First timer, be gentle.

Treefrog · 17-03-2004, 08:40 AM

Ok so this is my first time with this whole "3rd" dimension thingy.
I have been an artist for ever now and I am making the transition.
here is my first model (incomplete). I am gonna be taking a
videogame design course soon and pointers would really be appreciated. thanx guys and galls.

Iron Boot · 17-03-2004, 08:49 AM

I think its excellent for your first. Im still trying to get somethin decent enough to post. Im a perfectionist. Oh by the way i think she lost her chin.

Treefrog · 17-03-2004, 08:55 AM

Actually she has a chin, it's just really, really small, unlike her breasts, ha.
I wasnt going for a realistic model, more of a stylized one.

rubberduck · 17-03-2004, 10:40 AM

Quite good for a first IMO, but please give her a chin(I know you're not going for a realistic look)but, and her breasts need some, hmmm.. tweaking

Treefrog · 17-03-2004, 11:48 AM

ok, so nobody seems to like the chinless look eh? what didn't you guys ever date an ugly chick? hmm, actually neither have I.

So is this enough chin?

secobb · 17-03-2004, 12:35 PM

WOW those boobies are more like missle nose cones. then need to be smaller and more . . . .. brest like.

Daniel · 17-03-2004, 01:12 PM

pretty good for your first try, my first tries... lets just say I deleted the files. But dude, her breats, wow, that's some crazy stuff, lol

Treefrog · 17-03-2004, 02:16 PM

Ok I know they are no where near the real thing, but they werent meant to to look real, I was going for a more cartoony look. here is one of my design sketches.

Treefrog · 17-03-2004, 02:20 PM

sorry forgot to put the pic up

Faycal · 17-03-2004, 10:10 PM

who is she? A Pamela Anderson in Manga Style?

good job.. good luck!

d03boy · 18-03-2004, 05:42 AM

Whether or not her breasts are supposed to look real, they shouldn't stick strait out. Thats what makes this look not as good as it could.

Dragonkiss · 18-03-2004, 09:16 AM

hello,

very good for a first time go on...
i think she a little bite slimer then you sktech referenceso if you want to respect your reference you should try to work with the toggle on because a meshsmooth iteration at 2 make slimer , i think so make your low poly mesh fater then the reference to respect your original idea, i don't know if i was clear i sorry for my terrible english, i can try a better explication next time, but i like your concept anyway, keep working, it's nice

Treefrog · 18-03-2004, 12:46 PM

ok, so nobody likes my boobs, wow I never imagined myself saying that!!
Well I have tweaked them ever so slightly to apear more realistic.

So does anybody here do any game models? I have some questions about the subject if you do.

Cracadoo · 18-03-2004, 11:20 PM

She is verry good for your first model. I think that you should make her lips look better. Again she is very good. Go on...

Treefrog · 19-03-2004, 04:29 AM

the lips have been giving me troubles for a while now, any body have any advice on how to make em look good?

17-03-2004, 08:40 AM	#1
Treefrog Registered User Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: The amazing G.T.A. Posts: 65 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	First timer, be gentle. Ok so this is my first time with this whole "3rd" dimension thingy. I have been an artist for ever now and I am making the transition. here is my first model (incomplete). I am gonna be taking a videogame design course soon and pointers would really be appreciated. thanx guys and galls. Last edited by Treefrog; 17-03-2004 at 11:40 AM..

17-03-2004, 10:40 AM	#4
rubberduck LightWave 3D User Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 1,219 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Quite good for a first IMO, but please give her a chin(I know you're not going for a realistic look)but, and her breasts need some, hmmm.. tweaking __________________ Art Is Not A Thing; It's A Way - Elbert Hubbard

17-03-2004, 11:48 AM	#5
Treefrog Registered User Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: The amazing G.T.A. Posts: 65 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	ok, so nobody seems to like the chinless look eh? what didn't you guys ever date an ugly chick? hmm, actually neither have I. So is this enough chin? Last edited by Treefrog; 17-03-2004 at 11:50 AM..

17-03-2004, 12:35 PM	#6
secobb Registered User Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Colorado, USA Posts: 176 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	WOW those boobies are more like missle nose cones. then need to be smaller and more . . . .. brest like. __________________ The search is the goal, moderation is key. http://www.seth3d.com

17-03-2004, 01:12 PM	#7
Daniel Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Location: Montreal Posts: 2,153 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	pretty good for your first try, my first tries... lets just say I deleted the files. But dude, her breats, wow, that's some crazy stuff, lol __________________ "There are no binding oaths between men and lions- wolves and lambs can enjoy no meeting of the minds- they are all bent on hating each other to the death." -Achilles "It is better by noble boldness to run the risk of being subject to half the evils we anticipate than to remain in cowardly listlessness for fear of what might happen." -Herodotus

17-03-2004, 08:49 AM	#2
Iron Boot Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: San Diego, CA Posts: 85 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I think its excellent for your first. Im still trying to get somethin decent enough to post. Im a perfectionist. Oh by the way i think she lost her chin.

17-03-2004, 08:55 AM	#3
Treefrog Registered User Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: The amazing G.T.A. Posts: 65 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Actually she has a chin, it's just really, really small, unlike her breasts, ha. I wasnt going for a realistic model, more of a stylized one.

17-03-2004, 02:16 PM	#8
Treefrog Registered User Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: The amazing G.T.A. Posts: 65 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Ok I know they are no where near the real thing, but they werent meant to to look real, I was going for a more cartoony look. here is one of my design sketches.

17-03-2004, 02:20 PM	#9
Treefrog Registered User Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: The amazing G.T.A. Posts: 65 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	sorry forgot to put the pic up

17-03-2004, 10:10 PM	#10
Faycal Registered User Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Italy Posts: 56 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	who is she? A Pamela Anderson in Manga Style? good job.. good luck!

18-03-2004, 05:42 AM	#11
d03boy Registered User Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Seward, NE, USA Posts: 55 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Whether or not her breasts are supposed to look real, they shouldn't stick strait out. Thats what makes this look not as good as it could. __________________ Man without an edge

18-03-2004, 09:16 AM	#12
Dragonkiss Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 263 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	hello, very good for a first time go on... i think she a little bite slimer then you sktech referenceso if you want to respect your reference you should try to work with the toggle on because a meshsmooth iteration at 2 make slimer , i think so make your low poly mesh fater then the reference to respect your original idea, i don't know if i was clear i sorry for my terrible english, i can try a better explication next time, but i like your concept anyway, keep working, it's nice

18-03-2004, 12:46 PM	#13
Treefrog Registered User Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: The amazing G.T.A. Posts: 65 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	ok, so nobody likes my boobs, wow I never imagined myself saying that!! Well I have tweaked them ever so slightly to apear more realistic. So does anybody here do any game models? I have some questions about the subject if you do.

18-03-2004, 11:20 PM	#14
Cracadoo Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Belgrade, Serbia Posts: 436 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	She is verry good for your first model. I think that you should make her lips look better. Again she is very good. Go on... __________________ My Dominance War Entry

19-03-2004, 04:29 AM	#15
Treefrog Registered User Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: The amazing G.T.A. Posts: 65 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	the lips have been giving me troubles for a while now, any body have any advice on how to make em look good?

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