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SanderDL
02-10-2011, 02:17 PM
Hey folks,

My entry is already done as I've made it for a school projects as well as for 3dtotal

I might still improve a few things here and there.

http://www.inserttalent.nl/~gm10860/images/mountrender0.jpg

http://www.inserttalent.nl/~gm10860/images/mountrender1.jpg

http://www.inserttalent.nl/~gm10860/images/mountwires.jpg

http://www.inserttalent.nl/~gm10860/images/mountmaps.jpg

Perversonality
02-10-2011, 03:44 PM
You might want to check the rules;

"-Your entry must be specifically created for this challenge. Do not use any pieces from previous personal works"

SanderDL
03-10-2011, 08:15 AM
It is made especially for this contest. However I also made for a school project that is running at the same time. But the deadline for the school project is a little earlier. I did not start on this project before this contest was annouced.

In other words, I am entering this contest as a schoolproject.

I hope that explains the situation.

Kaiune3D
03-10-2011, 10:05 AM
The rider wouldn't be able to sit to comfortably in that chair. You may want to look in to a more bicycle seat shape for the bottom of the chair.

Perversonality
03-10-2011, 10:56 AM
I get what you are saying but it does look a little suspicious if you simply post a completed piece without any WIP images especially when there appears to be some sculpting that has happened as a part of the process too

For the model, it's ok but you could do with fixing up some of the anatomy. The bicep is a particularly odd shape right now and the head is definitely not quite right too unless your intention was to create a semi-alien look. As has been pointed out already, the chair will only really work for someone who has no legs but that could be by design too

You also have some odd distortion on the forearm and there are some obvious texture seams there too, and on the upper arm around the shoulder. The backs of the upper leg look really odd too, so you might want to check out a photo reference of how the leg looks when you are wearing jeans