

[TMNI VISION]

Final submission .

[gestis]

Good luck with nice start. ;) Just don't get too ornamental/decorative - that happens, then you repeat the same shape over and over again. I like that big eye and the idea that he does not walk but float.

[miclepickle]

Good luck with nice start. ;) Just don't get too ornamental/decorative - that happens, then you repeat the same shape over and over again. I like that big eye and the idea that he does not walk but float.


I agree, the details on the head(above the nose) are kinda odd...

the 1 eye is ok but I am not overly fond of the overall shape of the head as well as the repeating wavy shapes. doesnt seem very anatomically believable.

but I really like whats going on below the neck... looking pretty sweet, keep up the good work!

[Warlock 279]

Nice start. I'm generally really liking the face, except for the one little bit above the nose/below the eye, that doesn't seem to gel with the rest of the face. Otherwise that's a cool head shape, I really like that mouth, and the upper portion of the torso is looking really good. I'd like to see you push the lower torso [from the waist down] a lot more tho. Right now its really straight, just a continuation of the upper torso down to the ground. I think you could get a lot more interesting with that shape, widening it, maybe adding in some gnarled twisted asymmetrical forms, go crazy with it. He's the god chaos, lets see some chaos!

[zugok]

Looking great so far! Since it is about Chaos you might consider so random forms or mutations.

Cheers

[TMNI VISION]

Hi,

Thanks a lot for such nice comments and great suggestions. Helps a lot. Those designs above the nose is kinda armor peace I was planing for. Sorry they r attached to the head right now :D. I was planing to create the mutant chaotic part to the back. But now have to think should it be to any side. Thanks :) and good luck to everyone.

[DaddyDoom]

Good starter!

[washka]

Nice "start", agree about eye comment , welcome to the comp'.

[miclepickle]

oh, if thats a mask it works fine, might be cool if his flesh attaches to it, similar to how trees sometimes grow through chain link fences...http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3660/3323654050_5498d82852.jpg?v=0

[Puckducker]

Great start on the rough sculpt, the overall shape your character feels great.

I'd say lose the eye entirely though, I feel like your head is working extremely well without it, and it doesn't quite fit in with the design right now.

Overall really solid stuff, looking forward to the updates.

[TMNI VISION]

DaddyDoom , Puckducker Thanks :).

miclepickle : Thats a great reference. Thanks .

Idea for one eye was only for one perception of chaos and Destruction.Two eyes but closed and unable to open is sign of unable of 2nd perception or changing mind from chaos .Just a thought but if does not work have to figure out something else. But anyways did some updates . Hope u guys like it. Thanks :).

[koyima]

Nice, but not chaos I think. Maybe just change the name..? Dig the torso.

[mix_mash]

Your design is looking great. Look forward to seeing it developed.

Anyway, your god need needs to watch out for the 'God of Three Stooges'. He is quite the expert at eye poking. ;P

Paul
(mix_mash)

[washka]

Second sight = pervert, everybody know that... :D

[TMNI VISION]

mix_mash: Thanks.

washka: :D .

Got some updates. Hope u guys like it. Thanks :).

[washka]

The whole shape is asking for a well decorated crown (up the big eye).
(Idea)

[TMNI VISION]

Hi Guys,
Did some changes. Hope you guys like it. Still to design side armors and bottom part of the figure. Thanks :) .

[washka]

It's gettin' huge. More work onto face part/neck. Like thoses bandages "skulls".
Clean or develop back piece.
Add other elements/ideas onto your whole concept, you're good enough.
Blocked with the legs?
Keep it up man!

[TMNI VISION]

Thanks washka :). Right now its just a concept sculpt which was created from polysphere.So, Poly distribution was not ok. Thats y I m having hard time sculpting fine detail on it. But soon I m going to retopo the mesh and transfer few of the detail from concept sculpt and again sculpt fine detail over it. For the leg part I m planing to put most of the details like chaos of life etc. Still to do a lot of works. And need a whole lot of good luck. Thanks .

[NeoGeo]

Two words awe some. Ok that's actually one word but you get what i'm saying

[paulius-st]

killer peace. i like its right hand and how the skin streatches around all of its bodie.
cool sculpt man.

[capitan_popo]

this is looking really nice keep it up....loike the skulls on the arm

[Kaiune3D]

Your really pushing the god side of him I love it. Freakin awesome keep it up.

[Vitrux]

Brilliant !!

[mix_mash]

That looks really good. One of the better entries so far. Look forward to when it's textured.

Paul
(mix_mash)

[Animill]

Great work man! the fusion of of the skulls and body parts went great and the addition of the tail and crown evolved well, but somehow the impact that the eye gave before kinda faded with the new iteration...maybe during texturing that might change or showing more the upper eyelid?

[wil_himura]

Scary!

love this one, specially the right arm. Go go go! (I need more :P)

[TMNI VISION]

NeoGeo: Are you sure awe some is one word ? :) just kidding. Thanks a lot man.

paulius-st: Thanks :).

capitan_popo: Thanks :).

Kaiune3D: Thanks :).

Vitrux: Thanks :)

mix_mash: Thanks Paul :) . Can't wait to texture but still to go long way for modeling.

Animill: Thanks :) . I will try to make the eye more effective on the later submissions.


wil_himura: Thanks :).

[Martin_x]

Looks amazing, especially for concept sculpt.

[koyima]

coming along nicely, can def. see the chaos in him now (literally)

[Puckducker]

Looks great, the whole design is starting to come together nicely. I'd say the skeleton along his back looks a little too flat and painted on, but it's a pretty minor crit. Nice work.

[TMNI VISION]

koyima:Thanks :).

Martin_x: Thanks :).

Puckducker: Thanks a lot :) .I m working on the base mesh .Everything will be separated there so that I can put all the details in zbrush. I will take more care on the skeleton then.

Here is a base mesh I created based on the concept sculpt. Started working for bottom part of the base mesh. After that I will start zbrushing for finer detail .
Hope you guys like this . Thanks :) .

[TMNI VISION]

Hi guys,
Not that much of an update but posting it anyways.Its just screenshot from maya viewport. Thanks :).

[washka]

Gettin' hot here!
Like the skull ornament concept but the cheap repetition kill it, what could you do:
-Try different size, add some different details, scale...
-Different integration ways...change orientation.
That's maybe a useless comment because it's just a WIP and you already know that.

-Like the back small body part, but it needs more integration work, a bit floating, some more fusion/mix with the back maybe?

Down part needs more work, some bracers or something to emphasize hands.

Those are just track man, great work so far, like your entry, keep it up!

[TMNI VISION]

washka: Thanks man you r right about the repetition . Its bugging me too. Doing some concepts about it , and when I m happy will do the change and post it.And also waiting till I m done with the base mesh and get back to zbrush for the final details. But for now I just started on bottom part of the body. Hope you like it.Thanks :).

[Vitrux]

You are getting better with your god, he looks incredible at this point. . very nice details. Love that little Fetus? Alien? that little person down his legs..
Well, even that you need to work more on his body he is looking right I just notice some disproportion in the upper torso.
I see some problems between the Deltoid and the Trapezius muscles. And maybe the clavicle is a bit down and the Pectoralis muscle too small.

It is just what a see, but if you designed he like that from the beginning so it is fine.. he looks really really good anyway.

Keep going

[GregStrangis]

Armor is looking pretty sweet so far! Keep pushing the design!

[xxxcubanxxx]

very nice, really like the anatomy and details on the armor so far

[TMNI VISION]

Thanks a lot guys for such nice comments :). Still working on the bottom part. I will post some updates soon. Thanks.

[GoodAtom]

good job)
I think a nose and the mouth can to try be made more interesting;)

[TMNI VISION]

GoodAtom thanks :).


Just started detailing today. This is wat I got so far. Still to start working on arms and hands. Thanks .

[xxxcubanxxx]

loving all the details an wrinkles

[Vitrux]

Nice mate, is looking good! He looks like the God of Chaos! :dance:

[GoodAtom]

good progress
forward to continue;)

[washka]

I would size down a bit forearms/hand part, details are coming along nicely, you could push this lill' figure style onto the robe. KIU!

[TMNI VISION]

Thanks for the nice comments guys :).

Washka: Working on the asymmetry of the body. Lets see wat can be done to make it more interesting. I will put detail on those little body too :). Thanks.

[TMNI VISION]

just an update. Hope you guys like it. Thanks .

http://preview.filesonic.com/img/1265191.thumbnail.jpg (http://www.filesonic.com/sonic-preview/1265191)

[TMNI VISION]

HI Guys,
I think I m done with the high res. Planning to go for the low res and diffuse. Hope if I can finish it in time. Deadline is very near :) . Thanks.

[Pockets]

bwah! wicked, epic sculpt man! keep it up. i would love to see this bad dude finished.

[Vitrux]

Mann Yeah ! He looks excellent!. . . Crazy Details! You did a Good Good Work with the God of Chaos!!

I realized that you fixed some anatomy problems you had before, and now his proportions look really well.

I love his asymmetric arms.

Ill be waiting to see the low and textures. . and come on! you can finish it!

Good Luck:dance:

[Dim]

This is out-****ing-standing man! I would love to see the LP and bake, but from your mesh, those look like they'll be pretty painless.

[YoungStatic]

Superb work, you did it very well

[TMNI VISION]

Pockets , Vitrux , Dim , YoungStatic thanks a lot guys for those nice comments :). Have to do a whole lot of works with in few days unless the deadline got extended :D . So, good luck to everyone who just finished their high poly that they can finish rest of the work with in deadline :dance:.

[Raul]

i love the little details on this guy! good work, sir!

[Puckducker]

This turned out great. I think the transition into the more mechanical design of tubes and harder edges is my favorite part.

Hope you have the time to finish before the deadline!

[TMNI VISION]

Raul: Thanks a lot man :).

Puckducker: Thanks man :) . With the new deadline now I hope that I can provide him color along with a pedestal . yaaa :D .

[GoodAtom]

good design, I would like to see this character in color)

[mix_mash]

This is looking awesome! I have doubts that 3d Total will win this final Dom War considering most of the entries ... BUT if it did win, it would most likely be your entry.

Paul
(mix_mash)

[TMNI VISION]

GoodAtom : Thanks man .

mix_mash : Thanks man . That's really inspiring :).

[wil_himura]

The right arm just rocks and I like a lot the way you sculpted muscle fibers all over the body, that cross pattern looks so good. I'm not sure what your plans for the beauty image and posing are but the legs won't give you much fredom (as if you didn't have enough with all the arms, fingers and complements :D )

[pappete1]

GREAT!!! cant wait to see the lowpoly version!!!

[capitan_popo]

oh man that is looking great!!!!

[TMNI VISION]

wil_himura, pappete1, capitan_popo thanks a lot guys :)

Fresh out of marmoset toolbag . Still to do a lot . Specially color and transparency maps to create and tweak other maps. Just a light test with occlusion and normal map. Tricount is around 12132. Thanks :) .

[Vitrux]

Ímpresive Mate ! !! Really really amazing! :dance:
What about the back thing? Will it be in the final model?

[TMNI VISION]

Thanks vitrux . working on the back . It will be in the final model but it depends on transparency map so didn't post with it.

[Vitrux]

Oh I see... He is looking really amazing! Congratulation for your hard work.

[Pockets]

came out great :D
could you throw up some wireframes?

[TMNI VISION]

Thanks Pockets :) . sure .

[Agent-X]

This is definitely very good work. I can't wait to see this model textured and completed. The Normal map and AO map came out superb! Awesome stuff.

[GoodAtom]

man, post #63
model looks really cool

[wil_himura]

Awesome result

[E4sY]

your low poly model came out great. Can't wait to see how it looks w/ texture. :)

[squarefighter]

That's an awesome sculpt! Kind of like H.R. Giger on the bottom meets Frank Frazetta on the torso and head.

[GregStrangis]

Impressive lowpoly! Fantastic bake man, looking forward to the textures

[TMNI VISION]

Thanks a lot guys :). Encourage me more to work harder .

I m almost done with the transparency . Still to tweak other maps. But for now I m going to jump into texture painting :dance: . So, here is the turnaround screen shot . Thanks .

[Pockets]

well....its still looking super awesome :D

also at first glance i thought he had one of the face huggers from the movie alien around his bum...now i cant unsee.

[MonteCristo]

Looking absolutely top-drawer mate. Easily the best I've seen in these forums so far.

[pappete1]

killer model!!!!^^

[capitan_popo]

MAN! that looks good

[TMNI VISION]

Pockets: Thanks man :). :D.

MonteCristo : Thanks a lot man :). I really appreciate it.

pappete1 : Thanks man :).

capitan_popo : Thank you :) .

It's wip . Still to do a lot . Unfinished spec maps and emitter map. But I thought I share . Thanks.

[BiG ToE-3DT]

it's pretty.

[Puckducker]

Really solid work, the texture is really turning out great. I would think using a blue in the robe, rather than the red, might help tie in nicely with the blue colour you've chosen to use with the skeletal halo he's got around his shoulders.

Can't wait to see your final entry

[TMNI VISION]

BiG ToE-3DT: Thanks man :) .

Puckducker : Thanks . I didn't put any texture yet on the halo thing but I might put some kinda dark tone texture. lets see wat I come up with. cheers :).

[TMNI VISION]

Hi guys,

I think I m almost done with the texturing. Heading for the pedestal and the final image . We r all almost at the end of this war . So, good luck to everybody. Thanks :).

[RHedendahl]

Looks better and better and better. Textures looks a little blurry right now though.

[TMNI VISION]

kirgan: Thanks man:). I did some final adjustments. I hope now its less blurry.

This is the final Presentation-Shot. Thanks .

[E4sY]

Really liking how the texturing came out. The glow effect is really nice. :)

[Martin_x]

Great job man! Congrats and gl.

[Vitrux]

Awesome mate! Great job.. Good Luck! :dance:

[GoodAtom]

Congrats men, very very very good)

would be interesting if you add more effects glow;)
Good Luck

[The Prime]

Excellent work, is this the finished article? I just feel it could do with more interesting colours around the legs, they are very monochromatic. Still awesome though :)

[MonteCristo]

I think you need to put more effort into the "God of Chaos" text. The model looks fantastic, but the text looks kinda cheap.

[TMNI VISION]

MonteCristo: U r right it looks cheap . But I m working on it . Hope to show you something better . Thanks :).

[dark_maggot]

Great work, really does show chaos in its design. In a good way.

[TMNI VISION]

E4sY,Martin_x,Vitrux, GoodAtom ,The Prime ,MonteCristo ,dark_maggot thanks a lot for such nice comments . Here I go for the final Submission :).

[Bge]

:dance::dance::dance:great job! good luck Man!

[The Prime]

Brilliant work. I'd put my money on a top 10 spot at least.

[Puckducker]

Final result turned out fantastic, the red accent as the highlight really helps pull the viewer in.

Congratulations on finishing up and good luck on the voting!

[MonteCristo]

There ya go mate, that's 300% more calssy at least. :) Good luck.

[wil_himura]

The best low poly work I've seen so far. Congratulations and good luck out there! I'm sure you'll do fine with the voting.

[Tarik2d]

High Res Model is Brill!

[Martin_x]

Congrats on finishing your piece. Turned out great. Good luck!

[mix_mash]

Well done on finishing your entry! It looks really good. I couldn't help noticing the little faces on the chest and arm being similar to something I did in my failed DW4 attempt.

http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=65949
(at the bottom of the page)

I even planned to have the eyes and mouths glow (and energy bleeding from then).

Anyways, well done!

Cheers,
Paul
(mix_mash)

[washka]

Huge, my favorite entry so far, for concept and style, congrats for finishing, gl with voting, like robe details/design and this amazing details level all over the place, hopefully you're not suffocating it and you found a good balance, but care about that next time.
Great piece, 5 stars from me.

[TMNI VISION]

Bge:Thanks man :). Good luck on the voting.

The Prime: Thanks a lot man :).

Puckducker: Thanks man :). Good luck on the voting.

MonteCristo: Thanks a lot mate :).

wil_himura: Thanks a lot man :).Good luck on the voting.

Tarik2d: Thanks man :) .

Martin_x: Thanks :). Good luck on the voting.

mix_mash: Thanks Paul :). I hope you will finish next DW.

washka: Thanks a lot washka for such nice comments and 5 star. Good luck on the voting :).