Dominance War V - 2D - GOD of Genesis- XueXiaofei(SilSakura)

[XueXiaofei]

First of all, I have to say ''Hello'' to Everyone here,Because I'm a Chinese Student,so that English is a bit difficult for me to read or talk,and this is the first time for me to join the Dominance War.But I will try my best to show my skill on Painting.Good lucky~

[XueXiaofei]

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[cucn]

good!!!
给力!!!

[sean88310]

so good!!!!!!!!!

[Aieyl]

awesome work！

[aimio]

yoxia

[Warlock 279]

Really interesting stuff you have so far.

I suppose the only crit I have is that I'm having a hard time figuring out which on of the figures is the more important one. Right now they're both competing evenly for visual attention. I think it might be worth some thought about giving one a more important visual role, to help establish a focal point in the image.

Cool design and layout, I like where you're heading with it.

[XueXiaofei]

I'm busy on my Thesis..so it's late..

[mix_mash]

You should add more contrasting colours and more lightness and darkness to make the piece pop.

Paul
(mix_mash)