My forest

[David Ciprian]

This is not the final version so give me some ideas...and comments

[sarN]

dude
that is so cool
eh, its awesome how you can make such a simple background that makes the picture look awesome even though its not very high detail
i love the foreground, it looks wicked cool
great job
lol no crits from me :D

[David Ciprian]

Ok so you don't have ideas, but I'm sure you have some crits!So...where are the critics?!

[morgoth]

the 2d forums are dead here.. if you want help I would post at conceptart.org

I know they are scary but it's worht it most of the time.

as for me.. I think you should put in a middle ground and clean up the tree a bit. but thats just me...maybe make the tree a little more interesting. right now it's jsut straight up.. no branches.

[David Ciprian]

I'll make some branches, but I don't understand the middle ground thing.

[morgoth]

well it doesn;t seem like there is very much depth to it.. maybe it's just me

either way.. good painting.

[David Ciprian]

You're right about the depth, I'll see what i can do to correct that.Thanks

[Shadowhunter Da]

Ok, I thik you need something walking down the path...

A smurf, or
A pixie, or
A brownie, or
A Frog with a stick over his shoulder, or
A couple ants talking, or
A cricket, or
A mouse...

The animals/bugs should be like cartoony walking on 2 legs things, like you see in A Bugs Life or whatever... =P

[David Ciprian]

A pixie sounds good.You know what else is missing? Mushrooms!

[Michael]

I agree... it has somekind of a first plane, then goes the furthest plane. You could add a very first plane - a black shape of a branch or a bush, sharpen the tree edges - they are blurred, then add the further plane, that is transition between those two. It would use some more planes, even if it is a single bush.

Sorry for the inconvenience, that you didn't receive the reply... I was out for some time... :( :o