Dominace War V - 3D - God of Chaos - TMNI VISION

TMNI VISION · 25-03-2011, 06:04 AM

Final submission .

gestis · 25-03-2011, 09:40 AM

Good luck with nice start.

Just don't get too ornamental/decorative - that happens, then you repeat the same shape over and over again. I like that big eye and the idea that he does not walk but float.

miclepickle · 25-03-2011, 06:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by gestis

Good luck with nice start.

Just don't get too ornamental/decorative - that happens, then you repeat the same shape over and over again. I like that big eye and the idea that he does not walk but float.

I agree, the details on the head(above the nose) are kinda odd...

the 1 eye is ok but I am not overly fond of the overall shape of the head as well as the repeating wavy shapes. doesnt seem very anatomically believable.

but I really like whats going on below the neck... looking pretty sweet, keep up the good work!

Warlock 279 · 25-03-2011, 07:52 PM

Nice start. I'm generally really liking the face, except for the one little bit above the nose/below the eye, that doesn't seem to gel with the rest of the face. Otherwise that's a cool head shape, I really like that mouth, and the upper portion of the torso is looking really good. I'd like to see you push the lower torso [from the waist down] a lot more tho. Right now its really straight, just a continuation of the upper torso down to the ground. I think you could get a lot more interesting with that shape, widening it, maybe adding in some gnarled twisted asymmetrical forms, go crazy with it. He's the god chaos, lets see some chaos!

zugok · 26-03-2011, 12:39 AM

Looking great so far! Since it is about Chaos you might consider so random forms or mutations.

Cheers

TMNI VISION · 26-03-2011, 04:24 AM

Hi,

Thanks a lot for such nice comments and great suggestions. Helps a lot. Those designs above the nose is kinda armor peace I was planing for. Sorry they r attached to the head right now

. I was planing to create the mutant chaotic part to the back. But now have to think should it be to any side. Thanks

and good luck to everyone.

DaddyDoom · 26-03-2011, 07:08 AM

Good starter!

washka · 26-03-2011, 03:35 PM

Nice "start", agree about eye comment , welcome to the comp'.

miclepickle · 26-03-2011, 04:30 PM

oh, if thats a mask it works fine, might be cool if his flesh attaches to it, similar to how trees sometimes grow through chain link fences...

Puckducker · 26-03-2011, 05:45 PM

Great start on the rough sculpt, the overall shape your character feels great.

I'd say lose the eye entirely though, I feel like your head is working extremely well without it, and it doesn't quite fit in with the design right now.

Overall really solid stuff, looking forward to the updates.

TMNI VISION · 26-03-2011, 07:18 PM

DaddyDoom , Puckducker Thanks

.

miclepickle : Thats a great reference. Thanks .

Idea for one eye was only for one perception of chaos and Destruction.Two eyes but closed and unable to open is sign of unable of 2nd perception or changing mind from chaos .Just a thought but if does not work have to figure out something else. But anyways did some updates . Hope u guys like it. Thanks

.

koyima · 26-03-2011, 07:28 PM

Nice, but not chaos I think. Maybe just change the name..? Dig the torso.

mix_mash · 27-03-2011, 02:10 PM

Your design is looking great. Look forward to seeing it developed.

Anyway, your god need needs to watch out for the 'God of Three Stooges'. He is quite the expert at eye poking.

Paul
(mix_mash)

washka · 27-03-2011, 02:53 PM

Second sight = pervert, everybody know that...

TMNI VISION · 27-03-2011, 04:35 PM

mix_mash: Thanks.

washka:

.

Got some updates. Hope u guys like it. Thanks

.

25-03-2011, 06:04 AM	#1
TMNI VISION Registered User Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Bangladesh Posts: 212 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Dominace War V - 3D - God of Chaos - TMNI VISION Final submission . Attached Images __________________ THE WITCH Dominace War V - 3D - God of Chaos Last edited by TMNI VISION; 28-05-2011 at 02:39 PM..

25-03-2011, 07:52 PM	#4
Warlock 279 Stealing your polygons! Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: 11°19′N, 142°15′E Posts: 1,048 Thanks: 1 Thanked 24 Times in 23 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 9	Nice start. I'm generally really liking the face, except for the one little bit above the nose/below the eye, that doesn't seem to gel with the rest of the face. Otherwise that's a cool head shape, I really like that mouth, and the upper portion of the torso is looking really good. I'd like to see you push the lower torso [from the waist down] a lot more tho. Right now its really straight, just a continuation of the upper torso down to the ground. I think you could get a lot more interesting with that shape, widening it, maybe adding in some gnarled twisted asymmetrical forms, go crazy with it. He's the god chaos, lets see some chaos! __________________ * Lightwave * User

26-03-2011, 04:24 AM	#6
TMNI VISION Registered User Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Bangladesh Posts: 212 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Hi, Thanks a lot for such nice comments and great suggestions. Helps a lot. Those designs above the nose is kinda armor peace I was planing for. Sorry they r attached to the head right now . I was planing to create the mutant chaotic part to the back. But now have to think should it be to any side. Thanks and good luck to everyone. __________________ THE WITCH Dominace War V - 3D - God of Chaos

26-03-2011, 07:08 AM	#7
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26-03-2011, 03:35 PM	#8
washka (Oo) Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Belgium Posts: 2,723 Thanks: 201 Thanked 126 Times in 113 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	Nice "start", agree about eye comment , welcome to the comp'. __________________ Nexus (2D thread) My Blog Member initiate of the very secret splotcher congregation... If you really like what you do, you can make marvellous things, if you don't: use your eraser and take a breath!

25-03-2011, 09:40 AM	#2
gestis Registered User Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 58 Thanks: 3 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Good luck with nice start. Just don't get too ornamental/decorative - that happens, then you repeat the same shape over and over again. I like that big eye and the idea that he does not walk but float.

26-03-2011, 12:39 AM	#5
zugok John Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Kali-phone-eeya Posts: 22 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Looking great so far! Since it is about Chaos you might consider so random forms or mutations. Cheers

26-03-2011, 04:30 PM	#9
miclepickle Registered User Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Kansas City Posts: 181 Thanks: 2 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	oh, if thats a mask it works fine, might be cool if his flesh attaches to it, similar to how trees sometimes grow through chain link fences... __________________ Dominance War V - WIP http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...635#post845635 Portfolio- MCampbell3d.blogspot.com

26-03-2011, 05:45 PM	#10
Puckducker Da blue bus is calling us Join Date: May 2005 Location: Montreal, Quebec, Canada Posts: 1,297 Thanks: 0 Thanked 14 Times in 14 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 8	Great start on the rough sculpt, the overall shape your character feels great. I'd say lose the eye entirely though, I feel like your head is working extremely well without it, and it doesn't quite fit in with the design right now. Overall really solid stuff, looking forward to the updates. __________________ The only way to define the limitations of our existence is to go beyond them. CURRENT WIP: DW5-3D-Götterdämmerung -Puckducker LATEST COMPLETED PROJECT: DWIV - 3D - Puckducker - Dark Matter

26-03-2011, 07:18 PM	#11
TMNI VISION Registered User Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Bangladesh Posts: 212 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	DaddyDoom , Puckducker Thanks . miclepickle : Thats a great reference. Thanks . Idea for one eye was only for one perception of chaos and Destruction.Two eyes but closed and unable to open is sign of unable of 2nd perception or changing mind from chaos .Just a thought but if does not work have to figure out something else. But anyways did some updates . Hope u guys like it. Thanks . Attached Images __________________ THE WITCH Dominace War V - 3D - God of Chaos

26-03-2011, 07:28 PM	#12
koyima Registered User Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 147 Thanks: 23 Thanked 9 Times in 9 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Nice, but not chaos I think. Maybe just change the name..? Dig the torso. __________________ 4P CO-OP FPS - Insection

27-03-2011, 02:10 PM	#13
mix_mash Registered User Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 152 Thanks: 4 Thanked 8 Times in 6 Posts	Your design is looking great. Look forward to seeing it developed. Anyway, your god need needs to watch out for the 'God of Three Stooges'. He is quite the expert at eye poking. Paul (mix_mash) __________________ Check out my video tutes!! http://www.youtube.com/user/MixMashCom My Dominance War 4 attempt My Dominance War 5 attempt

27-03-2011, 02:53 PM	#14
washka (Oo) Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Belgium Posts: 2,723 Thanks: 201 Thanked 126 Times in 113 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	Second sight = pervert, everybody know that... __________________ Nexus (2D thread) My Blog Member initiate of the very secret splotcher congregation... If you really like what you do, you can make marvellous things, if you don't: use your eraser and take a breath!

27-03-2011, 04:35 PM	#15
TMNI VISION Registered User Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Bangladesh Posts: 212 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	mix_mash: Thanks. washka: . Got some updates. Hope u guys like it. Thanks . Attached Images __________________ THE WITCH Dominace War V - 3D - God of Chaos

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