Dominance War V - 3D - God of Servitude - Silico

[Silico]

Helloo, this will be my first bash at Dominance War so feel free to crit away. After a couple of failed ideas I'm going to go with the God of Servitude, I'm no concept artist but I hope my design demonstrates what I'm going to create. The flails will be based on the statue of liberty's flame, I was also thinking of basing his mask on part of the face but wasn't sure if that'd be allowed, seeing as the design should be from our imagination?

http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/3885/domwar1.jpg (http://img13.imageshack.us/i/domwar1.jpg/)

[mix_mash]

It's a good start. I would suggest something on his back like a huge 'burden' of sorts. He could be like the embodiment of slavery but at the same time the god of it.

Paul
(mix_mash)

[Puckducker]

Nice start. I'd say keep developing your concept and push it to more extremes. The sil right now could be more aggressive, maybe the headpiece could be a little larger/more elaborate. Maybe try to bring in the theme of servitude a bit more as well like Mix-Mash suggested, right now the chain-whip is the only thing that connects to your theme.

[washka]

Welcome man, like your concept start for its originality, gl onto the comp'.

[Silico]

Thanks for the comments chaps :haha: After all your input I've decided to add a massive container-type thing to my God's back. Not entirely sure how I want it too look at the moment, but I've quickly sketched it into the concept. Essentially it contains the souls of those who wouldn't obey and become slaves! The Hades underworld scene from Hercules is how I'm planning the inside of the container to look (lots of mindless ghostly figures, aimlessly going round in circles).

http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/4827/domwar2.jpg (http://img833.imageshack.us/i/domwar2.jpg/)

[Silico]

Made myself a base mesh in Blender, now I plan to refine and sculpt in ZBrush.

http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/8545/domwarbasemesh.png (http://img838.imageshack.us/i/domwarbasemesh.png/)

[mix_mash]

Oh, the thing on his back looks more like some sort of backpack. When I meant 'burden' I meant something that looks like it would weigh him down, something uncomfortable.

Paul
(mix_mash)