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Old 16-04-2008, 01:14 PM   #1
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Cool Female Night Elf (Nudity)

Hey I am currently working on the Night Elf... need ur comments...

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Old 16-04-2008, 04:10 PM   #2
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proportions looks off to me, can you send an ortografic front image?
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Old 16-04-2008, 04:24 PM   #3
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here it is...

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Old 16-04-2008, 04:51 PM   #4
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it looks like that mainly the legs are short, they are about the same size of the torso
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Old 16-04-2008, 05:16 PM   #5
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I think the thighs are good, but the shins might need to be a smidge longer. Also I can't tell from the front on view but the feet might be too small... unless you're into that kind of thing

EDIT: yeah the feet are way too small. Usually a good measure is to make the feet as long (from heel to toe) as the forearm. Then vary a little in side depending on your preference. Try with you're own feet, it's amazing.
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Old 16-04-2008, 07:27 PM   #6
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WOW Firehazurd... thats really interesting fact... amazing... and sorry the feet of this model ARE short.. i will definitely correct them.. thax again for sharing this fact
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Old 02-05-2008, 03:00 PM   #7
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here is the update for the legs... caz there was some issue with the legs, hope u like it.. c&c are welcome



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Old 02-05-2008, 04:37 PM   #8
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its looking way better but I think you can correct the ankle part, its looking mighty skinny just try to put some more flesh in there.
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Old 02-05-2008, 05:07 PM   #9
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You have a lot of good stuff on here, and the best part is you've managed to make her pretty, which is usually the first stumbling block with these things, and shows that you have a good understanding of facial structure. However, the feet and knees are letting this one down right now. Time to dig out the reference photos and start reworking that topology where necessary.
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I Cant believe This.. MonteCristo replied on my thread, and more on that u liked it, even a bit of it... u cant imagine how excited i am.. I am one of the billion trillion fans of urs... I m so thankful to you... You have given me even more energy to do this more better way... I am trying to achieve the best, and i would need constant support from the forum members... please always support me...

xxxcubanxxx: first of all thanks for taking sometime writing on my thread... I got ur point and will update this soon...
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I Cant believe This.. MonteCristo replied on my thread, and more on that u liked it, even a bit of it... u cant imagine how excited i am.. I am one of the billion trillion fans of urs... I m so thankful to you... You have given me even more energy to do this more better way... I am trying to achieve the best, and i would need constant support from the forum members... please always support me...

xxxcubanxxx: first of all thanks for taking sometime writing on my thread... I got ur point and will update this soon...
He he he. I wish I deserved that much praise. But I'm glad you like my work, and I appreciate the sentiment.

xxxcubanxxx makes a good point about the ankles and is spot on in that regard. You may also want to take a look at the naval right now, again something wirthy of checking some reference on, you'll have no short supply of good images on the web. The belly button is not merely an oval that extrudes inward. You need to make specific reference to these things until you are comfortable with generating them by yourself.

Anyway, you certainly seem to be on the right track. I'll stop by again.
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Old 03-05-2008, 08:33 PM   #13
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DJdude: Ya thats true .. keep giving me comments...

MonteCristo:Thanks again, I have updated a bit of it, next i m going for the navel...


Updated the knee and ankle area... more update soon...

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Looking much better, keep going.
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