Dominance War V - 3D - The name of create goddess project code is:godles - icex2009

[icex2009]

Sorry for sending the wrong pic, I sign up a new ID on gameartisans to post my final work.
Because of my mistake,the work of the final version changes to this ID: EDGEX3.

The name of create goddess project code is:godless
All work Link
http://blog.yam.com/edgex3/article/36759474

try to design three different stlyes.
I'll desing two avatars which are switchable
In the ancient times, gods might be just or evil in different cultures, but all originated from the same one.
English is not my mother language,so there's some details that i can't describe well, hoping for your consideration.
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[Animill]

I liked the concept on the 2nd row, with a nice touch on the hair/whip? extension and the way you spread the details, although the first one gave me more the otherwordly feeling (might be the fin)

[icex2009]

Many attempts
Animill: I express the tail

[icex2009]

I liked the concept on the 2nd row, with a nice touch on the hair/whip? extension and the way you spread the details, although the first one gave me more the otherwordly feeling (might be the fin)

I express the tail

[washka]

Like upper part of the first one, and all the rest and fish side from second, good concept work so far, gl and keep it up!

[Warlock 279]

Looks pretty cool. I like the fish/fin/tail hair thing, that's quite interesting.

[icex2009]

Go

[washka]

Right one with better legs.
What's the background story/ or small idea concept of your chara? What kind of godess, what do you want to achieve? Just design? I'm a bit trackless here. :D But keep it up.

[Warlock 279]

The left one feels a little too much like Hatsune Miku got dumped into the Witchblade anime. Which could be an interesting direction to go.

But, I'm with waska, the one of the right with the smoother/rounder armor bits works better. Tho the feet could use a bit of re-work.

I still really like the fin/fish tail hair from your previous sketch. Maybe mixing that with the rounded armor shapes in the right of your last sketch, making those shells, or scales or a mix of both, might give birth to a really cool looking sea goddess. It'd be a bit like a mermaid, but I think lot more interesting since the "tail" come from her head rather than the traditional conjoined legs look. Just a thought anyway.

[icex2009]

Like upper part of the first one, and all the rest and fish side from second, good concept work so far, gl and keep it up!

I want to show some different point~

[icex2009]

Looks pretty cool. I like the fish/fin/tail hair thing, that's quite interesting.

I'm working hard to think about the design,there's no time but i'll do my best!

[icex2009]

Right one with better legs.
What's the background story/ or small idea concept of your chara? What kind of godess, what do you want to achieve? Just design? I'm a bit trackless here. :D But keep it up.

thanks~ I think the right one is better,too.I'm going to cteate the story of disaster~and some magic power of my charactor.I'll keep going on~

[icex2009]

The left one feels a little too much like Hatsune Miku got dumped into the Witchblade anime. Which could be an interesting direction to go.

But, I'm with waska, the one of the right with the smoother/rounder armor bits works better. Tho the feet could use a bit of re-work.

I still really like the fin/fish tail hair from your previous sketch. Maybe mixing that with the rounded armor shapes in the right of your last sketch, making those shells, or scales or a mix of both, might give birth to a really cool looking sea goddess. It'd be a bit like a mermaid, but I think lot more interesting since the "tail" come from her head rather than the traditional conjoined legs look. Just a thought anyway.
I'll try the armor,and I like the fish tail hair,too~

[icex2009]

1~3

[Warlock 279]

Number one is pretty is cool, but it feels like it may be a little too busy.

Number 2 is my favorite. Its got a nice flow to it and a certain elegance. Very aquatic looking. Very cool.

Not really feelin' #3. For some reason it doesn't feel as natural as the other two do.

[washka]

01 for me, don't like 3 too.

[Kaiune3D]

Its a toss up between 1 and 2. I think longere type the shirt on 1may be a touch on the harder side than the top you got on 2. But if you do it right it would look awesome.

[icex2009]

try to design three different stlyes.

[E4sY]

Looks good on the front, but i can't really make out whats going on with her anal and small of back area on #3. I would go with #1.

[icex2009]

Number one is pretty is cool, but it feels like it may be a little too busy.

Number 2 is my favorite. Its got a nice flow to it and a certain elegance. Very aquatic looking. Very cool.

Not really feelin' #3. For some reason it doesn't feel as natural as the other two do.

I want to redesign the feature of the 2nd and 3rd

[icex2009]

01 for me, don't like 3 too.

the third one outfit that I want design is a fitted transparently liquid suit

[icex2009]

Looks good on the front, but i can't really make out whats going on with her anal and small of back area on #3. I would go with #1.

As your opinion~I'll redesign to strengthen my feature from 1 to 3

[icex2009]

Go

[MemoNick]

I like the first goddess' colors, but I prefer the second one's cothing.

[squarefighter]

I like the straps on the outfit of the top design with the blue and green colors. I think that makes the design more interesting, but maybe a little less godlike? So it's hard to say which would work out better there. I like the idea of clawed feet on the bottom one, but I think they should be a little more rounded and cat-like to fit the feminine character.

Great style, I really look forward to seeing this in 3D.

[icex2009]

I like the first goddess' colors, but I prefer the second one's cothing.

thanks~I'll try hard to show both of them.

[icex2009]

I like the straps on the outfit of the top design with the blue and green colors. I think that makes the design more interesting, but maybe a little less godlike? So it's hard to say which would work out better there. I like the idea of clawed feet on the bottom one, but I think they should be a little more rounded and cat-like to fit the feminine character.

Great style, I really look forward to seeing this in 3D.
thanks~just as your opinion that it does less godlike of my design.I love the idea of cat-like feet!

[icex2009]

go

[Kaiune3D]

4 is looking good but I like the boots on 3

[MemoNick]

Love number 1. All of them are good though. Good work!

[icex2009]

I hoped that may be better

[MemoNick]

In my opinion no.1 because it is simple, yet brilliant.

[Kaiune3D]

1 for sure

[Warlock 279]

Yep, I think I'm with them, #1 looks pretty good.

[icex2009]

In my opinion no.1 because it is simple, yet brilliant.

I want the 4th texture design on the first one.

[icex2009]

Yep, I think I'm with them, #1 looks pretty good.

1 is my favorite.

[icex2009]

1 for sure

Me too

[icex2009]

Because the last design which lack sense of sacred , enhancing the color and the texture of this one.

[icex2009]

3d star

[TortillaChips]

I can tell this is going to be awesome. All the designs look like they'd make very good goddesses.

[Warlock 279]

The bottom one, the wings are more epic. The wings in the top one like a little like a tattered and worn cloak as opposed to godly wings. The top ones also make for a much more interesting silhouette.

[icex2009]

I can tell this is going to be awesome. All the designs look like they'd make very good goddesses.

Thanks I'll do my best.

[icex2009]

The bottom one, the wings are more epic. The wings in the top one like a little like a tattered and worn cloak as opposed to godly wings. The top ones also make for a much more interesting silhouette.

I'm grateful to have your help and suggestion.I'll do all i can

[icex2009]

I'll desing two avatars which are switchable
In the ancient times, gods might be just or evil in different cultures, but all originated from the same one.

[icex2009]

Body

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[washka]

Amazing concept so far, especially with body elements, clothing and accesories. *****
Great work, I know videogames like that but care a bit with the overcharge effect (even if in my own position I'm not really supposed to say that to you because I've got this bad tendance).

[icex2009]

3d

[icex2009]

3d

[icex2009]

Amazing concept so far, especially with body elements, clothing and accesories. *****
Great work, I know videogames like that but care a bit with the overcharge effect (even if in my own position I'm not really supposed to say that to you because I've got this bad tendance).

Thanks for your suggestion,I'm worry about the problem of overcharge effect,too.Now what i can do is just try my best to complete my work.

[icex2009]

3d~go

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[capitan_popo]

I would definitely go with the winged one

[icex2009]

I would definitely go with the winged one

I would definitely go with the winged one

[icex2009]

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Uv

[icex2009]

3D Weapon

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3d

[E4sY]

Really nice. I like the somewhat floral look u've given both characters.

[capitan_popo]

beautiful designs!

[icex2009]

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[Barnaby]

Wow! Most impressive!

[Puckducker]

Cool final entry glad you finished up, but I think you might have an issue with your presentation image. I can't find the rules for sure (maybe Big ToE can confirm this?) but I'm pretty sure you're not allowed to have anything in the background of your presentation image other than a flat colour. The images of your characters in the background probably breaks that.

Might not be the exact rules again this year, but I got dinged on that last year and had to re-submit at the last second. You might want to double check with Fred on that and see if you can re-submit.