Character: Odio - Graphite 6B - Nankin - Ink Gouache

[Helienio]

This is my first work. Entitled "Humanity´s Hate" I hand drew it with a 6B pencil, nankin ink, an guache paint. be honest or your comments, I need good feedback.
http://www.helienio.hpg.ig.com.br/images/Odio_da_Humanidade.jpg