View Full Version : ATOMHAWK - 3D - Penguin - tongeert
31-03-2011, 07:34 PM
This is the first time I participate on a competition. My idea was a penguin guarding the gate of an operation called Atomhawk. I've allready did some work on the penguin. I still need to do the arms. My idea was to do it in a sort of cartoon style but I'll do the materials later.
02-04-2011, 09:15 AM
I created the arms and did some work on the materials.
05-04-2011, 03:02 PM
Maybe I'll change the idea to something like James Bond instead of guarding a gate.
11-04-2011, 02:50 PM
The rest is coming soon, but I don't have very much free time. Here is the same image with improved materials.
11-04-2011, 03:27 PM
Getting better. What about the eyes?
11-04-2011, 05:53 PM
The idea was that he has sunglasses.
11-04-2011, 07:08 PM
Here's some more. But I can't get the cell shading material right, can anybody help?
11-04-2011, 07:21 PM
I forgot one thing but it still doesn't look right to me.
12-04-2011, 07:33 PM
I don't think I'm gonna use the building but here is some more stuff.
13-04-2011, 01:02 PM
And some more.
13-04-2011, 02:00 PM
The penguin now has a gun, and I made the edges from the light a little bit softer.
14-04-2011, 06:14 AM
Here the beginning of my poster I just need to think of something in the background.:haha:
The font is SF Movie Poster created by: ShyFoundry Fonts.
14-04-2011, 02:24 PM
Changed the font a bit and changed the camera.
14-04-2011, 02:30 PM
Or maybe this.
14-04-2011, 02:33 PM
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14-04-2011, 03:09 PM
14-04-2011, 05:20 PM
14-04-2011, 06:55 PM
14-04-2011, 09:07 PM
And again some tweaks.
14-04-2011, 09:36 PM
Hi, you idea makes me smile, but, in my opinion, there's so much you can still explore, even if you want to stick with the "toon" look.
Composition wise, a red head rocket pointing up pushes your eye to much from the main char. I would also play with some textures just to give the forms some volume , put a bit of specular in the sunglasses as they are barely visible.
Just explore and have fun. Hope it helps. Good luck
15-04-2011, 01:47 PM
Many thanks for your help, all crits are welcome and much appreciated. I put a bit of specular on the glasses and did something with the materials, now I still need to think of the rocket.
15-04-2011, 03:21 PM
Changed the color of the rocket to blue.
16-04-2011, 10:34 AM
Made the poster a little bit wider and added a new text layer.
16-04-2011, 08:47 PM
Kabel Bd - Corel Corporation
Terminator Two - ALLTYPE
That was all I could find about the fonts.
17-04-2011, 10:58 AM
This is my final image.
17-04-2011, 10:58 AM
Just need to create the making of.
17-04-2011, 11:33 AM
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