'09 Dodge Challenger

RRRrrrMate · 21-10-2008, 04:03 PM

Hey everyone, here is my latest 'work in progress'. Modeled in Maya 2009. Comments and critiques welcome!

McFly · 21-10-2008, 05:56 PM

Not much to crit! The mesh is a clean one indeed! What's next? The interior?

How about the c350 ? Still WIP or a lost project?

RRRrrrMate · 21-10-2008, 07:29 PM

Hey, thanks Mcfly! Still a bit of detail to finish on the exterior (wipers, brakes, etc.), then I may move on to the interior. As far as the C350 goes... its more of a lost project right now. Might revisit it later.

danielmn · 21-10-2008, 09:06 PM

i agree with mcfly really cant find anything to critique looks good man. Cant wait to see the textures and some beauty renders

parleee · 21-10-2008, 09:13 PM

Very good work. Your edge flow and consistency is excellent, and the model is almost perfect. I would love to see this rendered and textured. There is one minor issue I see. Just at the junction of the front pillar and roofline above the windshield. The angle isn't quite consistent. Also, I could be wrong, but looking at a photo, I think the wing mirrors might be a touch to large.

Beyond that it's perfect.

PsyPuff · 21-10-2008, 09:51 PM

You are good!
You are definitely good!
Sweet and Clean Model... Perfectionism at it's best!

But... (And there is always a but!)
After 15 mins of sitting very close to screen and comapring with the real thing, I found something!
Actually it's a tiny thing but yet noticeable:

The shape of the foglights is bending the black plastic underneath it. (Or at least seems to be doing that)
The black plastic itself is not flowing with the overall shape of the bumper like yours.

Take a look:

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Well... Hope it's helping... Everything else is perfect as parlee said!
Will follow this one for sure!
Godspeed..

RRRrrrMate · 21-10-2008, 10:18 PM

Thanks for the critiques everyone, I will work on making these changes tonight. My blueprints are from the concept while all the reference photos are from the production version. It has posed a few challenges.

RRRrrrMate · 22-10-2008, 03:34 PM

Made a few changes...

younglion · 22-10-2008, 10:13 PM

high quality work man..the wires are not over complicated simple and nice. I will be watching this forum. keep it up

Bubbaloo · 23-10-2008, 01:24 AM

Very cool. Render that sucka!

RRRrrrMate · 30-10-2008, 02:00 AM

Early render test...

Tuss4 · 30-10-2008, 02:14 AM

reflections seem to be good bro, keep it up.

RRRrrrMate · 30-10-2008, 11:03 PM

Here's another render. I think I am getting close to finished...

RRRrrrMate · 30-10-2008, 11:28 PM

A few more...

Bigley · 30-10-2008, 11:48 PM

I like the renders man... and as said earlier... Very clean mesh. Awesome work

21-10-2008, 04:03 PM	#1
RRRrrrMate Registered User Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Canada Posts: 66 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	'09 Dodge Challenger Hey everyone, here is my latest 'work in progress'. Modeled in Maya 2009. Comments and critiques welcome! Attached Images Last edited by RRRrrrMate; 30-10-2008 at 02:24 PM..

21-10-2008, 05:56 PM	#2
McFly Monogon Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Lyon Posts: 3,108 Thanks: 8 Thanked 228 Times in 215 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 10	Not much to crit! The mesh is a clean one indeed! What's next? The interior? How about the c350 ? Still WIP or a lost project? __________________ You see what happens Larry? You see what happens when you meet a stranger in the Alps? - Walter Sobchak My WIP dump

21-10-2008, 09:13 PM	#5
parleee Canadian, eh? Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Manisnowba Posts: 1,226 Thanks: 32 Thanked 37 Times in 35 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 4	Very good work. Your edge flow and consistency is excellent, and the model is almost perfect. I would love to see this rendered and textured. There is one minor issue I see. Just at the junction of the front pillar and roofline above the windshield. The angle isn't quite consistent. Also, I could be wrong, but looking at a photo, I think the wing mirrors might be a touch to large. Beyond that it's perfect. __________________ Rawr? Looking for work. * http://vimeo.com/27518412 my panhead model, free to use for credited, non-commercial work. https://www.dropbox.com/s/z086qvlg33h42rg/panhead.zip

21-10-2008, 09:51 PM	#6
PsyPuff We all made of vertices Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Israel Posts: 181 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	You are good! You are definitely good! Sweet and Clean Model... Perfectionism at it's best! But... (And there is always a but!) After 15 mins of sitting very close to screen and comapring with the real thing, I found something! Actually it's a tiny thing but yet noticeable: The shape of the foglights is bending the black plastic underneath it. (Or at least seems to be doing that) The black plastic itself is not flowing with the overall shape of the bumper like yours. Take a look: Well... Hope it's helping... Everything else is perfect as parlee said! Will follow this one for sure! Godspeed.. __________________ You will find whatever you are looking for at the last place that you will look for it! Wips: Concept car - Based on Audi R8 NEW!!! Subaru Impreza STI 07 (on hold) Honda Accord (on hold) Finished Projects: Mazda MX5

22-10-2008, 03:34 PM	#8
RRRrrrMate Registered User Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Canada Posts: 66 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Made a few changes... Attached Images

21-10-2008, 07:29 PM	#3
RRRrrrMate Registered User Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Canada Posts: 66 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Hey, thanks Mcfly! Still a bit of detail to finish on the exterior (wipers, brakes, etc.), then I may move on to the interior. As far as the C350 goes... its more of a lost project right now. Might revisit it later.

21-10-2008, 09:06 PM	#4
danielmn Registered User Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: dallas,tx Posts: 165 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	i agree with mcfly really cant find anything to critique looks good man. Cant wait to see the textures and some beauty renders

21-10-2008, 10:18 PM	#7
RRRrrrMate Registered User Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Canada Posts: 66 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Thanks for the critiques everyone, I will work on making these changes tonight. My blueprints are from the concept while all the reference photos are from the production version. It has posed a few challenges.

22-10-2008, 10:13 PM	#9
younglion F.A.N.A.T.I.C. Join Date: May 2006 Location: Waterloo, ON Posts: 581 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	high quality work man..the wires are not over complicated simple and nice. I will be watching this forum. keep it up

23-10-2008, 01:24 AM	#10
Bubbaloo I be learnin me some 3d. Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Tulsa, Oklahoma U.S.A. Posts: 1,938 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Very cool. Render that sucka! __________________ Brian Looney Tulsa, Oklahoma My Wesite: http://lunatic-studio.com/

30-10-2008, 02:00 AM	#11
RRRrrrMate Registered User Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Canada Posts: 66 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Early render test... Attached Images

30-10-2008, 02:14 AM	#12
Tuss4 UNCH UNH Yehhh.... Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 1,466 Thanks: 2 Thanked 8 Times in 8 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	reflections seem to be good bro, keep it up. __________________ .:\|my take on Iron Man W. I. P.\|:. .:\|my Fairlady Z W. I. P.\|:. Check out my blog click on my sig!

30-10-2008, 11:03 PM	#13
RRRrrrMate Registered User Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Canada Posts: 66 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Here's another render. I think I am getting close to finished... Attached Images

30-10-2008, 11:28 PM	#14
RRRrrrMate Registered User Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Canada Posts: 66 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	A few more... Attached Images

30-10-2008, 11:48 PM	#15
Bigley Modeler Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Dallas, TX Posts: 1,978 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	I like the renders man... and as said earlier... Very clean mesh. Awesome work __________________ jeremiahbigley.com 3docean Portfolio

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