Steampunk/Post-Apoc Girl

[Lighter]

Needed a little break from working on my 3D projects, so I figured I'd take up the tablet once again, after years of not creating at 2D work. Lets see how this turns out.

I'm already a bit farther into the project, but I figure I'd put up shorts of progress, from start to finish, for the hell of it.

Starting with my initial sketches:

http://img367.imageshack.us/my.php?i...ketch01jz1.jpg

http://img371.imageshack.us/my.php?i...ketch05ry6.jpg

Values and shading in BW:
http://img501.imageshack.us/my.php?i...alues01eo9.jpg

No sketchlines

http://img90.imageshack.us/my.php?im...2nolinewb3.jpg

Current:

http://img397.imageshack.us/my.php?i...s03lineow3.jpg

No sketchlines

http://img183.imageshack.us/my.php?i...alues03ho9.jpg

[M_Cederstrom]

it coming along nicely Lighter, I know you are putting chartists in the hips but i think it a little to wide. Also just a suggestion if you use the attachments manager you might get more C&C. I would like to See updates.

later,

[Lighter]

Anyone have any suggestions on colors for her clothing? I'm at a loss for ideas... Color has never been my strong suit in my 2D art - I've always done work with charcoal in real life...

That said, any ideas? I like the colors overall, but some new ideas are always welcome.

And yes, I know her face is hideous... I'm hoping to fix that somehow, soon...

[Lighter]

With lines:

[pitchus]

not bad, but the way she holds the sphere at the end of her staff is weird. it looks like it has no mass at all, her fingers are just passing the surface and entering the capacity of the ball. except the thumb and pinkey.
and her left boob could be a little higher
anyway, it's nice, keep it up

[M_Cederstrom]

I like it with the line just clean up the lines a little, try not to make it to scribbley.