chris_solo - The Lonely Soldier

[chris_solo]

Here's my final entry ... I finally took time but I'm here!
I hope you'll like, good luck to all!
(thanks for support, in particular, washka, M_Cederstrom, Big Toe)
Here's a link to see the image without compression because I have compressed so much in order to upload it :http://www.christiangonnelle.fr/def.bmp

[washka]

She is...on...FIRE!
I'm not a big fan of the red points onto the down part, they attract too much the eye there and I can't see the point (Pas fait exprès pour la tournure de phrase).
I would have erased the gun, it's enormous and in comparison with the girl: the details/style are differents so my eye don't like it. (Le surombrage lui a fait perdre beaucoup de détails l'ancienne version était mieux intégrée)
A little more shadows on the inner part of the hood would have let her face come out. The mouth is really low, I would have let the hood cover it.
I like the leg, clothes and boot parts, nice job there, even the arms!
Great job man! I was thinking you couldn't go so far because time left was really short but you did it. So congratulation and good luck with your final entry! Et bonne année 2010.

[chris_solo]

thanks mate,
yes I have taken note of all your comments even if I don't agree on some but the exchange that gives food for thought ... some criticisms are justified!
so, I will try to work faster in the future because it is the key to success for me, I think.
the evolution of my style is also the key too!
I think I have given the best of myself, even if there are errors in my picture.

I will hope others artists are the same search in their own self-criticism!

so as I said always try to do better than last time!