Horus - Need ur thoughts and help!

e-moo · 13-08-2006, 11:10 PM

Hi all
This one is my first post here

So i've been working on this guy for some tym.. and got busy with stuffs....
And never finished it...But now might be a good time to finish it. This one is also my first character attempt

Oh I'm using max and zbrush!

Here's a snap of the head:

And the body:

And both:

elveatles · 15-08-2006, 04:49 AM

Cool idea. I think the muscles on the back near the scapula need some work.

3DSpirit · 15-08-2006, 06:48 AM

Not bad...head looks cool...but I think body needs some work.Arms and legs are looking fine...but I think the body is kinda to wide...compared to legs...maybe this is just me

but i think the part where upper body starts to get wider...part somewhere around begining of chest and end of stomach should start being wider a bit to higher than now...
(hope u understood what I ment to say...im not quite good at spelling)

Keep it up!

Diabolos · 15-08-2006, 11:33 AM

I think its a good start, my only comment is I think that the bumpmap on the head looks too much like a bumpmap if you know what I mean. Have you tried sculpting the details out with zBrush? Have you seen the movie "Immortal"? May give you some good reference if not........

e-moo · 15-08-2006, 01:46 PM

elveatles: thanks mate

i'll check on the scapula... i don't have good references fot the body... most of the model is my plain observation

3DSpirit: thanks for ur crit... but i tried to have the wider shoulder view for this one

Diabolos: yeah i've sculped the details in z brush... my bad skills doesn't quite show that up

I didn't see "Immortal" but thanks a lot for the screen grab!

Listen guys... i'm pretty confused about the clothing and the armor of the character...can anyone suggest some?

Tank[NL] · 15-08-2006, 02:36 PM

well, i reall suggest watchin immortal. is a very impressive movie and te theme matches yours, rom what ive seen.

as far as armor, the gods in immortal dont have any...
ancient egyptians wore helmets and lots of cloth, as far as i know. not to familiar with their armies...
it is a cool project ad i really like the detail you put in the head, looks good.

gl dude, waiting to see some progress

Diabolos · 15-08-2006, 02:49 PM

Sorry my comment was not aimed at your level of skill, just think that the detail needs to be a little more defined if you can or even if you want to. It's your model and your interpretation........

Armour - just as Tank mentioned - here is a small image I found.

D,

e-moo · 17-08-2006, 10:20 AM

Diabolos: Thanks for ur support man...I've collected some images from a google session.... hope to post some updates soon

softocean · 17-08-2006, 11:51 AM

the model looks like it is coming along nicely. Be careful about definition in some areas - the knees for example - we should see evidence of muscle, sinew and bone. I can't make out a patella yet.

e-moo · 31-08-2006, 12:09 AM

Small update

Tank[NL] · 31-08-2006, 04:26 PM

cool update. a few points though. the toes are really to similar. they could use some variation.
the leg guard looks really nice. it also looks like it will be made of metal or metal clad.
i doubt it will be very pleasant to walk in. the piece between the foot and the ankle joint should prolly look more like leather, or something that will be able to bend when walking.

gl

gfx.KhronoS · 31-08-2006, 11:52 PM

Well horus is a god... he will find a way to walk with that metal piece =))

Btw e-moo very good job.

YEAROFTHEOX · 01-09-2006, 03:45 AM

The calf muscles on your legs are too high, they should start below the knee, not behind it. (IMO)

e-moo · 02-11-2006, 09:59 AM

gfx.KhronoS:

YEAROFTHEOX: You are right probably... cause i modeled without any references... just what came in my mind... i'll try to matchup with some reference figure...

next i'll add details to the waist piece...

Sanislov · 28-05-2007, 03:42 AM

will you finish it? good model

13-08-2006, 11:10 PM	#1
e-moo maxer Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Dhaka Posts: 61 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Horus - Need ur thoughts and help! Hi all This one is my first post here So i've been working on this guy for some tym.. and got busy with stuffs.... And never finished it...But now might be a good time to finish it. This one is also my first character attempt Oh I'm using max and zbrush! Here's a snap of the head: And the body: And both:

15-08-2006, 06:48 AM	#3
3DSpirit Registered User Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Novi Sad, Serbia Posts: 88 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Not bad...head looks cool...but I think body needs some work.Arms and legs are looking fine...but I think the body is kinda to wide...compared to legs...maybe this is just me but i think the part where upper body starts to get wider...part somewhere around begining of chest and end of stomach should start being wider a bit to higher than now... (hope u understood what I ment to say...im not quite good at spelling) Keep it up! __________________ Even the smallest piece of dust, has a reason why it's on that particular place in that particular time in that particular form and shape.

15-08-2006, 11:33 AM	#4
Diabolos Evil MAYA useR Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Berlin Posts: 812 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	I think its a good start, my only comment is I think that the bumpmap on the head looks too much like a bumpmap if you know what I mean. Have you tried sculpting the details out with zBrush? Have you seen the movie "Immortal"? May give you some good reference if not........ __________________ "But then I sigh, and with a piece of scripture, Tell them that God bids us do good for evil. And thus I clothe my naked villainy With odd old ends stolen forth of holy writ, And seem I a saint, when most I play the Devil." - William Shakespeare Diabolos' Windows Live Space [My Online Gallery] UPDATED: May 05, 2007

15-08-2006, 01:46 PM	#5
e-moo maxer Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Dhaka Posts: 61 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	elveatles: thanks mate i'll check on the scapula... i don't have good references fot the body... most of the model is my plain observation 3DSpirit: thanks for ur crit... but i tried to have the wider shoulder view for this one Diabolos: yeah i've sculped the details in z brush... my bad skills doesn't quite show that up I didn't see "Immortal" but thanks a lot for the screen grab! Listen guys... i'm pretty confused about the clothing and the armor of the character...can anyone suggest some? __________________ Horus WIP ____________ my renderblog

15-08-2006, 02:36 PM	#6
Tank[NL] New goal: Platinum spam Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Your happyplace. I stole it... Posts: 3,423 Thanks: 3 Thanked 12 Times in 11 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	well, i reall suggest watchin immortal. is a very impressive movie and te theme matches yours, rom what ive seen. as far as armor, the gods in immortal dont have any... ancient egyptians wore helmets and lots of cloth, as far as i know. not to familiar with their armies... it is a cool project ad i really like the detail you put in the head, looks good. gl dude, waiting to see some progress __________________ NEW SIGNATURE! aint it pretty? Last edited by Tank[NL]; 15-08-2006 at 02:39 PM..

15-08-2006, 04:49 AM	#2
elveatles Registered User Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 127 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Cool idea. I think the muscles on the back near the scapula need some work.

15-08-2006, 02:49 PM	#7
Diabolos Evil MAYA useR Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Berlin Posts: 812 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	Sorry my comment was not aimed at your level of skill, just think that the detail needs to be a little more defined if you can or even if you want to. It's your model and your interpretation........ Armour - just as Tank mentioned - here is a small image I found. D, __________________ "But then I sigh, and with a piece of scripture, Tell them that God bids us do good for evil. And thus I clothe my naked villainy With odd old ends stolen forth of holy writ, And seem I a saint, when most I play the Devil." - William Shakespeare Diabolos' Windows Live Space [My Online Gallery] UPDATED: May 05, 2007

17-08-2006, 10:20 AM	#8
e-moo maxer Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Dhaka Posts: 61 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Diabolos: Thanks for ur support man...I've collected some images from a google session.... hope to post some updates soon __________________ Horus WIP ____________ my renderblog

17-08-2006, 11:51 AM	#9
softocean Registered User Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: around Los Angeles Posts: 147 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	the model looks like it is coming along nicely. Be careful about definition in some areas - the knees for example - we should see evidence of muscle, sinew and bone. I can't make out a patella yet.

31-08-2006, 12:09 AM	#10
e-moo maxer Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Dhaka Posts: 61 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Small update __________________ Horus WIP ____________ my renderblog

31-08-2006, 04:26 PM	#11
Tank[NL] New goal: Platinum spam Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Your happyplace. I stole it... Posts: 3,423 Thanks: 3 Thanked 12 Times in 11 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	cool update. a few points though. the toes are really to similar. they could use some variation. the leg guard looks really nice. it also looks like it will be made of metal or metal clad. i doubt it will be very pleasant to walk in. the piece between the foot and the ankle joint should prolly look more like leather, or something that will be able to bend when walking. gl __________________ NEW SIGNATURE! aint it pretty?

31-08-2006, 11:52 PM	#12
gfx.KhronoS ...want some peanuts? Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Romania, Galati Posts: 855 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Well horus is a god... he will find a way to walk with that metal piece =)) Btw e-moo very good job. __________________ Follow your dream! Unless it's the one where you're at work in your underwear during a fire drill. Sorry for my bad english, still in the struggle to improve it.

01-09-2006, 03:45 AM	#13
YEAROFTHEOX Registered Lurker Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: London, On. Posts: 422 Thanks: 1 Thanked 11 Times in 10 Posts	The calf muscles on your legs are too high, they should start below the knee, not behind it. (IMO) __________________ Thread Killer.

02-11-2006, 09:59 AM	#14
e-moo maxer Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Dhaka Posts: 61 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Tiny update :) gfx.KhronoS: YEAROFTHEOX: You are right probably... cause i modeled without any references... just what came in my mind... i'll try to matchup with some reference figure... next i'll add details to the waist piece... __________________ Horus WIP ____________ my renderblog Last edited by e-moo; 02-11-2006 at 04:38 PM..

28-05-2007, 03:42 AM	#15
Sanislov Registered User Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Kalocsa, Hungary Posts: 109 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	will you finish it? good model __________________ Balázs Szeleczki DeviantART

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