bath

juan · 12-07-2004, 04:30 PM

hi , this is my first post here. i did this scene last year, and now i'm fixing the lighting and some texturing , i hope you like it please give me your opinions.

made in maya 5 and rendered with maya software

angelwebzine · 12-07-2004, 05:08 PM

nice, but could be more realistic

Mwhahaha · 13-07-2004, 11:05 PM

Why is the water in the tub all ripply like that?

Unless there is a really strong wind blowing in that bathroom that water should be pretty smooth.

Maybe give it some soap suds for interest.

Jon · 13-07-2004, 11:19 PM

Overall, good. I agree with the comments above, though. This scene could use some worrk. Also, I'm not sure why I'm writing in this strange font... Overall: good scene, keep working on it!

[X]treme · 14-07-2004, 10:13 AM

mirror has too much meshsmooth, and also the water needs to be more transparent and less ripply... there's nothing to make it do that in the scene

also experiment with some new lighting setups... the current one is hurting the scene overall i think

anyway, it looks good so far! just touchups that could be made here and there

12-07-2004, 04:30 PM	#1
juan Registered User Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Bogotá, Colombia Posts: 29 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	bath hi , this is my first post here. i did this scene last year, and now i'm fixing the lighting and some texturing , i hope you like it please give me your opinions. made in maya 5 and rendered with maya software Attached Images __________________ CG artist

12-07-2004, 05:08 PM	#2
angelwebzine Registered User Join Date: Jul 2004 Posts: 19 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	nice, but could be more realistic __________________ Im newbie and im proud of it

13-07-2004, 11:05 PM	#3
Mwhahaha Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Raleigh NC Posts: 121 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Nice but um... Why is the water in the tub all ripply like that? Unless there is a really strong wind blowing in that bathroom that water should be pretty smooth. Maybe give it some soap suds for interest.

14-07-2004, 10:13 AM	#5
[X]treme Studio in a Box Designer Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Louisiana, United States Posts: 132 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	mirror has too much meshsmooth, and also the water needs to be more transparent and less ripply... there's nothing to make it do that in the scene also experiment with some new lighting setups... the current one is hurting the scene overall i think anyway, it looks good so far! just touchups that could be made here and there __________________ www.studioinabox.org -The Future of Computer Generated Art

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13-07-2004, 11:19 PM	#4
Jon Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: London Posts: 544 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Overall, good. I agree with the comments above, though. This scene could use some worrk. Also, I'm not sure why I'm writing in this strange font... Overall: good scene, keep working on it!

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