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Here is a cartooney car for a project that I am working on:  DaveLEWIS
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16-05-2006, 04:11 AM
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impressive modelling. i really wanna see it textured and see some additions that make it "toony".
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3D Nubz~ :)
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Looks nice... Make the tyres a bit bigger maybe so that it'll look a bit chubby~
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19-05-2006, 02:38 AM
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Hi guys,
Good comments, thankyou  DaveLEWIS
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21-05-2006, 11:28 PM
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I think the part that was spray painted could be a seperate object and the other two spots circled could use some attention... maybe a couple of edgeloops would fix them.
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22-05-2006, 09:16 PM
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Hi Jeremiah_Bigley,
Not sure what you mean when you say about part being spray painted:S Thankyou Here is an update:   DaveLEWIS
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hey just ignore that part but I think you need to work on the top corners of the front windshield...that spot is too rounded.
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Hi Jeremiah_Bigley,
Thankyou, good comments. Here is an update:  The antialiasing was set low for a quick render. I need to make the glass of the windows thinner and also add some windcreen wipers DaveLEWIS
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