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Old 07-04-2011, 02:31 PM   #1
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Yeah, well here's some new picture of mine. Sculpt was made in ZBrush, post production in Photoshop. As it is kinda hard to get enough feedback here sometimes, I decided to finish this picture on my own and post the final now.

Anyway, crits and helpful advice are as always welcome!!!

PS: I have a much larger size version, but didn't want to bomb the whole screen with this.


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Old 07-04-2011, 03:18 PM   #2
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Aah, that is...interesting :-D
I'd add more texture to it and little bit less smoke
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Old 07-04-2011, 03:40 PM   #3
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Hard to get feedback? Now I can't stand by that without voicing my opinion

In my mind this looks like a quite cool image, you should add a nudity warning though perhaps as the alien's mouth looks like a vagina...


Would like to see more of your conceptualizing work in its wip stages
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Thx guys, I'll see if I can tweak it a bit. I added a nudity warning, but the thread title didn't update anymore after my changes. I'll pm a mod about this!!!


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Thx guys, I'll see if I can tweak it a bit. I added a nudity warning, but the thread title didn't update anymore after my changes. I'll pm a mod about this!!!


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Thanks!!! I've heard from different ppl that the models could use some further texturing, so I guess I'll go over the picture once again and post some update later...


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Thx!!! Ok, this here shall be final, else I will have to take it back into WIP - section, lol!

So here is what I've changed:

- I added only a few new textures at certain places like top of head of left alien, front arms of same alien. I found it was no real win for this picture. It rather was a camouflage for the sculpted details.

- overworked the colors of the larvae to make it look more natural and contrasty to the alien head, added some fake eyes like on a ref pic of some insect I found on the net

- turned down opacity of fog and background architecture

- added some space ships to achieve some more volume and depth and give the viewer some hint to the scale of the aliens

I will start a new work now, else I might edit the picture to death.


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