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Hello!
Suit with a circulatory liquid, allowing to maintain very low temperatures. ![]() Full Size quality: http://vampiredghost.deviantart.com/...ging-149029140 HD video: 1. http://www.youtube.com/user/TheVampi.../4/X3SvdXbgVr8 2. http://www.youtube.com/user/TheVampi.../3/vqx7JV-P4IE
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Nice, like the look of some of the details of the suit. Is this Z Brush work?
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Thank you man
Yes, Zbrush all modeling+render, photoshop overpaint.
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I think the whole "suit" is bad just like its "face"..the vehicle(?) is too bumpy 5/1
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Zooly76 It is concept. Suit bad, were?)) I showed all details and foreshortenings, and final picture above. Bumpy? Maybe, but i like this, it is my style.
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I think the main problem with the design is none of the details appear to serve a purpose? They are just there for the sake of adding cuts and holes in zbrush.
IMO, this style of yours would benefit much more if your suit had specific function requirements . There is a time where adding hard surface details in zbrush can be very useful, but to try and do everything (Even with the new planar brushes) is bad practice and wouldn't go down well in a production pipeline. At the moment it reminds me of Bulgarov's Bioarmor suit- http://www.bulgarov.com/images/old/bioarmor.jpg The difference being he knows where to break up plates to assist movement. Hope this helps.
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Yes, our works are alike. I am inspired works of Vitaly. To my mind, all details in place, it is simple suit of character, all patterns repeat the anatomy of body. What is a problem in?) Thank you for a review
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Well, I tried
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Thank you man, pleasantly
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The pose, as with your other works, looks really stiff and uncomfortable. Like Sathe says, the details look like they are there for the sake of it. Also with this much detailing, there is too much symmetry for my liking.
Suppose your work is like marmite.
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Final concept is basic and laid out specially without symmetry. As I already wrote "To my mind, all details in place, it is simple suit of character, all patterns repeat the anatomy of body."
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Wrong - you wrote 'Suit with a circulatory liquid, allowing to maintain very low temperatures.' = not simply a 'suit'.
You should listen to others, it helps grow as an artist. You are not at a level where you can defend your design decisions just becuase you made them. It's important to listen to others when you post for comments, there are way too many people out there wondering why they are not getting hired becuase they can't back down and accept the truth, learn from it and become better artists.
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not simply a 'suit'. )) I always listen and love efficient criticism, certainly, it is necessary. Thank you.
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