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luisaum_gma · 27-10-2006, 10:25 PM

Hi all!

I was navigating on google to try to find a reference image, and make a "copy" of it. I've found this image and I like it very much, so I tried to make a kind of stylized version of the photo. I hope you like and make some C&C!

High Resolution

Thanks!

fartbunny · 27-10-2006, 10:28 PM

it seems the textures for the roof in the upper-left corner are to tiled.. you can see where the texture repeats itself..

but overall a realy nice render which would look awesome with just a few more adjustments

luisaum_gma · 27-10-2006, 10:34 PM

Thanks man. About this tile think, actually I made it purpose, cause the original photo have those parts tiled too.

Phantom.cz · 27-10-2006, 11:29 PM

Man, that's really coool.
I agree with fatbunny(

) and those dirt maps are in too low res., but it's very professional.

inveni0 · 27-10-2006, 11:49 PM

I'd like to see a bit larger version of the original if that's possible.

luisaum_gma · 28-10-2006, 12:02 AM

Thanks. Here it is:

andrewf1 · 28-10-2006, 02:16 AM

very good scene and great textures

, one thing i would remove from the image is the blurring/dof...it doesn't suit the scene, as you can see from the reference picture.

Kage · 28-10-2006, 03:36 AM

Yeah, very impressive work

With a bit more texture adjustments/render adjustments, it could be almost exactly like the original image. Another thing I noticed though is that the reference has really soft shadows, yet in the render, the shadows have a harder feel which could be changed to add more impact

Nippur · 28-10-2006, 03:42 AM

Looks like you "coppied" the reference image very well. I would advise you to sharpen your image a bit (for example in photoshop). And maybe change the sky, it doesn't fit the scene lighting in my opinion. Otherwise, I like it a lot

luisaum_gma · 28-10-2006, 05:20 AM

andrewf1, thanks! yeah, i think i overreacted on the DOF.

Kage, thanks man! the reference don't have visible sun shadows, but i put it just for make a diference, cause i want to do like it was a diferent day, diferent time.

Nippur, thanks man! Actually the sky is the hdri that i used to the skylight, but i think it lost a little on the color correction.

But overall, my intention was make like a game version of the photo, that's why i put things that doesn't exist on the original scene (like the sun shadow, the diferent sky).

Thanks everyone!

ZippZopp · 28-10-2006, 05:30 AM

great render and textures, nice job!

inveni0 · 28-10-2006, 07:04 AM

Thanks for the large reference...now how about a wire, lol. Your textures seem...unorthodox...and I want to see how you managed them.

luisaum_gma · 29-10-2006, 04:16 AM

Thanks ZippZopp!

And inveni0, what you mean unorthodox hehe?
I don't have the max file right now, but i have a render without textures to show you guys:

Thanks!

djmj · 29-10-2006, 11:01 AM

I didnt like the DOF, otherwise looks very good. The texture are to repetive on the "higher" wall. This you already knew, but here is something new. Wrong shading for the tree. Is it just a 2d plane? Then try to make it 3d.....
If the trunk is 3d, does it resive shadows, and does your branches cast shadows? Dont know whats going on...Hmm

Nice render and very close to the ref image.
Make the changes and this is a Five star render

Cheers

Real 3D · 29-10-2006, 12:04 PM

I think you have done a pretty good job there, well done

although I think that some textures are way too blurry or is it bcoz of the DOF, dunno but looks pretty Real to me, good work

27-10-2006, 10:25 PM	#1
luisaum_gma CG Artist Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: brazil Posts: 72 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	The Village Hi all! I was navigating on google to try to find a reference image, and make a "copy" of it. I've found this image and I like it very much, so I tried to make a kind of stylized version of the photo. I hope you like and make some C&C! High Resolution Thanks! __________________ luis ramos Site · Blog Last edited by luisaum_gma; 30-10-2006 at 06:21 PM..

27-10-2006, 10:34 PM	#3
luisaum_gma CG Artist Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: brazil Posts: 72 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Thanks man. About this tile think, actually I made it purpose, cause the original photo have those parts tiled too. __________________ luis ramos Site · Blog

27-10-2006, 11:29 PM	#4
Phantom.cz Mysterious user Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Heart of Europe - Prague Posts: 362 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Man, that's really coool. I agree with fatbunny() and those dirt maps are in too low res., but it's very professional. __________________ Regards, Phantom.cz please, check out my: Last completed 3d artwork: Samsung S600 Speed modeling challenge wins: Telephone booth, Rocket backpack My 3D software: Cinema 4D

27-10-2006, 11:49 PM	#5
inveni0 Man of the Hour Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Why right here, of course... Posts: 6,814 Thanks: 40 Thanked 35 Times in 31 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 5	I'd like to see a bit larger version of the original if that's possible. __________________ The Easter Bunny is a MONSTER! - It's Out!

28-10-2006, 12:02 AM	#6
luisaum_gma CG Artist Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: brazil Posts: 72 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Thanks. Here it is: __________________ luis ramos Site · Blog

27-10-2006, 10:28 PM	#2
fartbunny 3Dwannabee Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Belgium Posts: 314 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	it seems the textures for the roof in the upper-left corner are to tiled.. you can see where the texture repeats itself.. but overall a realy nice render which would look awesome with just a few more adjustments

28-10-2006, 02:16 AM	#7
andrewf1 see it different Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: sibiu, romania Posts: 224 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	very good scene and great textures, one thing i would remove from the image is the blurring/dof...it doesn't suit the scene, as you can see from the reference picture.

28-10-2006, 03:36 AM	#8
Kage Perfectionist... Join Date: May 2006 Location: UK Posts: 3,656 Thanks: 36 Thanked 66 Times in 61 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 5	Yeah, very impressive work With a bit more texture adjustments/render adjustments, it could be almost exactly like the original image. Another thing I noticed though is that the reference has really soft shadows, yet in the render, the shadows have a harder feel which could be changed to add more impact __________________ First Finished Project: Z-5500 Speaker Set Current WIP Projects: Korg Krome from PMC Xbox 360 set Older WIP Projects (Some dead for now): Z-5500 Speaker Set WIP (Now Finished) Dance Pad Model (DDR/DS) WIP

28-10-2006, 03:42 AM	#9
Nippur Registered User Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Prague Posts: 1,632 Thanks: 4 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Looks like you "coppied" the reference image very well. I would advise you to sharpen your image a bit (for example in photoshop). And maybe change the sky, it doesn't fit the scene lighting in my opinion. Otherwise, I like it a lot __________________ Visit my MiniCity here and make it grow

28-10-2006, 05:20 AM	#10
luisaum_gma CG Artist Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: brazil Posts: 72 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	andrewf1, thanks! yeah, i think i overreacted on the DOF. Kage, thanks man! the reference don't have visible sun shadows, but i put it just for make a diference, cause i want to do like it was a diferent day, diferent time. Nippur, thanks man! Actually the sky is the hdri that i used to the skylight, but i think it lost a little on the color correction. But overall, my intention was make like a game version of the photo, that's why i put things that doesn't exist on the original scene (like the sun shadow, the diferent sky). Thanks everyone! __________________ luis ramos Site · Blog

28-10-2006, 05:30 AM	#11
ZippZopp Registered User Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	great render and textures, nice job! __________________ Peter Zoppi Character Artist Treyarch My Website

28-10-2006, 07:04 AM	#12
inveni0 Man of the Hour Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Why right here, of course... Posts: 6,814 Thanks: 40 Thanked 35 Times in 31 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 5	Thanks for the large reference...now how about a wire, lol. Your textures seem...unorthodox...and I want to see how you managed them. __________________ The Easter Bunny is a MONSTER! - It's Out!

29-10-2006, 04:16 AM	#13
luisaum_gma CG Artist Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: brazil Posts: 72 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Thanks ZippZopp! And inveni0, what you mean unorthodox hehe? I don't have the max file right now, but i have a render without textures to show you guys: Thanks! __________________ luis ramos Site · Blog

29-10-2006, 11:01 AM	#14
djmj Registered User Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: sweden. But i like to move around... Posts: 447 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I didnt like the DOF, otherwise looks very good. The texture are to repetive on the "higher" wall. This you already knew, but here is something new. Wrong shading for the tree. Is it just a 2d plane? Then try to make it 3d..... If the trunk is 3d, does it resive shadows, and does your branches cast shadows? Dont know whats going on...Hmm Nice render and very close to the ref image. Make the changes and this is a Five star render Cheers Last edited by djmj; 29-10-2006 at 11:07 AM..

29-10-2006, 12:04 PM	#15
Real 3D name's S.H.A.N.K Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 423 Thanks: 0 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	I think you have done a pretty good job there, well done although I think that some textures are way too blurry or is it bcoz of the DOF, dunno but looks pretty Real to me, good work

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