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Old 31-01-2009, 09:19 PM   #16
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looking good overall, I would work a bit on the lighting, bioshock had a really nice dark and light scheme that worked will with the fill of the game. I would also move the legs on the little sister to make it look like she is moving along with the big daddy, also make the syringe bigger like it was on the game, makes it look more dramatic. Sorry for writing so much, but I think this small tweaks can take this so much further. good luck.
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Old 31-01-2009, 09:45 PM   #17
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yep looking good,
But i agree with xxxcubanxxx.. move the legs on the siter, and work a bit on the lighting and it will look better.
Keep it up.
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Old 01-02-2009, 07:27 PM   #18
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like that non-cg look
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Old 02-02-2009, 07:46 AM   #19
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ok i tweaked the things you guys said earlier and this is what i came up with.


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Old 02-02-2009, 10:09 AM   #20
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Good work soo far, i think however the stances of the characters could be improved to look more natural. Also added details to give more depth and coolness to the environment would be good, for ex add water falls from the ceiling to resemble leaks in the city and maybe even a window showing the ocean outside.
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Old 03-02-2009, 04:52 PM   #21
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another update(modified upper post). just a few more things to do and it's done.
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Old 22-04-2009, 04:42 AM   #22
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I was wondering if it were possible to send me the Big Daddy file (3D rendering). I have the ability to send the file to a 3D printer. I wanted to make a Big Daddy replica but needed a file like the one you have.

I would appreciate any assistance you could offer me. Thanks and take care.
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Old 22-04-2009, 06:14 AM   #23
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ok, then. just give me a private message with your email adress and i'll send it to ya. but after you print it can you show me the print? just wanna see how it looks.
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Old 22-04-2009, 04:59 PM   #26
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ok, i'll send it to you, but after you print it, i wanna see how it looks
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