ATOMHAWK-2D-WIP-ATOMHAWK_The Dark Inker

thedarkinker · 23-03-2011, 12:11 PM

Place Holder Font and text.

Blender-Man · 23-03-2011, 04:43 PM

Nice.

atahan_zugul · 23-03-2011, 07:48 PM

Nice - digging the punk/hipster kinda look that the girls got goin on - gives her some real character. Only thing i'd suggest with the composition is possibly moving her up or cropping the top - so as to bring her eyeline to the top third of the composition - seems a little too centered at the moment - ie too much white space on the top in my opinion. Keep up the good work man, looking forward to seeing it colored up.

migroe · 24-03-2011, 07:12 PM

great sketch! really like your line-art

especially her hands are looking really nice

thedarkinker · 25-03-2011, 06:06 AM

Blender-Man, Cheers.

atahan_zugul, Thanks man, I see what you’re saying about the composition

Once I get the girl painted up I'll play around with her position.
I'm still thinking about ideas for what's in the background.

migroe, Thanks.

The rough idea for the back story to this image is.
It's some far off time in the future something has happened to the sun.
The planet is almost in total darkness.
This has resulted in the creatures of the dark preying on the weak and vulnerable.
But there is one hope left, AtomHawk, the girl with the mysterious power to bring light.

Here's the latest on the image, wanted to play around with her eyes, to give her a slightly strange, odd look.
Not sure, but I'll live with it a while and see how it looks.

thedarkinker · 28-03-2011, 06:40 AM

Sorry not a big update, pushed for time

Worked in her hair and I'm just about to start painting in the helmet.

DaddyDoom · 28-03-2011, 07:54 AM

Some cool paint work going.
Keep up

atahan_zugul · 28-03-2011, 10:42 AM

Nice work man - its really coming along. Your color palette is looking quite saturated even in the shadows, is this the direction you heading in? Also i keep fluctuating between her eyes and the light coming from her hands - maybe competing focal points - or this where you were looking to go with the piece. Keep it up man, look forward to seeing where you take it next.

MemoNick · 28-03-2011, 03:07 PM

Amazing Eyes!

Blender-Man · 28-03-2011, 08:23 PM

Amazing Eyes and hair ! Right eye for me its better.

MemoNick · 28-03-2011, 08:25 PM

Yeah, I agree with Blender, the black part of the left eye is way too big.

thedarkinker · 29-03-2011, 06:37 AM

DaddyDoom Thanks mate.

atahan_zugul Great feedback, Not sure yet about the strength of the colour palette. I'm going to push it along as it is and I can always pull the colours down a bit later. You could be right about the competing focal point, once I get the glowing light in I'll have to make a decision about that one.

MemoNick Blender-Man MemoNick thanks guys, yeah I'm still not sure about the eye's, could be the left is just a bit too big.

Trying to get as much done as time will allow, hope I can make the deadline!
Here's the latest

migroe · 02-04-2011, 08:02 PM

awesome! love the colours, the style, the texturing

grapix · 02-04-2011, 08:16 PM

Looks great, keep it up !

thedarkinker · 03-04-2011, 01:00 PM

migroe
grapix

Thanks guys

I'm really enjoying Woking on this image, pushed for time with other commitments but will do all I can to get her finished in time!!
Here's the latest.

23-03-2011, 12:11 PM	#1
thedarkinker Registered User Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Brighton UK Posts: 22 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	ATOMHAWK-2D-WIP-ATOMHAWK_The Dark Inker Place Holder Font and text. Attached Images

25-03-2011, 06:06 AM	#5
thedarkinker Registered User Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Brighton UK Posts: 22 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Blender-Man, Cheers. atahan_zugul, Thanks man, I see what you’re saying about the composition Once I get the girl painted up I'll play around with her position. I'm still thinking about ideas for what's in the background. migroe, Thanks. The rough idea for the back story to this image is. It's some far off time in the future something has happened to the sun. The planet is almost in total darkness. This has resulted in the creatures of the dark preying on the weak and vulnerable. But there is one hope left, AtomHawk, the girl with the mysterious power to bring light. Here's the latest on the image, wanted to play around with her eyes, to give her a slightly strange, odd look. Not sure, but I'll live with it a while and see how it looks. Attached Images

28-03-2011, 06:40 AM	#6
thedarkinker Registered User Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Brighton UK Posts: 22 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Sorry not a big update, pushed for time Worked in her hair and I'm just about to start painting in the helmet. Attached Images

28-03-2011, 07:54 AM	#7
DaddyDoom has them big as mellons! Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Portugal Posts: 4,779 Thanks: 66 Thanked 56 Times in 33 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 11	Some cool paint work going. Keep up __________________ Zuckerberg created the Social Network and got filthy rich in the process. Sathe created the Anti-Social Network and wont get rich in the process.

29-03-2011, 06:37 AM	#12
thedarkinker Registered User Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Brighton UK Posts: 22 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	DaddyDoom Thanks mate. atahan_zugul Great feedback, Not sure yet about the strength of the colour palette. I'm going to push it along as it is and I can always pull the colours down a bit later. You could be right about the competing focal point, once I get the glowing light in I'll have to make a decision about that one. MemoNick Blender-Man MemoNick thanks guys, yeah I'm still not sure about the eye's, could be the left is just a bit too big. Trying to get as much done as time will allow, hope I can make the deadline! Here's the latest Attached Images

23-03-2011, 04:43 PM	#2
Blender-Man Registered User Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 27 Thanks: 1 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Nice.

23-03-2011, 07:48 PM	#3
atahan_zugul Registered User Join Date: Mar 2011 Location: Sydney, Australia Posts: 20 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Nice - digging the punk/hipster kinda look that the girls got goin on - gives her some real character. Only thing i'd suggest with the composition is possibly moving her up or cropping the top - so as to bring her eyeline to the top third of the composition - seems a little too centered at the moment - ie too much white space on the top in my opinion. Keep up the good work man, looking forward to seeing it colored up.

24-03-2011, 07:12 PM	#4
migroe Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 53 Thanks: 0 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	great sketch! really like your line-art especially her hands are looking really nice

28-03-2011, 10:42 AM	#8
atahan_zugul Registered User Join Date: Mar 2011 Location: Sydney, Australia Posts: 20 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Nice work man - its really coming along. Your color palette is looking quite saturated even in the shadows, is this the direction you heading in? Also i keep fluctuating between her eyes and the light coming from her hands - maybe competing focal points - or this where you were looking to go with the piece. Keep it up man, look forward to seeing where you take it next.

28-03-2011, 03:07 PM	#9
MemoNick Registered User Join Date: Jan 2011 Posts: 184 Thanks: 10 Thanked 9 Times in 9 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Amazing Eyes!

28-03-2011, 08:23 PM	#10
Blender-Man Registered User Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 27 Thanks: 1 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Amazing Eyes and hair ! Right eye for me its better.

28-03-2011, 08:25 PM	#11
MemoNick Registered User Join Date: Jan 2011 Posts: 184 Thanks: 10 Thanked 9 Times in 9 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Yeah, I agree with Blender, the black part of the left eye is way too big.

02-04-2011, 08:02 PM	#13
migroe Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 53 Thanks: 0 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	awesome! love the colours, the style, the texturing

02-04-2011, 08:16 PM	#14
grapix Registered User Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Bosnia and Herzegovina Posts: 146 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Looks great, keep it up !

03-04-2011, 01:00 PM	#15
thedarkinker Registered User Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Brighton UK Posts: 22 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	migroe grapix Thanks guys I'm really enjoying Woking on this image, pushed for time with other commitments but will do all I can to get her finished in time!! Here's the latest. Attached Images

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