Iron Bridge...

JonM · 09-03-2003, 09:05 PM

I think I am pretty much done with this one...

3dsmax5 and brazil with some color correction in brazil...

crits/flames whatever are welcome!

David Ciprian · 09-03-2003, 09:20 PM

It's great even if the bridge texture makes it look to be made of one big metal piece.that's it's only problem...what the...?...flames?! here?...oh yeah i forgot: i'm jealous because i can't make realist outdoor scenes

Trevorn · 10-03-2003, 02:25 PM

Modelling and texturing look great, but I get the feeling there's a little too much ambient light. If the shadows on the stone walls under the bridge were a little darker, I think you would get a beter sense of depth.

JonM · 10-03-2003, 09:37 PM

ok thanks guys I will try too see what I can do about the shadows

Andy_k-3DT · 10-03-2003, 10:40 PM

I'd try dropping the diffusion on all your textures - or increasing the saturation of your background image - the bridge although rusty still looks a bit too smooth to me and the stone texture under the bridge looks as though it's pixellating quite badly - it would benefit from being scaled down as the stone blocks look awfully large compared to the others in the bridge.

Nice image though - just could benefit from a few tweaks

Andy

ronrn · 10-03-2003, 11:33 PM

Good image. I'm a bridge buff myself. Even helped to build a few in my time. The angle of the stone walls underneath the bridge is what catches my eye. They dont appear to be at 90 degrees to the bridge structure and stone column support. It seems too that the column for the opposite side should be visable. A little light penetration from the opposite side under it may also help a bit. Keep up the goog work

Splash · 11-03-2003, 07:25 PM

That is IRON BRIDGE in merry old england!!! I remember going on a school trip there about 3 years ago. GJ

JonM · 11-03-2003, 11:19 PM

ok I have been messing around with it some more I should be able to post another rendering up soon. Yes it is based on the old Iron Bridge in England but I just used that as a ref becuase I am not bridge builder :P

-Thanks for all your comments

fabrizzzio · 12-03-2003, 12:36 AM

Nice image.
I think that the edges maybe could be more rusty (stones and metals). And remember: where the sun hits with light is different that where there is in shadows. For example, the color of the metal is pale because the sunlight affects directly the paint.
You could add some irregularity, so the things won't be so predictable.

Zytrex · 12-03-2003, 06:38 AM

That looks really good. Only two things bug me: the rocks in the center on the post and the roof of the house look kind of strange.

3Dan · 12-03-2003, 12:38 PM

This scene has an impressionist tinge, all pastel tones, European Summer lighting. Perhaps a little contrast on the shadows underneath the bridge would help make it more realistic.

Mariska3d · 16-03-2003, 07:17 PM

Looks very nice, maybe some more depth of field.(background more blurry)

darnel25 · 17-03-2003, 07:31 AM

really nice work.

Gl2eEn · 17-03-2003, 08:59 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Trevorn
Modelling and texturing look great, but I get the feeling there's a little too much ambient light. If the shadows on the stone walls under the bridge were a little darker, I think you would get a beter sense of depth.

Absolutly agree!!!

but did you fix the little things, there briks on middle of the breadge.. ->

u said you'll fix em or somethign like that

Talonsblade · 17-03-2003, 02:55 PM

Nice picture, keep going. There is something bugging me though, is there suposta be another set of pillers and bridge support on the other side of the bridge. I didnt see any.

Just a thought.

09-03-2003, 09:05 PM	#1
JonM Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Oceanside, NY Posts: 19 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Iron Bridge... I think I am pretty much done with this one... 3dsmax5 and brazil with some color correction in brazil... crits/flames whatever are welcome! __________________ http://jonmdesign.net

09-03-2003, 09:20 PM	#2
David Ciprian Blacklow Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: in one's heart Posts: 1,029 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	It's great even if the bridge texture makes it look to be made of one big metal piece.that's it's only problem...what the...?...flames?! here?...oh yeah i forgot: i'm jealous because i can't make realist outdoor scenes __________________ You can never be too good, but you can always try!

10-03-2003, 09:37 PM	#4
JonM Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Oceanside, NY Posts: 19 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	ok thanks guys I will try too see what I can do about the shadows __________________ http://jonmdesign.net

11-03-2003, 07:25 PM	#7
Splash Registered User Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Nottingham, England Posts: 3 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	:P That is IRON BRIDGE in merry old england!!! I remember going on a school trip there about 3 years ago. GJ

11-03-2003, 11:19 PM	#8
JonM Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Oceanside, NY Posts: 19 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	ok I have been messing around with it some more I should be able to post another rendering up soon. Yes it is based on the old Iron Bridge in England but I just used that as a ref becuase I am not bridge builder :P -Thanks for all your comments __________________ http://jonmdesign.net

10-03-2003, 02:25 PM	#3
Trevorn Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 111 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Modelling and texturing look great, but I get the feeling there's a little too much ambient light. If the shadows on the stone walls under the bridge were a little darker, I think you would get a beter sense of depth.

10-03-2003, 10:40 PM	#5
Andy_k-3DT 3d monkey Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: UK Posts: 1,611 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	I'd try dropping the diffusion on all your textures - or increasing the saturation of your background image - the bridge although rusty still looks a bit too smooth to me and the stone texture under the bridge looks as though it's pixellating quite badly - it would benefit from being scaled down as the stone blocks look awfully large compared to the others in the bridge. Nice image though - just could benefit from a few tweaks Andy

10-03-2003, 11:33 PM	#6
ronrn zzzzzzz..... Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: southeastern US Posts: 414 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Good image. I'm a bridge buff myself. Even helped to build a few in my time. The angle of the stone walls underneath the bridge is what catches my eye. They dont appear to be at 90 degrees to the bridge structure and stone column support. It seems too that the column for the opposite side should be visable. A little light penetration from the opposite side under it may also help a bit. Keep up the goog work

12-03-2003, 12:36 AM	#9
fabrizzzio The Dr. Gonzo Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Misiones, Argentina Posts: 182 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Nice image. I think that the edges maybe could be more rusty (stones and metals). And remember: where the sun hits with light is different that where there is in shadows. For example, the color of the metal is pale because the sunlight affects directly the paint. You could add some irregularity, so the things won't be so predictable. __________________ ----------------------------------------- "Anyone who has never made a mistake has never tried anything new. (Albert Einstein)" ...Croma Studio

12-03-2003, 06:38 AM	#10
Zytrex I am mad, you know. Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 207 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	That looks really good. Only two things bug me: the rocks in the center on the post and the roof of the house look kind of strange. __________________ If you had a neck and I had a hand, I'd squeeze your brain, which is your body, right out of the top of your head, which does not exist! Discuss Lighting Here Discuss Subdivision Surfaces Here Discuss Materials Here

12-03-2003, 12:38 PM	#11
3Dan Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Rio de Janeiro, Brazil Posts: 1,012 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	This scene has an impressionist tinge, all pastel tones, European Summer lighting. Perhaps a little contrast on the shadows underneath the bridge would help make it more realistic. __________________ \| My cars\| \| My radios\|

16-03-2003, 07:17 PM	#12
Mariska3d Registered User Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Netherlands Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Looks very nice, maybe some more depth of field.(background more blurry)

17-03-2003, 07:31 AM	#13
darnel25 Registered User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Jamaica, New York Posts: 24 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	really nice work.

17-03-2003, 02:55 PM	#15
Talonsblade Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: USA Posts: 21 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nice picture, keep going. There is something bugging me though, is there suposta be another set of pillers and bridge support on the other side of the bridge. I didnt see any. Just a thought. __________________ Support bactiria - its the only culture some people have.

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