devilish girl

Grashupfa · 16-02-2005, 01:49 AM

Hi

I recently started to model this char. I worked about 7-8 hours on it. Please tell me what u think and what is wrong (i think there are some proportion errors?)

Grashupfa · 16-02-2005, 01:50 AM

side view

Grashupfa · 16-02-2005, 01:50 AM

Front view..

hpslashluvr · 16-02-2005, 05:47 AM

breasts are way too low and she needs that thing that happens when your arm connects to your chest...no clue what it's called, go look at your own arm or refs

Grashupfa · 17-02-2005, 10:01 PM

Thx 4 your crit!
I am sorry but i dunno what u mean with" that thing that happens when your arm connects to your chest"... I looked at my arm - but i couldn't find anything that is missing

Made some changes (breasts are higher now!)

Looking forward for your replies ...

merlyn · 17-02-2005, 10:38 PM

lots to look at and modify.

Use this image for reference.
keep refering to real reference and see where it does look right and tweak, eventually it'll look beans!

merlyn · 17-02-2005, 10:40 PM

another image for the right view.
good luck

Phynius Gauge · 17-02-2005, 10:49 PM

Hey Grashupfa

. I think hpshlashluvr is pointing at the fact that there's not a lot of definition at that point where the arm meets the torso, and it kind of looks weird the way the arm tapers off. Look at the references merlyn posted. They should help you out a lot

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Grashupfa · 17-02-2005, 11:44 PM

Thx guys!
I'll rework it
Stay tuned

hpslashluvr · 18-02-2005, 03:52 AM

yea, this is what i sort of mean, sorry for crappy jpeg quality

ross_coe · 18-02-2005, 09:44 AM

one thing that i noticed is that the breasts point forwards too much. they should be pointing in a direction coming from the spine. think of 2 imaginary perpendicular lines that go from the spine out and you more-or-less got your nipple positions....kinda makes the breasts point out to the side a little bit

Grashupfa · 18-02-2005, 06:47 PM

Hi,
I am really appreciated that you guys help me so much!

I updated the chest - tell me what you think and if this update is a step forward or backward

In my oppinion it looks better now

Tank[NL] · 20-02-2005, 04:32 PM

looks a lot better. althought the shoulders are still kinda flat and the breats dont look quitte right.

but is is a step forward, keep it up.

hpslashluvr · 20-02-2005, 06:08 PM

post a front and side view

Grashupfa · 20-02-2005, 08:22 PM

thx for your replies - yep here they are:

side view:

16-02-2005, 01:49 AM	#1
Grashupfa ...Inssaaatiable.. Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Europe \ Austria Posts: 298 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	devilish girl Hi I recently started to model this char. I worked about 7-8 hours on it. Please tell me what u think and what is wrong (i think there are some proportion errors?) __________________ It’s pretty hard to be efficient without being obnoxious.

16-02-2005, 01:50 AM	#2
Grashupfa ...Inssaaatiable.. Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Europe \ Austria Posts: 298 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	side view __________________ It’s pretty hard to be efficient without being obnoxious.

16-02-2005, 01:50 AM	#3
Grashupfa ...Inssaaatiable.. Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Europe \ Austria Posts: 298 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Front view.. __________________ It’s pretty hard to be efficient without being obnoxious.

16-02-2005, 05:47 AM	#4
hpslashluvr mangy old cur Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Lone Star State Posts: 1,023 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	breasts are way too low and she needs that thing that happens when your arm connects to your chest...no clue what it's called, go look at your own arm or refs __________________ girl thread...I will finish this before I die! I swear! my "la belle dame sans merci" WIP

17-02-2005, 10:01 PM	#5
Grashupfa ...Inssaaatiable.. Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Europe \ Austria Posts: 298 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thx 4 your crit! I am sorry but i dunno what u mean with" that thing that happens when your arm connects to your chest"... I looked at my arm - but i couldn't find anything that is missing Made some changes (breasts are higher now!) Looking forward for your replies ... __________________ It’s pretty hard to be efficient without being obnoxious.

17-02-2005, 10:38 PM	#6
merlyn Registered User Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Manchester, England Posts: 427 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	lots to look at and modify. Use this image for reference. keep refering to real reference and see where it does look right and tweak, eventually it'll look beans! __________________ http://www.merlynlear.com/index.htm

17-02-2005, 10:40 PM	#7
merlyn Registered User Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Manchester, England Posts: 427 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	another image for the right view. good luck __________________ http://www.merlynlear.com/index.htm

17-02-2005, 10:49 PM	#8
Phynius Gauge Registered User Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,477 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hey Grashupfa . I think hpshlashluvr is pointing at the fact that there's not a lot of definition at that point where the arm meets the torso, and it kind of looks weird the way the arm tapers off. Look at the references merlyn posted. They should help you out a lot .

17-02-2005, 11:44 PM	#9
Grashupfa ...Inssaaatiable.. Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Europe \ Austria Posts: 298 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thx guys! I'll rework it Stay tuned __________________ It’s pretty hard to be efficient without being obnoxious.

18-02-2005, 03:52 AM	#10
hpslashluvr mangy old cur Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Lone Star State Posts: 1,023 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	yea, this is what i sort of mean, sorry for crappy jpeg quality __________________ girl thread...I will finish this before I die! I swear! my "la belle dame sans merci" WIP

18-02-2005, 09:44 AM	#11
ross_coe formerly Ross-3DT =P Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Glencoe Scotland UK (London atm) Posts: 723 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	one thing that i noticed is that the breasts point forwards too much. they should be pointing in a direction coming from the spine. think of 2 imaginary perpendicular lines that go from the spine out and you more-or-less got your nipple positions....kinda makes the breasts point out to the side a little bit __________________ __________________ PasteyFace - Online Folio (W.I.P) My CGS Folio Page __________________

18-02-2005, 06:47 PM	#12
Grashupfa ...Inssaaatiable.. Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Europe \ Austria Posts: 298 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hi, I am really appreciated that you guys help me so much! I updated the chest - tell me what you think and if this update is a step forward or backward In my oppinion it looks better now __________________ It’s pretty hard to be efficient without being obnoxious.

20-02-2005, 04:32 PM	#13
Tank[NL] New goal: Platinum spam Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Your happyplace. I stole it... Posts: 3,423 Thanks: 3 Thanked 12 Times in 11 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	looks a lot better. althought the shoulders are still kinda flat and the breats dont look quitte right. but is is a step forward, keep it up.

20-02-2005, 06:08 PM	#14
hpslashluvr mangy old cur Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Lone Star State Posts: 1,023 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	post a front and side view __________________ girl thread...I will finish this before I die! I swear! my "la belle dame sans merci" WIP

20-02-2005, 08:22 PM	#15
Grashupfa ...Inssaaatiable.. Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Europe \ Austria Posts: 298 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	thx for your replies - yep here they are: side view: __________________ It’s pretty hard to be efficient without being obnoxious.

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