Bugatti Veyron

robslegtenhorst · 08-05-2011, 10:18 PM

Hey guys, my first post here

Decided to learn Maya with the Bugatti Veyron tutorial from the 3d total shop, and added a back alley scene to it. would love to here what you think.

tools: Maya, Mental ray, Photoshop

updated image thanks to ClassicGamer-3DT and sense-3d

robslegtenhorst · 13-05-2011, 10:06 AM

A larger view:

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ClassicGamer-3DT · 13-05-2011, 10:26 AM

A warm welcome to the forums!

It's not a bad start but the render is lacking proper realism. The alley and particularly the yellow taxi cab behind the image is blurred too much it becomes artificial instead of being a subtle depth of field. Although you have a sunlight in the scene it's appearing a little too soft, particularly for the time of day you are trying to depict..... what i'm trying to say is I think it lacks intensity and the colours lack a certain vibrancy. As a first post though it's 100% better than anything I created on here when I first joined. Could we see any wireframes and clays. The Modelling seems to be strong and fairly accurate, but the scaling might be an issue.

sense-3d · 14-05-2011, 07:14 AM

good modeling brother ..
but your rendering need to be better ..
I added some Photoshop adds on your pic ..
this is yours ..

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robslegtenhorst · 15-05-2011, 07:37 PM

Hey guys,

Thanks so much for your input. I updated the original post with the new image, I would love to hear what you think

+ clay renders:

ClassicGamer-3DT · 15-05-2011, 08:00 PM

Certainly looking better, the modelling looks great, thanks to the 3DTotal tutorial series

Very nice improvement.

08-05-2011, 10:18 PM	#1
robslegtenhorst Registered User Join Date: May 2011 Posts: 3 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Bugatti Veyron Hey guys, my first post here Decided to learn Maya with the Bugatti Veyron tutorial from the 3d total shop, and added a back alley scene to it. would love to here what you think. tools: Maya, Mental ray, Photoshop updated image thanks to ClassicGamer-3DT and sense-3d Attached Images Last edited by robslegtenhorst; 15-05-2011 at 07:40 PM.. Reason: removed link, attached file instead

13-05-2011, 10:26 AM	#3
ClassicGamer-3DT Reliable Moderator Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: East Midlands, UK Posts: 7,479 Thanks: 501 Thanked 379 Times in 344 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 9	A warm welcome to the forums! It's not a bad start but the render is lacking proper realism. The alley and particularly the yellow taxi cab behind the image is blurred too much it becomes artificial instead of being a subtle depth of field. Although you have a sunlight in the scene it's appearing a little too soft, particularly for the time of day you are trying to depict..... what i'm trying to say is I think it lacks intensity and the colours lack a certain vibrancy. As a first post though it's 100% better than anything I created on here when I first joined. Could we see any wireframes and clays. The Modelling seems to be strong and fairly accurate, but the scaling might be an issue. __________________ iMac\|Lion OSX\|Cinema 4D R12\|Photoshop CS4\| My New Portfolio My Blog (Now with Free Models) Twitter

15-05-2011, 07:37 PM	#5
robslegtenhorst Registered User Join Date: May 2011 Posts: 3 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hey guys, Thanks so much for your input. I updated the original post with the new image, I would love to hear what you think + clay renders: Last edited by robslegtenhorst; 15-05-2011 at 07:41 PM..

15-05-2011, 08:00 PM	#6
ClassicGamer-3DT Reliable Moderator Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: East Midlands, UK Posts: 7,479 Thanks: 501 Thanked 379 Times in 344 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 9	Certainly looking better, the modelling looks great, thanks to the 3DTotal tutorial series Very nice improvement. __________________ iMac\|Lion OSX\|Cinema 4D R12\|Photoshop CS4\| My New Portfolio My Blog (Now with Free Models) Twitter

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robslegtenhorst Registered User Join Date: May 2011 Posts: 3 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	A larger view: click

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sense-3d Registered User Join Date: Apr 2011 Posts: 45 Thanks: 0 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	good modeling brother .. but your rendering need to be better .. I added some Photoshop adds on your pic .. this is yours .. --- After

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