The Death Grind - my first short film

endi2 · 13-01-2009, 01:17 PM

My first short film downloadable and watchable at here:
http://www.etyekfilm.hu/thedeathgrind/
(Very short, very simple.)

orb3 · 16-01-2009, 04:56 AM

Intresting, although the concept is a little difficult understand. Maybe if you made it a little faster, it wold become more captivating.

Rendering and texturing quality is very good.

Psycho Mantis · 16-01-2009, 05:18 AM

absolutely love it. the sound fits so well, an i like the textures of the grinder. maybee the face needs a better texture and some tweaks on the sss. maybee a bit more blue from the tv. and if you have some time left, make the pupil resizing. the eye looks somewhat artificial to me. but anyway - what a great idea. thanks for sharing.

brianBurke · 18-01-2009, 01:39 PM

Cool look and great pacing. Nice work all around!

13-01-2009, 01:17 PM	#1
endi2 Registered User Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 1 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	The Death Grind - my first short film My first short film downloadable and watchable at here: http://www.etyekfilm.hu/thedeathgrind/ (Very short, very simple.)

16-01-2009, 04:56 AM	#2
orb3 Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Location: delhi,india Posts: 47 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	The Death Grind Intresting, although the concept is a little difficult understand. Maybe if you made it a little faster, it wold become more captivating. Rendering and texturing quality is very good. Last edited by orb3; 16-01-2009 at 04:57 AM.. Reason: Text added

16-01-2009, 05:18 AM	#3
Psycho Mantis One Man Wolfpack Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: :noitacoL Posts: 2,569 Thanks: 51 Thanked 54 Times in 47 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 10	absolutely love it. the sound fits so well, an i like the textures of the grinder. maybee the face needs a better texture and some tweaks on the sss. maybee a bit more blue from the tv. and if you have some time left, make the pupil resizing. the eye looks somewhat artificial to me. but anyway - what a great idea. thanks for sharing. __________________ Trollpost or GTFO!

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18-01-2009, 01:39 PM	#4
brianBurke Registered User Join Date: May 2006 Location: Santa Monica, CA, USA Posts: 98 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Cool look and great pacing. Nice work all around!

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